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[Bytesize Collab 2]

Nothing Special

There where a few decent submissions in this flash, but not too many, much of them lacking humour more than anything, some of them had some okayish humour but nothing really too funny. The style seemed to represent the Bytesize on Newgrounds quite well, so that's an okay point. The art in Rays parts where the best here, the others kind of lacked.

Overall, it would have been nice to have a selector part as well though the skiping this was pretty good. The buttons on the menu didn't seem to work too well with the whole look of the menu though. Some pretty good parts here I will say, but no solid laughs and nothing too special.

2/5

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djnet responds:

aww i got a <3 thanks for the helpful review...^_^

[Skate Something ep.1]

Well

I have to say there isn't anything here that really strikes me as being too intresting to watch, some of the animation is good and the sound effects also seem good, so does the music. The major problem is, nothing really seems to happen, it's like watching something right to the end and not really having a point to it. Add some humour, more skaters even, just have something happen.

Another thing is it seems too short, needs to be longer as well as having something happen, once you have that it will be much better. The roof or path, whatever it was could also have had more detail, the other backgrounds where pretty good though, just have something happen really.

2/5

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sistem69 responds:

Yeah many people said that and for that reason im going to make the next one longer and add some more skaters.

[A Thousand Frames]

Intresting

Well first thing I have to say is the music you picked didn't sound too loop very well, though the animation did seem to work in a way with it, I would have picked some music that looped better or something that lasted through the whole timeline. Other than that though it seems to come together pretty well, so good work there.

Some parts had some good detail and others seemed to lack, so a little inconsistant, I did like the way the scenes changed though, that was done well and most other parts in this where also done well, so good job overall here.

4/5

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blackcat2000 responds:

It didn't? Personally i thought it sounded alright, and since it's a loop, the file size would remain relatively small... or at least smaller than one that lasts the whole animation. But yes, I did that for my second piece.
The inconsistency is to do with me drawing as I imagined... I agree fully though. I'll work on that. Thanks for the review!

[A Thousand Two Frames]

Okay

That seemed to kind of work, although it lacked much direction to it, most of the animation seemed to be done very well and such, though nothing really stood out to me in this, maybe because of the lack of direction. Some of the parts seemed to not really look too good but others seemed to be done very well.

It would be good to see you take this another step further and do something that has a plot to it in someway, could keep the kind of random touch to it, just add some direction. Might not even need voices if you do it right, but otherwise, pretty good work on this.

3/5

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blackcat2000 responds:

Hmm... randomness with a plot eh... that's a new one... Sounds good, but I'd have to find a way to do it :P
Definitely considered. Thanks for the review :D

[The Beelion]

Lacking

This is certainly very lacking, there is some good work to it but the main opening part seems to go on for too long, the script for that is good but the background doesn't seem to change much, so it gets kind of boring to watch, some more background would be good, some changes to it.

The other part to it seems to be done okay though some work on the bees face would have been better, the sound was okay though I think the voices could have had more to them, they sounded kind of timid more than anything.

2/5

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blackcat2000 responds:

Yes, the looping background and beelion seems to be a major aspect which is easily fixed, yet missed out by me...
For the bee's face... I was working on the mane for quite a while, and wanted a... naive looking beelion? Innocent? As for the sound, that can always be improved. Thanks for the review :)

[All Your Leet]

Not Good

To start with I have to say, the sound quality is pretty poor here, it sounds like you have recorded it from the speakers, so you might want to work on that. Another is the animations and graphics are all out of proportion, they don't stay in the screen, you might also want to work on that really. The graphics and animation could also be better, the images used at the end could be bigger too, way too small.

As for the song, you have the subtitles that don't match the song in parts, I get that you are changing it to 1337 but maybe you could have gotten someone to redo the song to be based around that, it would have sounded much better. Overall, much more work could be done to improve this.

1/5

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Sispri responds:

I should've, but i Couldn't have editted myself. I Have little resources.