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Okay

Not too bad, though some parts do seem to sound a little repetitive but it does loop well which is good for a loop, that and it's pretty long too, so that's pretty good. There is a part some way through the middle that sounds to change a little too suddenly in my view, that could be worked on a little maybe.

Overall, it seems to come together pretty well which is good and everything, wasn't too sure on your choice of ohhs to this but they seemed to work with this fine, though I think it could be a little better with more veritiy.

4/5

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kaptainkewl responds:

That middle part was actually where for some reason I decided to loop it back again, I Have no idea why I did it originally, But I'm on dial up so I really don't want to have to download and re edit this whole song to fix that. Without the skippy part it would be about 1:30 and loop back again. The thing with Loops is for a flash creator they need to be shorter than usually 1minute otherwise the file is too big for the flash.

Thanks for the review. I'll make sure to Improve on some of these!

~~~Brad Kubota

[Lux Lucis]

Alright

Sounded to be played very well, I was a little disapointed that there was only the piano playing, it would have been nice to hear some more in this, but otherwise it sounds to have been played very well which is good to hear so nice work there. There is one part around 1:01 to 1:04 I think that sounds kind of bad, might want to look into that.

There is also some distortion in parts there after, not sure if it's where it became too loud for the mic or what, music isn't really my thing so can't suggest much there. But otherwise, it sounds to have been played very well, good work overall.

4/5

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S3C responds:

heh, no Mic, its just a Midi keyboard running through a steinway piano soundfont with reverb, glad it sounds authentic though ;)

I really dont see the need for other instruments in here. But you're the second one who brought that up, so I might take out some parts and build around it.

Thanks for the review

[+BsK+ Or die trying!!]

Short

I get that it's a loop and that might well be why it's short but this doesn't sound to loop all that well to me, it ends too diffrent to the way it starts so that might be preventing it from looping well, I'd suggest either working that out or making it longer, it would be nice eitherway, since it sounds good as it is.

The tune as a whole is very good and I don't have any problems with it, the change mindway is done really well and sounds good to me. Just they way it loops could be fixed, otherwise very good work overall :)

3/5

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kaptainkewl responds:

Everyone else seemed to lIke the loop :(. I guess I understand, I was actually thinking of Doing the Low High Low sound But ended up doing LOw LOw High And loop, Maybe that's what threw you off. Thanks though!

~~~Brad Kubota

[Expiration (S.C.)]

Pretty Neat

The intro to this sounds pretty good to me though the vocals seem a little too quiet, it would be good if those where a little louder in my view, they are too hidden by the background music in my view, so they aren't really very clear. But the actual music itself is very good though maybe could have been played better to fit the theme a little better, didn't think the tune worked with the theme.

It's not too bad, there is room for improvment here, but other than the few things I've mentioned, everything else sounds to come together very well and the length is also very good, so nice work overall with this.

4/5

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[I dont know what it is]

Nah

The intro is really bland and then even when it gets into it, it just seems really messy and no real sounds here, doesn't amount to a whole lot, just sounds very messy. You need to find something that comes together well and is plesent to listen to. I'm having problems listerning to this, it's just far too repetative and mostly annoying.

There isn't anything here that sounds all that great, yes there are parts that don't sound as bad as most but most of it just makes my head hurt, it's really unplesent, the sudden changes aren't much good here too, very harsh on the ears, sorry, I don't like this one.

0/5

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sistem69 responds:

im sorry u didnt like it.

[Gore (S. C.)]

Cool

Good work on this, the vocals start early on with enough of an intro to sound good to me, I don't like waiting for the singing when there is some, so I liked that. The song it's self also sounds very good, I like the distortion of the vocals at parts and the vocals themselfs fit in very well and sounds to have been sung very well, good work on that.

The ending is good and the beat through the whole song is very good to listen to and everything, good work on there. Nice background beat and the distorted sounds are also very nice to listen to, really works here in my view. Great work overall.

5/5

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BreakingFaces responds:

Thank you so very much. That was a kind review

[Now What..]

Good

It sounds very good to me from what I can hear, very calm and in a way also carefree, so that makes it sound pretty good to me. It does come together pretty well, which is good to hear and everything, everything also comes together very well and there seems to be enough veriation in this.

Nothing I can suggest to improve on, everything sounds okay as it is and the ending here is also very well done, so great work overall on this track, decent slow ending though it kind of killed the carefreeness in a way.

5/5

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[Azure Eyes]

Calm

It's pretty calm and down beat, but still sounded pretty good, though nothing too loud that really stood out here, which in a way is a shame, something that stood out would have been nice to have, but even without that, it does sound good, very calm and relaxing, not sure if it sounds happy or not, but it's kind of slow so maybe no.

Everything sounds okay and nothing sticks out of place and sounds bad, which is good, but my main problem with this is nothing really sticks out at all here, so yeah. The ending is good though, liked that.

4/5

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S3C responds:

well as you mentioned, its pretty calm and relaxing, i didn't want any instrument or synth to stand out in a volume sense.

yeah, nothing amazing about this one. well i appreciate the review!

[i dont mow]

Umm

I'm not really sure of this a whole lot, the intro is far too long, then you have a fairly annoying bouncing sound, it might not be so annoying if it fit with the whole tune but it doesn't seem to, just stands out. There isn't a whole lot of veriation here either, it's very repetative and kind of boring to listen to after a while, so you might want to put more too it.

You could have made a short loop and that would have been better than this, it goes on too long and doesn't sound that plesent. Parts of it are okay, minus the bouncing sound and it would be much better, the sudden end isn't too good either.

2/5

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