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[From Life to Death]

Intresting

That was most certinly an intresting idea and well presented to, I also liked the drawing style, that was pretty good. It was also pretty clever how at each stage, where there is another child, you see a simler past scene but in a diffrent perspective, that to me was pretty clever to see. Though the ending with two children seemed to not follow the same pattern.

The music was kind of strange, didn't quite fit in but at some points it did fit in, maybe a track that could do both for the happy stages and sad stages would have worked better, dunno, the music was still good though. There was a lack of any heavy animation, only light bits, but it seemed to work, pretty good work overall.

4/5

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ReklessCreati0n responds:

Thanks, I don't see what was confusing about the last children, everything was focused on the main character, maybe it just didn't fit right? hmm thanks for the review!

[I Hate Snowmen]

Alright

That was kind of silly, the drawing was pretty good in parts as was the animation, thought there is the one part where he seems to suddenly dwarf the snowmen, like he's suddenly grown, that was odd unless you ment it to be like that. Otherwise the rest of it was good with the verious ways of destorying the snowmen, although some seemed pointless, lol.

A funnier ending was expected though, I mean this is nothing wrong with the way it does end as it is but I think there could have been a diffrent ending to it that would have been more intresting. Eh, overall though, pretty silly but well do in a way, music kind of fit in too.

4/5

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Graeme responds:

For that reall short, almost "crippled" snowman, it was on purpose.
I asuume you mean the little guy he flamethrowers. I handed my brother a paper and said, "draw a crappy snowman"
And he whipped that off before I could blink, so then I drew a recreation of it into the movie.

I do plan on making a sequel. So I didn't want any really concrete endings. If I did anything to out there, I wasn't sure if I would have enough room to continue

[The Halloweenator]

Nice Work

This was a pretty good flash to watch, though the main introduction with everything seemed to go on for a while. The actual flash itself was good, nice work to the voice actors, they seemed to sound very good with this flash and such, the art work was also pretty nice too and some decent lip movement in this, though the teeth of the Terminator or whatever you call him seemed funny, lol.

The ending didn't really work with the traced bitmap though, it could have looks a little better, maybe from a direct over head view or something, but otherwise overall, this was a nice flash to watch, pretty funny and a good story to it, nice work.

5/5

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
I will never use traced work again. It always seemed like a good idea at the time, but when it's all done it feels like cheating.

[Love You]

Umm Intresting

That was a pretty intresting short, didn't really get what the main point was, it didn't make all too much sense. The sound was good, but the large opening of nothing showing was kind of, odd too. It didn't really make all to much sense on a whole, so yeah that's what makes it kind of intresting, maybe if the opening had some sort of flash back it would have made more sense.

The backgrounds where drawn pretty well, although the image at the end seems kind of eh. The drawing of the person could be improved a little to, but otherwise it did kind of work, just a little odd on a whole.

3/5

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thank you for the review.

[Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer]

Alright

First thing that bugs me is the file size for a trailer, I mean a smaller size would mean more people are likly to watch which is the point of a trailer, to attract an audiance before you release the final version. Don't use music on the preloader, that just adds to the size, also stream the main music, that would help too. I also have a problem with the ending, you have the "Replay" button written in a symbol font till you hover over, that in my opinion is a bad idea.

The actual animation of the sprites themselfs is pretty good and the sound effects are good too. Though where you have text at the start, put it in a little box with the image of the speaker, it makes it look a lot neater and easier to read. Can't see what more you could change, you seem to have taken parts for your flash that you are working on in this I would guess, so they seem to be the more actionish parts.

2/5

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knuxrouge responds:

I said in the authors comments that nothing in the trailer was ripped from the actual chapter.