Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 4]

Haha

Well to start that actually just looked like it was going to be another flash about pong, which it was in a way but took a diffrent approce to what I have seen before which is good. Although the outline of the players in this could be a little better and some shading on them would have helped, that didn't effect the actual flash for me.

Although it was short, it was still quite entertaining, so that's really good, the ending was somewhat unexpected and pretty funny, though the funniest part was the score change, no idea why, lol. So pretty good with this, could improve on graphics in some ways, but otherwise, nice.

4/5

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Jimtopia responds:

I'm glad you thought it was funny; and thanks for reviewing!

[The Burgaler's Warning]

Okay

The story and humour here is probably the best part about this though it does seem a little odd and maybe draged on in parts, still not too bad to listen to, the voice acting is pretty good and clear also the sounds and music fit in to, so good choice with that.

The graphics and animation here could be improved a lot, the grey lines although do show an outline do kind of make the image look worse and viewing the person from the back when talking all the time looks a little lazy, some basic lip movements would add diversity in parts, not saying you can't view from the back but maybe not for all the time. Also, the notes came from above but there is no window, inconsistant, lol.

Keep working at it though, the story isn't too bad, just the graphics, but practice is all you really need :)

2/5

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demoninabottle responds:

thanks bro

[Ah - It's Halloween]

Pretty Neat

I thought the story to this was pretty good and some of the humour here was also nice although you still need to work on the graphics and the animation, that would make the flash look much better if you can keep working on that. But the sound is good and the background music makes it not seem empty, so you don't get bored of this also the voices where clear.

So overall, you have a nice plot to it and good quality sound, but it's just the animation and drawings you need to work on more than anything. I did like the intro here too, although it's the same as all of your intros, it's nice. And a late happy halloween.

4/5

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kinggila responds:

Yeah, drawings and animation. I'm trying to improve it on my Christmas flash. And my intro, yeah, it's the same one, but hey, if it ain't broke, don't fix it. Thanks for the review Little-Rena. :)

[The RRC-Reviewers Collab]

Pretty Neat

I thought the idea of this was very good, for a bunch of members who review flash to get together and make a collab, I also think that each parts links well and the music does fit in with the flash. The ending wasn't too expected but pretty cool though a voice actor would have made it a little better in some way.

As with most collabs, the style differs from part to part, but I don't think there was any that stood out as being the best or worst here, they had flow with each other and the menu for this was nice, though some of the animation and art could be improved a little, it's more that idea that got me here. A nice collab and fitting sound, good job.

4/5

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Imacow responds:

Thanks for the review. Yea I could have done a VA for it but I didn't bother to.

[Hapy Clok Day]

Hmm

Well it got the message through that it was clockday and everything but I don't really think it had much going on here, you did have a picture, some text and some music, the music was pretty muffled so that didn't sound too good, the picture was a little streched and the text could have looked better.

It would have been great if you had some animation here, even if it was something like the clock ticking, just anything that would add to this. Can't really say too much more on this and I can't say it was that good either. Happy late clock day though.

1/5

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Snowman responds:

tell ya the truth... this was my first flash eva!!! thats why it sucked ass...

[Dumbledore is Gay]

Very Silly

This was a very silly flash indeed, though somewhat amusing I must say, this has been going around for a long time, so to see a decent flash about it is kind of intresting. The sound was pretty good here and the lip sync though I do think some of the animation here could be improved a little, like the way they walk and such, but everything else was alright.

The ending was diffrent, I did expect to see something else, but yeah, almost unexpected. But I did like the very end with the report, that was pretty clever and well layed out. So overall, a pretty decent flash to say the least :)

4/5

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RSQViper responds:

haha, silly indeed.

The walking was more of a bouncing slide, but this was just a little project I did so I didn't want to put in any needless animation when I can still make it look ok in another way.

Glad you liked the report, too. I actually wrote some funny things there (I think) if people pause and read it.

Thanks for the cool review!

[NG conspiracy: View Gems!]

Gems!

Well I do remember this topic that's for sure, though I haven't checked it in a while so maybe I should. Anyway, about the flash, the idea seems pretty good though the intro for it went on for a while and the background was a little annoying, could have had some change to it or been somthing flat that changed with each scene. The voices in the intro could have been a little louder, they where hard to hear, the computer voices where okay though, very clear.

I do miss the gems though, they where pretty nice, so close to a 50k one, but they where removed, sucks. Ah well, just keep working on your graphics and voice acting :)

5/5

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IZSBHR responds:

<3 right back atcha.

[Mastermind]

Haha

At first for a moment I thought this flash was going to have a serious theme to it and some subtle bickering between the henchmen but it wasn't after a moment, it became funnier thougout, although I was a little unsure of the humour at first because it just seemed a little crude but it was alright after a while with the diolog, that's what really made it.

The art and animation in this was great as well as the voice acting, all really good, can't fault those and it's also nice to see other forms of animation from you, nice to see what you can do and other humour you can use. Very childish but also very good, I really liked this :)

I look forward to seeing more.

5/5

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[Lemon Demon's "Bad Idea"]

Neat flash

I really like this flash, the smooth animation is good and the choice of song is also really good, very much in the theme and eveything. The animation fit perfectly with the song, so that makes this really good and how everything fit together, it almost made the song into a story as well. I can't really see anything wrong here, other than parts of the song sounded off but that's nothing to do with the animation.

Nice quality and nice colours here, it's better than the last flash I saw from you but then that one was from years ago, so yes. This one is really good, I like it a lot so good job and I can't wait to see more from you guys :)

5/5

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[Edible Castle #3]

Haha

Very funny flash here, I liked the opening and the random plot to this, humour was also good although a little twisted in someway, I guess that's what made it funnier. Well it was good to watch and pretty funny, like that last two only I think this one was a little more unexpected in terms of the ending, which is good.

Animation and artwork here are also both great, simple colours that are plesent to look at and work with the animation. Also nice voice acting, that really adds to the humour of this flash and makes it somthing worth watching. I also like that small filesize, lol.

Good job on this, can't wait to see the forth :)

5/5

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