Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adventures of Matt L.]

Unsure

I'm not quite sure what to make of this flash, parts of it did seem kind of amusing but other parts where not so. Some of the sounds where also kind of annoying and hard to listen to, fix the quality of some and many of the screeming ones I wouldn't use, they are really harsh to listen to. The graphics where very diffrent through the whole animation, some where good and others where bad though I can see that was done for a reason.

The whole plot just seemed kind of random though and had no real direction to it, of course it does kind of work but I think it's ruined by the parts that have high pitched noises, I can get over the flashing lights because those in a way fit in. Some of the voices where pretty good to, but others not so, so it's really kind of spilt.

2/5

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[MZ's G&W Collab Parts]

Needs Work

The music to start with didn't sound the best of quality, it kind of sounded like you recorded it from a player to your PC, try to have the music file on your PC and import it to flash as oppose to recording it, also the music cut short of the end of the flash, which wasn't too good, should have lasted the whole length.

The animation, well parts of it where okay but other parts seem to be rough or badly drawn, you need to put a little more time into them. The idea was pretty random to, it didn't really seem to have any direction. The length I can understand the kind of shortness to it because it was part of a collab originally, still you could have edited this version a little.

1/5

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McZero responds:

Sorry, Yeah I know I SUCK ;_;

[Yotsubato!]

Ah Yotsuba&!

I haven't read the manga in quite sometime now but I do remember reading the one this is based on, though only slightly so I can't remember how accurate this is, maybe you could say, it would save me looking it up, lol.

It's pretty short and fast paced, not really a problem though if it was a little longer it would be nice, it is also pretty funny though maybe if the last part was done a touch slower it would be more so. The graphics are pretty poor but at the same time pretty nice looking, they could be improved a touch though.

But overall, not to bad, the audio was clear and everything else looked good, I would like to see a longer Yotsuba&! animation though, I think that would be good :3

5/5

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Skaijo responds:

Thanks for the kind words. The animation is pretty accurate to the manga--panel for panel up until the very last line. <3 I figured it would just be a silly way to end it.

Yeah, the graphical quality was turned way down as I never really expected to turn this into Newgrounds but just show it to a very few friends who'd get the joke. I got up the nerve to share some of my shorts here on this site though, Yotsubato! including.

I do need to work on making better links though.

There actually is an extended Yotsuba animation on Newgrounds, if you haven't already stumbled across it. It's called Metal Gear Yotsuba--and there's plenty of source material references thrown into that mix too.

[Capture The Flag: Ep 2]

Nice

The graphics where pretty good here although some of the animation seemed a little off in parts. I don't quite get the reason he's there either but then I haven't seen the first yet, but anything after that does seem to work and doesn't really seem to stand out as needed to watch the first of them, which is pretty good.

It seems like a well thought out plot and takes up a decent amount of time, which is good to see. Although the voice acting was pretty quiet and maybe a little off in parts where it could be better, I mean turning up my volume helped but maybe a little louder wouldn't hurt, lol. The sound effects and music where alright and fit pretty well, so good job on that and overall.

5/5

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[Socialist World Republic]

Alright

It's not too bad, the song is pretty good and the quality is nice too, I also like the fact that you have two sets of subtitles so it isn't compleatly lost on people who can't speak the language it is spoken in, I know I can't, lol. But a pretty intresting idea here, although maybe a little stange to many people.

The animation itself is pretty good in some places but a little off in others, like the moving mouths of the creatures, it would look better if they moved with the music. The drawings where pretty good too but some of them lacked detail, like the clothes of the workers, they just looked plain red, some added detail would look nice.

But otherwise, a pretty good peice of flash here, good job on this one and good luck with works in the future :)

4/5

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Kenzu responds:

Thank you!

Good review!
Thank you for the hints on improvement!

[Handbook]

Umm Okay

Well the joke was pretty strange in a way, more expecting something else rather than what it turned out to be. It was a little short and probably silly too, though nothing too wrong with that. The graphics where decent and the animation was also pretty good too, although some things looked a little small like his hand.

The introduction part was also pretty diffrent I have to say. Well, everything else is decent, just a little odd and maybe a touch short, more than one joke might have been better. Well anyway, keep it up.

3/5

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