Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sand]

Okay

Well first I'd like to say work on the buttons, the text was a little annoying to click, so work on that for one. Another thing I have to say is that this idea was pretty nice but the wave moving in to erase the drawing is kind of still, maybe use something that has some animation to it. I also thought this was a little too short, would have been good to see something longer.

The animations themself where okay, not too clear but they seemed to work on the sand background though maybe have some dust blowing randomly at parts too. Keep experimenting :)

1/5

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[Darfur Satire Shorts]

Great!

I am ashamed not to have read the comments the first time I saw this, I noticed that it looked simler to South Park in the first one, not a problem I thought it was very fitting to see that. The first short was pretty good, nice voice acting and everything, also some pretty funny parts though I didn't really find it all that funny in some ways.

The second one in my opinion was my favourite, it was animated well and good graphics, also some good voice acting and everything. The last part of it made it the funniest of the two of them in my opinion. Though the Veto part of the first one was good too. So they both had good points to them, so good job on both of them!

5/5

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[Godzillas Depression]

Needs Work

There's a lot of work that you could do to improve on this flash, for one thing I would suggest only using one form on animation, not mixing sprites with drawing. Another thing I noticed is you have some very odd movements in this, you don't seem to use a jump sprite but more just tweening a still image, it doesn't really look good when you do that.

The text was badly spelt and very inconsistant in terms of style, keep with one font and try to keep the same size and make sure it's spelt a little better, I don't mind seeing some errors but a "Y" for "Why" just looks very lazy to me. You could work on some small things too, like why do his arms just strech so far out, most of it doesn't make much sense.

Sorry but you really have a long way to go, the sound was probably the best thing about this flash, though really that didn't fit in all that well either, keep practicing though.

1/5

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[Stan and Joe Shorts 1]

Alright

Well the menu was good although I would suggest putting a "Play Short 1" and "Play Short 2" on the menu in someway, just incase someone wants to come back to it and want to watch one of those. The voice acting was okay in most parts although some of it seemed a little jumpy, decent enought to hear though which is okay.

Animation and graphics where pretty nice too, although I would maybe suggest in the second short the breathing thing, just animate the chest as oppose to the whole top half because taking deep breaths he seemed to be getting fatter and then normal. But otherwise, pretty nice work.

4/5

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[A piece of puke]

Funny Short

Well it was pretty short, so making it longer might have been a little better though I can't see what you could have added. But other than that, the animation here was nice and smooth as well as the graphics, much better than what I was expecting at first that's for sure. The sound effects where good and everything, clear to hear and watch.

The filesize is also very nice, though I didn't expect it to be big for something short like this. The main thing I would want to see is something a little longer but none the less, it's still very good work.

4/5

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[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Umm Okay

Well it was certainly very random, though I can't say it's really a good thing I mean the flash itself didn't really sound too much like it has a plot and nothing much really happens. Try working with a story that will keep the viewers intrested in what is going to happen and try to either make it longer or have something more happen other than what happend here.

The graphics where so-so, I mean some of the objects looked pretty good but others not so and some of the animation was kind of eh, the animated bong seemed to be kind of pointless and not really needed. Keep working at it though.

2/5

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks

[News Reporter III]

Okay

Well the graphics for this could still be improved, also it's intresting how you have also used some of your past charactors in the background through the window. The story is a little diffrent to what I expected but still pretty good, the last part about dying and coming back didn't really seem to be needed in my opinion.

The sound was decent and the voice acting was also pretty good too, although I think you went a bit off on the first line of News Reporters, but the rest sounded like him, so that's all good. Also, first time I've been mentioned in anyones credits, thanks ;P

3/5

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kinggila responds:

You're welcome. :)

[The Fairy Future Mother]

Alright

The main story to this seemed pretty good and the voice acting was nice too although the voice of the fairy seemed to be a little quiet at times, it was still alright. Some of the graphics here could have been a little better, so you might want to work on them and the smoke coming from the fairys fag seems to be a little fake, maybe work on more realistic smoke.

It's really only the graphics here that bugs me in parts, but some of them are pretty good too, the story is decent so yeah, pretty decent work on this one, just keep practicing and everything.

3/5

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[CandyHolics]

Alright

The first thing I must say is the cursor is annoying for the main flash part, a smaller one would have been better and the menu could do with a little work, though it does do it's job. As for the main flash itself, some of the animation is okay and other bits a little jerky, some pretty decent graphics and story.

The voice acting is pretty good too, although some of it is a little crackly, so that could be worked on and the parts where text shows is too fast, fade it out at times maybe. Overall though, a pretty decent flash, it's the story that counts more than anything.

3/5

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Bahamut's Newgrounds]

Alright

Well to be honest I'm not really into the whole "My Newgrounds" flash, though this is diffrent from the others in the way that it has voices and isn't a video, so I guess that's a good thing. There's not too much I can comment on since it's pretty much about what you do, although it is in a simler style to the others, I think it would have helped to draw the desk with a little more detail, looks too flat.

Most other things are okay, some decent animations and graphics though some not so, but I guess this was more about the talking which was clear and pretty good although some pauses. Eh, but really the desk needs a touch more work.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

Funny, because recently, I have been thinking about an improved desk and I should make a better design of one. :)