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[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6]

Hehe

That was pretty ammusing, the style of the drawing here doesn't seem to change much, pretty low detail charators but that's okay, it does work in a way, though kind of odd how they don't have arms. Anyway, the flash itself is pretty good and everything, decent animation for most part, even if a little simple in looks, lol. The sound effects are good and the voice acting is also good too.

I did like the plot here, it's kind of simple yet unexpected, the whole thing does seem to work though and well I must say. At first it just seemed like something silly, then you have an explosion, lol. So yeah, overall, there is nothing wrong with this and on top of that, I do like this episode more so than previous ones, good work.

5/5

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Jimtopia responds:

Lol, arms are overrated! If you've got a pair of circles that float near you, who needs arms? Glad you liked this episode the most, shows I'm improving.

[Wegra Adventure 3]

More Work Needed

This really needs much more work, there isn't really much animation, though you do have some here and the graphics aren't really all that great. I mean sure it could be good if you had a much funnier plot to it, but this really seemed like you where trying a little too hard to do something random, but didn't really come out too well, the voice could have been better, this was too deep, slow and hard to hear.

It was also bad how you didn't draw a whole lot in many parts of this, or you drew something that wasn't really related too well, you should make things somewhat relevent and draw all the way if you are going to do something. I mean, if you are too lazy to draw, take up something like sprites or something, lol. Overall, much work is needed.

1/5

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Wegra responds:

Personally,I think each Wegra adventure has more animation then the last.

[Movement1 - chippy]

Alright?

I don't really know what to say about this, I mean it does seem like a time consuming project you have here and the first part did seem to work but after the photos at the traffic lights, it just seemed to go wrong in a way, moved too fast and couldn't really see what was after the traffic lights too clearly, that was the worst part to this.

The idea itself is kind of diffrent and kind of good in a sense but really needs a little more work, more photos for parts maybe? Or not have it going as fast but fast enough to seem like it is moving. The audio was okay, dunno why you picked it to represent this but it did work fine, so okay. Overall a decent idea, just needs work.

2/5

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Bezman responds:

"it just seemed to go wrong in a way, moved too fast and couldn't really see what was after the traffic lights too clearly, that was the worst part to this."

Fair point and thanks for the tip.

Another great review from you! Ta!

[Wegra Adventure 2]

Worse

This was actually worse than the first one, it wasn't as long for one thing and nothing really improved here, the graphics are still pretty bad and there is very little animation, it would be good to improve on both of those. The plot here well there was no plot but I mean the whole what of a story you had didn't really work, seemed more like you rushed the idea rather than thought about it, needs more work with a story.

The fast narration is okay, I think that does make for a good fast paced story, but there isn't really anything else here that is all that good. Everything needs working on, the story, the graphics and the length of the whole thing, think about a solid or funny plot and try that, spend longer on it.

1/5

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Wegra responds:

yeah,

[Wegra Adventures]

Umm What?

Well it might have been an okay idea but kind of lacking in graphics and everything, there was little animation if any, I mean I didn't notice any, so it would have been good to have some. The graphics, okay I mean I don't mind them being bad, they did kind of work with the fast pace of the stroy and everything, but they did kind of lack in a party.

The whole narration was okay, kind of fast but that pace was good and did work with the whole thing. The only thing that let it down really was the whole story, it didn't seem to make a whole lot of sense, if any as well as much of the humour in this not really being all that funny. Good idea but didn't really come out too well in my view.

1/5

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Wegra responds:

Alright, Thats cool Thanks for the review.

[Tywo At Large Ep. #2]

Pretty Good

This seems to be a pretty good flash, though didn't really find this one too funny in many ways, though it is pretty good. The style of this is also very good and done pretty well though the narration didn't seem to be that much of something like this sort of video, so maybe that could be worked on a bit if you plan on doing something like this again.

Animation here was good and the graphics where also very good, the black and white worked well with this I think, though there was one part with colour, not sure what you where trying there but okay. Overall a pretty decent flash and it definatly had it's moments, but lacked somethings I feel.

5/5

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Pixmintro responds:

The color part was just some strange half-baked idea I had to scare the crap out of the kids watching my presentation in Chemistry class.