Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Short#1]

Alright

Well the animation of the sprites was decent as far as sprites go, don't really know what you could improve there. Though some parts could maybe do with a few more effects. The music and sound was okay, synced pretty well and the quality was decent, so that's good.

The major problem with this flash is there is no real plot to it, it bursts into fighting and then you have an ending which doesn't really make much sense, spend more time working on how to present the story and then make the flash. To me, this just seemed to lack direction, sorry.

2/5

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[LL - Children]

Haha!

That was actually quite amusing, I thought it was going to just end where they walk off but the ending was really what made this funny. The graphics where good, though not much change in the background or anything. The animation was alright, not anything special but still it did it's job and the voices where clear.

Although it was short, it was still good, making it longer might have killed the joke really, but still I thought this was pretty neat overall, good job on it and I hope you have good luck with your future flash works :)

5/5

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MagicWandLock responds:

Thank you for constructive criticism.

[Sonic: The Crybaby]

Heh

It didn't really make a great deal of sense to be honest and I can't really say that I found it that funny either, it was silly and didn't really go anywhere. More of a plot or something would probably have helped, also the text was kind of eh, could have improved the look of the box and not have some silly words used.

The animation of sprites was okay, though there wasn't a great deal and it was a little short, maybe work on a story that will last for longer and show your ablity a little more. Keep working at it though and good luck with future flash.

2/5

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The-Red-Jack responds:

I was just trying to use flash then my friend told me that it would be a great idea if I made a short movie, and I can't think of a good storyline. Thanks for the review

[Christmas In Jimtopia]

Alright

It was pretty good, the menu buttons where pretty nice and the background was also good I have to say. The flash itself had some good music, it fit in pretty well and the plot was pretty decent too, although the people are drawn a little bad, but nevermind. Most of the animation was decent and such, also decent sound effects where used.

The end part was kind of eh, in the chair he seemed to have flat legs, you might want to work on that, would look better and maybe give them voices as oppose to text, but otherwise pretty good overall, keep it up.

3/5

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Jimtopia responds:

Yeah the flat legs kind of bugged me a bit as well, but it was late, and I wanted to get it done, so I honestly just settled for it. Thx for the review though.

[SAATANA]

Wow

Amazing work, the animation here was great although the running could be improved on this flash, I loved the colours you have used in this flash they really worked with the whole animation and the small details where pretty nice on this flash. Definatly something worth watching and the graphics here where great too, I really loved them.

The music was really fitting with the whole thing and the ending was good, although nothing seemed to make a great deal of sense, it was still good to watch, although the guy with the fly was a little predicable yet still kind of harsh, lol. Anyway, a very good flash overall, just didn't have much of a plot to it, keep it up though :)

5/5

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Catoblepas responds:

Yeah, nothing I've submitted here ever has had a plot really.
Whether it's a good or bad thing I'll never know.

[Death Eagle Pt. 2]

So-So

The menu here is really just text and having the story on the preloader as text isn't really good to be honest, most people aren't going to read a block of text, it would be a lot better if you had your story set out as a flash and told it that way. The buttons in the menu are annoying to click, put a new layer and a square on that layer to cover all the text, convert it to graphic and set alpha to 0, that should fix the button up.

The flash itself, well some animations look okay but the backgrounds again let you down here, they really need to look a little better, work on them as well as trying to move away from using sticks. The music was okay as well as the sound effects, you just need to work on drawing.

1/5

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Phantox responds:

Thanks for the review. I'll do what you said about the buttons. About the story, I didn't make it as a flash because the part that I explained was based around what happened before the actual flash.
I'm still working on the drawing.

Again, thanks for the review.

[Death Eagle]

Very Random

It really made no sense what so every, it had no real plot to it and right at the start it seemed like it was halfway through an animation with the way it was going. The drawing is another thing here, it's not that great and does need a lot of work, you have the colours suddenly changing at parts and buildings jerking in the wrong direction. Use some solid colours for the background and use shading too.

The sticks, okay pretty basic but it doesn't matter too much, they seemed to animatate okay except with the blood, that didn't look too good, make the blood more realistic and use some other shades of red in it. Keep working with your drawings and try to improve.

0/5

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Phantox responds:

Thanks for the review. It was my first flash so I didn't know much on what I was doing. I didn't add a real plot because I wasn't planning on continuing it.

[Chaos Sonic Chapter 1]

Alright

Filesize was maybe a little too big and the music playing in only one side is quite annoying, might want to use music that keeps to the center and plays in both ears, otherwise it's harsh on people who use headphones. The story was okay and the animation of the sprites was decent, though in parts a little streached maybe.

Good sound effects and the random sound clips of talking did kind of brake the repetativness of pushing space all the time. The menu could have looked better though, the text was hard to see and the intro, maybe not so fast scrolling. But other than that, pretty decent.

3/5

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knuxrouge responds:

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed it and your comments have been noted.