Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Umm Okay

Well it was certainly very random, though I can't say it's really a good thing I mean the flash itself didn't really sound too much like it has a plot and nothing much really happens. Try working with a story that will keep the viewers intrested in what is going to happen and try to either make it longer or have something more happen other than what happend here.

The graphics where so-so, I mean some of the objects looked pretty good but others not so and some of the animation was kind of eh, the animated bong seemed to be kind of pointless and not really needed. Keep working at it though.

2/5

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks

[CandyHolics]

Alright

The first thing I must say is the cursor is annoying for the main flash part, a smaller one would have been better and the menu could do with a little work, though it does do it's job. As for the main flash itself, some of the animation is okay and other bits a little jerky, some pretty decent graphics and story.

The voice acting is pretty good too, although some of it is a little crackly, so that could be worked on and the parts where text shows is too fast, fade it out at times maybe. Overall though, a pretty decent flash, it's the story that counts more than anything.

3/5

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks for the review.

[MZ's G&W Collab Parts]

Needs Work

The music to start with didn't sound the best of quality, it kind of sounded like you recorded it from a player to your PC, try to have the music file on your PC and import it to flash as oppose to recording it, also the music cut short of the end of the flash, which wasn't too good, should have lasted the whole length.

The animation, well parts of it where okay but other parts seem to be rough or badly drawn, you need to put a little more time into them. The idea was pretty random to, it didn't really seem to have any direction. The length I can understand the kind of shortness to it because it was part of a collab originally, still you could have edited this version a little.

1/5

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McZero responds:

Sorry, Yeah I know I SUCK ;_;

[Yotsubato!]

Ah Yotsuba&!

I haven't read the manga in quite sometime now but I do remember reading the one this is based on, though only slightly so I can't remember how accurate this is, maybe you could say, it would save me looking it up, lol.

It's pretty short and fast paced, not really a problem though if it was a little longer it would be nice, it is also pretty funny though maybe if the last part was done a touch slower it would be more so. The graphics are pretty poor but at the same time pretty nice looking, they could be improved a touch though.

But overall, not to bad, the audio was clear and everything else looked good, I would like to see a longer Yotsuba&! animation though, I think that would be good :3

5/5

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Skaijo responds:

Thanks for the kind words. The animation is pretty accurate to the manga--panel for panel up until the very last line. <3 I figured it would just be a silly way to end it.

Yeah, the graphical quality was turned way down as I never really expected to turn this into Newgrounds but just show it to a very few friends who'd get the joke. I got up the nerve to share some of my shorts here on this site though, Yotsubato! including.

I do need to work on making better links though.

There actually is an extended Yotsuba animation on Newgrounds, if you haven't already stumbled across it. It's called Metal Gear Yotsuba--and there's plenty of source material references thrown into that mix too.

[Socialist World Republic]

Alright

It's not too bad, the song is pretty good and the quality is nice too, I also like the fact that you have two sets of subtitles so it isn't compleatly lost on people who can't speak the language it is spoken in, I know I can't, lol. But a pretty intresting idea here, although maybe a little stange to many people.

The animation itself is pretty good in some places but a little off in others, like the moving mouths of the creatures, it would look better if they moved with the music. The drawings where pretty good too but some of them lacked detail, like the clothes of the workers, they just looked plain red, some added detail would look nice.

But otherwise, a pretty good peice of flash here, good job on this one and good luck with works in the future :)

4/5

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Kenzu responds:

Thank you!

Good review!
Thank you for the hints on improvement!