Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luigi the janitor]

Pretty Silly

This seems somewhat silly, I mean it's okay if people like this kind of story and sprites, although the story is a little short, you could make it somewhat longer and make a few more things happen. As well as the sprites, the stage is a little small and the sprites are kind of weirdly added.

The gun was far too big, maybe draw your own gun in flash and use that, the blood could also be a little more realisitic. The sound effects where okay though not very consistant with the scream and the whole theme of characters. Also the text, I'd suggest putting it in speech bubbles so it is easy to read and you don't have to look too hard to be able to see it.

Good luck with future flash and keep trying.

2/5

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[Textual Adventures III]

Alright

Well I have to say this wasn't too good, the animation of the sun could be much better and the background seems very lacking as well as much of it just seeming to be very random. Nothing seems to fit very well and the whole plot is kind of eh, could work on the story a little and the backgrounds.

I don't see too much wrong with having text as characters if that's what you want to go for but the other graphics could be improved a little. It would also be nice to hear some music or some form of sound all through the flash and maybe improve the way the text is presented.

1/5

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Knuxrouge's Newgrounds]

Not Great

I don't really think this is very well presented, it's very diffrent from many of the other "My Newgrounds" flash I will say, but really it could do with so much more. The whole stage is just 4 sprites and no real background, there isn't anything to watch other than the text.

I would suggest having some backgrounds, switching from character to character on screen and giving something to watch, otherwise it can just come across as long and unintresting. Try to add something the viewer can look at and enjoy, also voices would be good to have, maybe get a voice actor for some.

The idea of being diffrent from the others is good but the way you have presented it, in my view could really be improved. Good luck in future.

1/5

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knuxrouge responds:

Well, in the term of flash and substance, I wasn't opting to impress anyone.
It was meant to be funny, cut and dried.
Too bad you didn't like for alot of people did.

[Shared joy is double joy]

Intresting

This didn't really seem to make a lot of sense, so I would suggest probably making a flash that has some direction to it, this just seemed pretty random. Although the animation was very nice and smooth, also the colours where nice. The way it ended I thought was pretty clever.

But really, the animation itself didn't make a great deal of sense, probably what you where aiming for. Eheh, I guess some people might find this funny too but sadly I didn't really, though I could see what the main joke was. Still, good animation, just lacks direction.

3/5

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[One Cowgasmic Christmas]

Silly Short

That was kind of a silly little short, it was pretty simple in terms of looks and some work could be done on the animation in parts, the simple art is okay though. The sound was good although there was a part which sounded a little poor, but eh.

The fact that this seemed to be building up to a large action scene and then didn't was in someway a let down but also that was the silly part of the flash. It would have been nicer if it was a little longer because it did seem a little short. Still, pretty decent though some things do need work. Leep working at it!

4/5

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Imacow responds:

Thanks

[Sherlock Holmes Christmas]

Okay

The backgrounds here where drawn pretty well but you might want to work on the drawing of the people and some of the animation, but they where pretty good. The voice acting could be better in parts, it was a little quiet overall and some of them seemed to lack much depth, the jokes might have been a little funnier if you had a little more emotion in the voice acting.

The story was okay as a whole, though maybe a little too many sex jokes, a few is okay but maybe you went a little over the top, use a mix of jokes as oppose to a majority of one. But keep working at it :)

4/5

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[PicoDay: PathwayThroughNG]

Alright

Well the graphics where good and fit the style of the flash you where including in this but I feel from the start you did miss a lot about the main plot, although you mentioned part, it really didn't seem to fill it in and everything just seemed to run on for too long, maybe use less parts in your flash, just to keep some people a little more intrested.

Although some of the graphics where a little off, they where okay and the sound was also good as well as the voice acting, pretty good job on the peice, keep it up.

4/5

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[Madness: PathwayThroughNG]

Alright

Well the graphics where good in most parts and the animation was also pretty decent, though some of it could do with some work on it. I do like the fact that you redrew the Madness charector as oppose to using sprites, the voice acting was also good for most parts, so nice work on that.

My only major concern is that to me it just seemed to go on and on, it didn't get the the point very fast and after a while it just became a little dull to stay intrested. Maybe try some diffrent humour thoughtout and such, I know you tried by changing location but to me, that just didn't work. Pretty good other than that though.

4/5

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swiftstylerX responds:

I agree with everything you said. Which is why the next one is going to be SOOO much better than this. Thanks for the review!