Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Halloweenator]

Nice Work

This was a pretty good flash to watch, though the main introduction with everything seemed to go on for a while. The actual flash itself was good, nice work to the voice actors, they seemed to sound very good with this flash and such, the art work was also pretty nice too and some decent lip movement in this, though the teeth of the Terminator or whatever you call him seemed funny, lol.

The ending didn't really work with the traced bitmap though, it could have looks a little better, maybe from a direct over head view or something, but otherwise overall, this was a nice flash to watch, pretty funny and a good story to it, nice work.

5/5

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
I will never use traced work again. It always seemed like a good idea at the time, but when it's all done it feels like cheating.

[Love You]

Umm Intresting

That was a pretty intresting short, didn't really get what the main point was, it didn't make all too much sense. The sound was good, but the large opening of nothing showing was kind of, odd too. It didn't really make all to much sense on a whole, so yeah that's what makes it kind of intresting, maybe if the opening had some sort of flash back it would have made more sense.

The backgrounds where drawn pretty well, although the image at the end seems kind of eh. The drawing of the person could be improved a little to, but otherwise it did kind of work, just a little odd on a whole.

3/5

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thank you for the review.

[Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer]

Alright

First thing that bugs me is the file size for a trailer, I mean a smaller size would mean more people are likly to watch which is the point of a trailer, to attract an audiance before you release the final version. Don't use music on the preloader, that just adds to the size, also stream the main music, that would help too. I also have a problem with the ending, you have the "Replay" button written in a symbol font till you hover over, that in my opinion is a bad idea.

The actual animation of the sprites themselfs is pretty good and the sound effects are good too. Though where you have text at the start, put it in a little box with the image of the speaker, it makes it look a lot neater and easier to read. Can't see what more you could change, you seem to have taken parts for your flash that you are working on in this I would guess, so they seem to be the more actionish parts.

2/5

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knuxrouge responds:

I said in the authors comments that nothing in the trailer was ripped from the actual chapter.

[TheMostBeautifulDrawings]

ROFL

The menu was decent to start with and then the selections too, so that was good and the text introducing to each part was well drawn too. The comments on the art where all pretty funny. Although it actually took a few before it started to become funny, though it was funny, at first it wasn't though. Eitherway, I get that the drawings are bad, but it's the comments that make this funny, not the drawings.

The audio is good, works quite well with everything, though some sound effects would have been good, animal noises or something related. Maybe even some poor voice acting for fun, lol. Eitherway, it was certainly better and funnier than I thought it would be, been a while since I've seen a silly flash that's made me laugh.

5/5

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Graeme responds:

I actually has a few sound effects. Like when the cow came up it mooed. And when the chicken came up it clucked (or w/e you would call a chicken noise)
But, my problem with that was that something like a rabbit doesn't really have a sound effect. I had trouble trying to find something for eveything.

I would have voiced over my comments, but believe me, my voice isn't exciting enough to have to listen to for all the comments made. I feel it would have taken away from the movie.

Thanks for the review, glad I could make you smile :D

[Tangerine Madness!]

Hmm

It was pretty good, some of the animation was decent although the graphics could be improved a little, maybe some shading of grey if you want to keep it with little colour, just to add some depth to it. The music I didn't think really went with the theme of this, so that could have been picked a little better, although you have an option to turn it off, it would be best to have some background sound kept.

Some other background objects like a bin and tree might have been good too. The idea is good yes, but kind of let down by the music and the slow opening. Could have been a little faster for the waiting part, that kind of made me lose intrest. But otherwise, good.

3/5

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for your review! I have to remember to complement my stuff from now on with background objects, thanks!