Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LOVEBLIMP]

Okay

It didn't really have too much going on and the animation wasn't all that adventurous to start with. The menu was okay, simple and easy to use, the graphics where pretty decent too although there could have been more maybe clouds or something. Some explosion effects too, the movement of the blimps was pretty good though.

The music was good, and the sound, but I just couldn't really see the text fitting in all that well. It did work as showing what it was about but maybe it could have been done a little diffrent, not sure how. The movement of the blimps was slow but I would expect that, so that's okay. On a whole, it was kind of short and didn't have too much happening, expanding would have been nice.

3/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, this animation is far from a masterpiece, and if I did make it again, I'd probably change so many things. Your comments were very helpful, I appreciate it a lot. ^_^

[The Orange Flash Box]

Amazing

Though I've yet to play any of the game because I'm kind of lazy like that, I still thought this flash was good. The graphics where very nice and the animation was also good, though at times some of the hands looked odd and somethings too. But otherwise, good. The sounds and music where good, all fit in well, also the voice acting was pretty nice too.

The silly humour was good too, especilly the Team Fortress part, in my opinion that was the better of them. In your description you say you have a sound sync problem, have you tried putting the audio into a movieclip and streaming it through the movieclip? Eh, well otherwise good job.

PS what did you make this with? Tell me please! (lol, credit comments :3)

5/5

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[The Narrator's Love Story]

Okay

Well it was pretty decent, the story mostly, I mean the graphics could do with some adjustments, such as the breasts on the girls, they seemed a little too far up, lol. Also the walking could be a little better at the end. Some of the animation was good, but other parts where a little so-so.

The voice acting was eh, I mean it was clear in most parts but some of it just didn't seem to work with the situation, so those could be worked on. The subtitles where a decent addition to this, also the menu and such looked pretty smooth. But it would have been a good idea for the cursor to have been hidden in the main flash. Otherwise pretty nice though.

4/5

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Ok, and for the girls....Eh first time with animating with female characters trying to look somewhat attractive, but thanks for the feedback I'll work on those areas.

[Fat, bald soccer player]

Lol, Good

That was a pretty decent flash, some of the animation looked a little slow though so it would be good to see a little faster movement maybe. But it's certainly well animated and the colours are good too. I like the idea to this, at first you wouldn't really expect the ending, so that's really good to see. The sound is good and very fitting with the theme in my opinion.

Can't really see much to improve on other than some of the animation speed, everything just seems to work really well with this and it's got some very good humour to it. Very nice work on this one.

5/5

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Pepeto responds:

Hehe, thank you <3

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

Intresting

This is a pretty intresting flash, I like most of the animation here, the style looks pretty good and it kind of works. Though it's kind of confusing in some parts, other parts it makes some sense, the ending is kind of odd too. The music is kind of poor quality, so you might want to make that a little better, export at a higher setting maybe?

The easter egg is kind of hard to get, since it doesn't show for that long, which means you have to pause it, maybe make that scene a little longer. The easter egg itself was okay, not really any animation but it was kind of funny to listen to and read. Pretty good work alround, keep it up.

3/5

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Ying-yong responds:

thankss.

the mic is old, i'll get a new one.

[Droids Vs Aliens]

Hmm, Okay

Well the animation to this seemed to be pretty good, mostly smooth although some parts of it where it little jerky and some lines on the side at parts. The preloader was kind of eh, it could have looked better but it work as does the replay button. The sound quality seems a little bad, you should try exporting at higher quality next time.

The flash itself seemed to be very short and had a random story line, it didn't make too much sense and seeing what was going on was quite hard. Should try to work on making it easy to tell why things are happening and maybe making it longer.

2/5

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Graeme responds:

It does some to just jump into things doesn't it.
There never was supposed to be a plot. Just aliens fighting droids. I suppose I could have done a better job laying out what was going on. Haha
My preloader was a little boring, and a little sloppy too. That was one thing I never though about, and I think your the first to point it out. Maybe some kind of stop motion loop would have been a nice background