Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Textual Adventures III]

Alright

Well I have to say this wasn't too good, the animation of the sun could be much better and the background seems very lacking as well as much of it just seeming to be very random. Nothing seems to fit very well and the whole plot is kind of eh, could work on the story a little and the backgrounds.

I don't see too much wrong with having text as characters if that's what you want to go for but the other graphics could be improved a little. It would also be nice to hear some music or some form of sound all through the flash and maybe improve the way the text is presented.

1/5

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Knuxrouge's Newgrounds]

Not Great

I don't really think this is very well presented, it's very diffrent from many of the other "My Newgrounds" flash I will say, but really it could do with so much more. The whole stage is just 4 sprites and no real background, there isn't anything to watch other than the text.

I would suggest having some backgrounds, switching from character to character on screen and giving something to watch, otherwise it can just come across as long and unintresting. Try to add something the viewer can look at and enjoy, also voices would be good to have, maybe get a voice actor for some.

The idea of being diffrent from the others is good but the way you have presented it, in my view could really be improved. Good luck in future.

1/5

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knuxrouge responds:

Well, in the term of flash and substance, I wasn't opting to impress anyone.
It was meant to be funny, cut and dried.
Too bad you didn't like for alot of people did.

[One Cowgasmic Christmas]

Silly Short

That was kind of a silly little short, it was pretty simple in terms of looks and some work could be done on the animation in parts, the simple art is okay though. The sound was good although there was a part which sounded a little poor, but eh.

The fact that this seemed to be building up to a large action scene and then didn't was in someway a let down but also that was the silly part of the flash. It would have been nicer if it was a little longer because it did seem a little short. Still, pretty decent though some things do need work. Leep working at it!

4/5

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Imacow responds:

Thanks

[Madness: PathwayThroughNG]

Alright

Well the graphics where good in most parts and the animation was also pretty decent, though some of it could do with some work on it. I do like the fact that you redrew the Madness charector as oppose to using sprites, the voice acting was also good for most parts, so nice work on that.

My only major concern is that to me it just seemed to go on and on, it didn't get the the point very fast and after a while it just became a little dull to stay intrested. Maybe try some diffrent humour thoughtout and such, I know you tried by changing location but to me, that just didn't work. Pretty good other than that though.

4/5

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swiftstylerX responds:

I agree with everything you said. Which is why the next one is going to be SOOO much better than this. Thanks for the review!

[LL - Children]

Haha!

That was actually quite amusing, I thought it was going to just end where they walk off but the ending was really what made this funny. The graphics where good, though not much change in the background or anything. The animation was alright, not anything special but still it did it's job and the voices where clear.

Although it was short, it was still good, making it longer might have killed the joke really, but still I thought this was pretty neat overall, good job on it and I hope you have good luck with your future flash works :)

5/5

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MagicWandLock responds:

Thank you for constructive criticism.

[Sonic: The Crybaby]

Heh

It didn't really make a great deal of sense to be honest and I can't really say that I found it that funny either, it was silly and didn't really go anywhere. More of a plot or something would probably have helped, also the text was kind of eh, could have improved the look of the box and not have some silly words used.

The animation of sprites was okay, though there wasn't a great deal and it was a little short, maybe work on a story that will last for longer and show your ablity a little more. Keep working at it though and good luck with future flash.

2/5

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The-Red-Jack responds:

I was just trying to use flash then my friend told me that it would be a great idea if I made a short movie, and I can't think of a good storyline. Thanks for the review

[Christmas In Jimtopia]

Alright

It was pretty good, the menu buttons where pretty nice and the background was also good I have to say. The flash itself had some good music, it fit in pretty well and the plot was pretty decent too, although the people are drawn a little bad, but nevermind. Most of the animation was decent and such, also decent sound effects where used.

The end part was kind of eh, in the chair he seemed to have flat legs, you might want to work on that, would look better and maybe give them voices as oppose to text, but otherwise pretty good overall, keep it up.

3/5

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Jimtopia responds:

Yeah the flat legs kind of bugged me a bit as well, but it was late, and I wanted to get it done, so I honestly just settled for it. Thx for the review though.