Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Halloweenator]

Nice Work

This was a pretty good flash to watch, though the main introduction with everything seemed to go on for a while. The actual flash itself was good, nice work to the voice actors, they seemed to sound very good with this flash and such, the art work was also pretty nice too and some decent lip movement in this, though the teeth of the Terminator or whatever you call him seemed funny, lol.

The ending didn't really work with the traced bitmap though, it could have looks a little better, maybe from a direct over head view or something, but otherwise overall, this was a nice flash to watch, pretty funny and a good story to it, nice work.

5/5

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
I will never use traced work again. It always seemed like a good idea at the time, but when it's all done it feels like cheating.

[Andersson's Birthday]

Alright

Well I have to say I kind of like the simple looking background, it kind of work in this, though it didn't change a lot, but being short would really expect it to work all that well. The main plot was kind of eh, but it did in a way kind of fit well, don't really get the point of the last bit, maybe a joke I'm kind of missing at this point.

The voice acting was done pretty well for most part, though still some work could be done on the charactor desigin and such, but for most part this did work pretty well, so good job on it.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

Thanks.

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[Love You]

Umm Intresting

That was a pretty intresting short, didn't really get what the main point was, it didn't make all too much sense. The sound was good, but the large opening of nothing showing was kind of, odd too. It didn't really make all to much sense on a whole, so yeah that's what makes it kind of intresting, maybe if the opening had some sort of flash back it would have made more sense.

The backgrounds where drawn pretty well, although the image at the end seems kind of eh. The drawing of the person could be improved a little to, but otherwise it did kind of work, just a little odd on a whole.

3/5

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thank you for the review.

[A Weird Day at College]

Hmm, Alright

There where parts of this that where pretty amusing but using references to including something in a later flash or coming back to life in a later flash in my opinion should be left out, they don't really needed to be mentioned. Also, you might need to have a diffrent method of thinking since the arrow moving indicates talking, maybe even just a diffrent colour of arrow.

The story itself was pretty good, there where moments where it could have been a little better but for the most part it seemed to work really well. The ending was a little eh though, maybe he should have just been thinking about what to report as oppose to saying it. Some improvments could be made but mostly decent.

4/5

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kinggila responds:

"Also, you might need to have a diffrent method of thinking since the arrow moving indicates talking, maybe even just a diffrent colour of arrow."

There may be something in the future, but it depends. We'll just have to see. :)

Still, thanks for reviewing Little-Rena.

[I Am One]

Very Good

This is very well animated, some good work with this, nice art and everything. Though you have some white backgrounds in this, which personally I don't like, you have the talent to draw some as you have shown so it would be good to see them through the whole flash. The music is good and very fitting to your animation, though it goes on past the ending, you might have wanted to make the animation a little longer to fit with that, it would have been nice.

Other than the lack of backgrounds in parts and the music over running, this was very good and well done, so nice job overall with this. There's nothing more I can see that's bad, everything is nice, even the preloader, lol. Keep up the good work.

5/5

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MrGUS responds:

Thank you, and still thanks alot for the love for my preloader, when I first posted it no one metioned it so I forgot about it and didn't use it on my last one. I know it overruns, but I love how the words I am one, sync with the song at the end.. and I guess we have a bit of a crash with my love for a white background and your hate for it... I'll count on you to tell me about it every time I use in an unecesary way... (most of the time), but then again I will probably still be too tempted to use it .

Thank you for your review,

Gustavo M.

[A Shot to Remember]

Alright

It was pretty decent, the preloader and intro where also pretty nice too, they where amusing, lol. Anyway, the actual flash was pretty well done at the start but then you started to lack backgrounds, it would have been good if some of the backgrounds wheren't just plain white if you get what I mean. Also there was a part where it was a little out of sync with the music, where you had text unless you ment it to be like that.

It was a little short but I don't mind about that, I've seen shorter flash. The animation and art was good for most part but there where parts as I said that could be done. The sound was pretty clear and everything, so that's good. Pretty nice overall.

3/5

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MrGUS responds:

Thank you, I will check what you said about the sync, and I love the feedback about the preloader I almost forgot I did that, I'll keep adjusting it. I know sometimes I tend to use white backgrounds... I'm not sure why, but I'll make a conscious effort to use it a bit less.

Thank you for your review,

Gustavo M.

[Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer]

Alright

First thing that bugs me is the file size for a trailer, I mean a smaller size would mean more people are likly to watch which is the point of a trailer, to attract an audiance before you release the final version. Don't use music on the preloader, that just adds to the size, also stream the main music, that would help too. I also have a problem with the ending, you have the "Replay" button written in a symbol font till you hover over, that in my opinion is a bad idea.

The actual animation of the sprites themselfs is pretty good and the sound effects are good too. Though where you have text at the start, put it in a little box with the image of the speaker, it makes it look a lot neater and easier to read. Can't see what more you could change, you seem to have taken parts for your flash that you are working on in this I would guess, so they seem to be the more actionish parts.

2/5

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knuxrouge responds:

I said in the authors comments that nothing in the trailer was ripped from the actual chapter.

[Machina Humana]

Intresting

It's certainly quite an intresting flash, I have to say that. Though it doesn't really seem to make too much sense when just watching it alone, a solid plot with the main animation might help the viewer to work out what's going on. But that aside, the animation to this was done pretty well, though there are parts where it seems like it's a little odd or needless animation.

The music was fine, though some sound effects in parts would have been good too, the music did fit with this but I have to say, sound effects would have been good, they would kind of add a little more to it in my opinion. But other than that, this seems to have been done pretty well.

4/5

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MrGUS responds:

Thanks for the pragmatic review, I did realize how it could seem a bit too wierd.. specially since at first I didn't even translate the spanish part... but well I wrote quite a long description for anyone who was really curious.. I'll try to make the animations a bit more selfexplanatory though.

Thank you for your review,

Gustavo M.

[TheMostBeautifulDrawings]

ROFL

The menu was decent to start with and then the selections too, so that was good and the text introducing to each part was well drawn too. The comments on the art where all pretty funny. Although it actually took a few before it started to become funny, though it was funny, at first it wasn't though. Eitherway, I get that the drawings are bad, but it's the comments that make this funny, not the drawings.

The audio is good, works quite well with everything, though some sound effects would have been good, animal noises or something related. Maybe even some poor voice acting for fun, lol. Eitherway, it was certainly better and funnier than I thought it would be, been a while since I've seen a silly flash that's made me laugh.

5/5

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Graeme responds:

I actually has a few sound effects. Like when the cow came up it mooed. And when the chicken came up it clucked (or w/e you would call a chicken noise)
But, my problem with that was that something like a rabbit doesn't really have a sound effect. I had trouble trying to find something for eveything.

I would have voiced over my comments, but believe me, my voice isn't exciting enough to have to listen to for all the comments made. I feel it would have taken away from the movie.

Thanks for the review, glad I could make you smile :D

[Tangerine Madness!]

Hmm

It was pretty good, some of the animation was decent although the graphics could be improved a little, maybe some shading of grey if you want to keep it with little colour, just to add some depth to it. The music I didn't think really went with the theme of this, so that could have been picked a little better, although you have an option to turn it off, it would be best to have some background sound kept.

Some other background objects like a bin and tree might have been good too. The idea is good yes, but kind of let down by the music and the slow opening. Could have been a little faster for the waiting part, that kind of made me lose intrest. But otherwise, good.

3/5

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for your review! I have to remember to complement my stuff from now on with background objects, thanks!