Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LOVEBLIMP]

Okay

It didn't really have too much going on and the animation wasn't all that adventurous to start with. The menu was okay, simple and easy to use, the graphics where pretty decent too although there could have been more maybe clouds or something. Some explosion effects too, the movement of the blimps was pretty good though.

The music was good, and the sound, but I just couldn't really see the text fitting in all that well. It did work as showing what it was about but maybe it could have been done a little diffrent, not sure how. The movement of the blimps was slow but I would expect that, so that's okay. On a whole, it was kind of short and didn't have too much happening, expanding would have been nice.

3/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, this animation is far from a masterpiece, and if I did make it again, I'd probably change so many things. Your comments were very helpful, I appreciate it a lot. ^_^

[The Orange Flash Box]

Amazing

Though I've yet to play any of the game because I'm kind of lazy like that, I still thought this flash was good. The graphics where very nice and the animation was also good, though at times some of the hands looked odd and somethings too. But otherwise, good. The sounds and music where good, all fit in well, also the voice acting was pretty nice too.

The silly humour was good too, especilly the Team Fortress part, in my opinion that was the better of them. In your description you say you have a sound sync problem, have you tried putting the audio into a movieclip and streaming it through the movieclip? Eh, well otherwise good job.

PS what did you make this with? Tell me please! (lol, credit comments :3)

5/5

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[The Narrator's Love Story]

Okay

Well it was pretty decent, the story mostly, I mean the graphics could do with some adjustments, such as the breasts on the girls, they seemed a little too far up, lol. Also the walking could be a little better at the end. Some of the animation was good, but other parts where a little so-so.

The voice acting was eh, I mean it was clear in most parts but some of it just didn't seem to work with the situation, so those could be worked on. The subtitles where a decent addition to this, also the menu and such looked pretty smooth. But it would have been a good idea for the cursor to have been hidden in the main flash. Otherwise pretty nice though.

4/5

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Ok, and for the girls....Eh first time with animating with female characters trying to look somewhat attractive, but thanks for the feedback I'll work on those areas.

[Cow in Submarine]

Hehe

That was kind of silly for the ending part, didn't really see it coming at first though after a while you could guess something like that would happen. The art here was pretty good, the sound was good too, worked very well with what you did so you pulled it off pretty well. The animation of the Submarine could have been a little better though, I mean I thought it was moving a little too fast, lol.

But otherwise, everything was pretty nice, didn't go on for too long and it wasn't too short either, so good job with that. The ending was also pretty funny too. Good job :)

4/5

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Imacow responds:

Thanks

[Fat, bald soccer player]

Lol, Good

That was a pretty decent flash, some of the animation looked a little slow though so it would be good to see a little faster movement maybe. But it's certainly well animated and the colours are good too. I like the idea to this, at first you wouldn't really expect the ending, so that's really good to see. The sound is good and very fitting with the theme in my opinion.

Can't really see much to improve on other than some of the animation speed, everything just seems to work really well with this and it's got some very good humour to it. Very nice work on this one.

5/5

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Pepeto responds:

Hehe, thank you <3

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

Intresting

This is a pretty intresting flash, I like most of the animation here, the style looks pretty good and it kind of works. Though it's kind of confusing in some parts, other parts it makes some sense, the ending is kind of odd too. The music is kind of poor quality, so you might want to make that a little better, export at a higher setting maybe?

The easter egg is kind of hard to get, since it doesn't show for that long, which means you have to pause it, maybe make that scene a little longer. The easter egg itself was okay, not really any animation but it was kind of funny to listen to and read. Pretty good work alround, keep it up.

3/5

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Ying-yong responds:

thankss.

the mic is old, i'll get a new one.

[Happy Censorship Day!]

Intresting

It's an intresting idea to have the words change to something else but there is a part of it that seems a little odd, I mean going through the words was kind of eh, might have been worth the time to try and work as many into the script as possible. Also it was only ever at the same place, some change in background would have been decent and that would allow the story to go off to allow a wide range of words.

Some of the graphics could improve too, like shading and such, but otherwise some decent voice acting and a decent idea for a story, I just think it could have been better expanded.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I could have added them to a sentence, but meh.

[Droids Vs Aliens]

Hmm, Okay

Well the animation to this seemed to be pretty good, mostly smooth although some parts of it where it little jerky and some lines on the side at parts. The preloader was kind of eh, it could have looked better but it work as does the replay button. The sound quality seems a little bad, you should try exporting at higher quality next time.

The flash itself seemed to be very short and had a random story line, it didn't make too much sense and seeing what was going on was quite hard. Should try to work on making it easy to tell why things are happening and maybe making it longer.

2/5

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Graeme responds:

It does some to just jump into things doesn't it.
There never was supposed to be a plot. Just aliens fighting droids. I suppose I could have done a better job laying out what was going on. Haha
My preloader was a little boring, and a little sloppy too. That was one thing I never though about, and I think your the first to point it out. Maybe some kind of stop motion loop would have been a nice background

[Inward Singing]

Love it :3

I think this is really well done and everything, though I've not heard much Tenacious D stuff, I've heard a little which was good. But onto the flash, the sound is good and easy to hear which good. And the song on the credits is good though it didn't show any names for me, lol, something go wrong there?

Anyway, the artwork here is also good as is most of the animation, though there are some parts in this where it seems to be a little odd and the change in art. Though most of the time it seemed to work well and it did fit in with the song and the talking, so good job on that. Infact, nice work alround :)

5/5

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MichaFrario responds:

Thanks alot! ^_^But...What do you mean by the names?
Also the only big change is the chibi thing, which was a returning joke from "Dio"

oh, and Haruhi kicks ass. can't wait for season 2! You rock!

[BlueHippo's a BBS mod! :0]

Alright

Alright well the story here is decent though it seems a little short, that might be because a lot of it seemed like talking out the ban message, it would have been better just to mumble the first bit then read the ban message and maybe zoom in on BlueHippos name in a shocked sense, that's if you would be shocked about it, lol.

The graphics are still so so, the computer I would suggest using grey and shades of to give it some dimension to it and Wade looks a little, strange, dunno just something about him there. The voice acting was clear though, so that's good.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I know, Wade's hair looks like an afro. XD