Little-Rena's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<==Silver Strut==>]

Nice Song

The beat you have in this is kind of upbeat in a way though it also has kind of a dark sound to it, but I do like the way this flows through the whole thing, though I'm not too keen on the way this starts, seems to just jump right into the peice, also I think the ending here could do with a bit of work, it just sounds a little like it ends too soon.

Other than the opening and the ending to this track though, it sounds like everything comes together very well. It's not repetitive from what I can hear and I think the beat you have going on with this is very good. I must say, good work with this overall, although I don't like summer, lol.

5/5

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DjCompass responds:

Ya, i've always had trouble with intro and endings. I figure i'll eventually get it right, with practice. Thanks for the review, i really appreciate the support, and the criticism :P

[<==Raining Rage==>]

Decent

I think this is pretty decent although it's a shame the the rain in this is hard to hear in the background and the only times you hear it are at the end and at the start, you can hear bits in parts through the whole thing but I think it should play a more dominant part in the whole tune. The thunder sound was pretty good and fit in with the whole thing.

I'm not too keen on the whole dark sound to this though, I mean it's okay and it does kind of work but the main dominant sound doesn't change too much, it just seems to stay much the same. Needs a little more veriation in this, but otherwise this is pretty good.

4/5

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DjCompass responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm loving the depth i'm getting out of yours ^^
I'll keep all that in mind if i revisit this song, and in the future. Thanks again.

[(prev.) ChromoMiyx]

Hmm

Can't say I'm really too keen on this track, the opening was pretty decent but then you have the sort of clap sounds and the other sounds, I don't really think those sound too good, it makes everything sound very metalic, which I don't really like. The background to the whole thing sounds okay, but it's let down because the clapping and other sounds stand out more.

Not sure, I would kind of start all over removing those from this or working them more into the background, because this preview doesn't make it sound like anything too special, sorry. The background is the best thing about this, the ending you could have atleast faded out too, lol.

2/5

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loogiesquared responds:

the background? if you like it, i'll send you a .wav....

but i'll like to know WHAT you didn't like about this....

[[TMM43] Breathe]

Pretty Neat

I think this all comes together well, there is nothing wrong with this that I can hear, you have some very good build up to this song, which is good for an intro. The ending also sounds to be done very well, which is good, everything here sounds to flow through the track very well, good use of time and plenty of changes through the whole thing.

The overall beat to this is also very good, the background beat seems to soundpretty constant all through the whole thing where it is and that keeps the whole thing together very well, although the main part of what you can hear stands out enough for there to be more to listen to. Great work on this overall.

5/5

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[(_RGH_) Aero(on a plane) ".(."]

Good

It sounds like a pretty good track here, you have quite a lot to this one which is good to hear, a nice amount of change through the whole thing, the opening is also good, although a little slow to build up, I really think it works. This is not too repetitive either, which is also very nice to hear, some parts of this I wouldn't link to an aeroplain though, lol.

The ending could do with a little work though, it just seems to sound like it suddenly ends, maybe fade it out in a way, that would be good to have. Other than the ending, I can't hear any problems with this overall, so yeah, pretty good work on this, just work on the ending.

5/5

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RyeGuyHead responds:

I'll make the fade out more noticeable, how about that?

[(_RGH_) Abyss (Dark Pico)]

Alright

Okay, this isn't too bad I mean it is overall a pretty decent sounding track which is good, so nice work on that but I do think that it is a bit repetitive, such as the opening, the same sort of beat through most of that could be heard, maybe change it a little and build into the main part quicker. There isn't anything here that really stands out to me either, although it does sound good.

The length for this is good and much of the time seems to sound like it has been used well, but there are moments here where it does sound repetitive. I like the way you have ended this though, it does work very well, the second half to this in my view is much better than the first half.

4/5

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[Jason Needs A Girlfriend 3]

Okay

Well this is better than the first, it sounds to be more balanced for most of it, which is okay but you still then change it so that they are coming out of diffrent ears part the way through, you really should make the vocals balance otherwise it just get annoying, especilly considering the length for this. The background is okay and that sounds very good.

The one major problem with this is that the lyrics just get far too repetitive, you should consider making a shorter song so that you are repeating yourself over and over. Like with the first one, this is hard to listen to, it starts off okay but then just goes downhill from that point.

2/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Yeah..I know.It was great when I first made it though.The drums are what made this song what it is.But yeah..It does go on for too long.

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend]

Terrible

Wow, that was really terrible, you had the vocals coming out of one side and the backing from another, that unbalance makes it very hard to listen to, considering I use headphones too. I would strongly suggest keeping the whole thing balanced out at both sides, otherwise it just ends up sounding like a mess as well as being annoying. The background is okay and works with the vocals but as mentioned before, the unbalance makes it sound bad.

The lyrics are kind of funny, sadly though because of the way this is done, it's hard to pay attention to much of the lyrics, it was hard just listerning to this all the way. I really hope you fix that for future works, you might have a decent idea here but it didn't really come out too well.

1/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

I have 5.1 Surround sound speakers..The song sounds fine.

As for the balance it sounds like shit if I change it.Unless you can help me then this song is staying the way it is.

Thanks.

[Fantasia Nocturne No.2]

Muffled

I'm not too keen on the muffled sound of this tune, it doesn't really work right and it makes it sound very quite which is kind of eh. The actually playing sounds okay and in a way it seems to have a little more to it than the first one and does in a way sound a little better but it's really hard to say that this is overall better than the orignal because of the muffled sounds.

I do think the piano is played very well here and the length is very good, but I can't really say I like it too much because of the lack of audio quality here, so that makes it lose a lot for me, sorry. But otherwise, it sounds like you have done a good job on this, I hope you can tidy up the quality in future.

4/5

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sarias responds:

yeah this was my first attempt at producing myself, xKore helped me with the first one (i wrote it all he just plugged it into fl studios) i may just see if he can help me with this one also, who knows thanks for the review im glad you liked it though i will try to get that fixed

[Fantasia Nocturne No.1]

Pretty Nice

Although I'm not a huge fan of the lack of a constant background that sticks out, much of this still sounds very good, it also seems to sound very dark and slow, which sounds pretty good the way it's played. The piano here is played very well, I can't hear anything wrong with the way it's played, so great work on that, though the louder notes do sound to have a little static on them.

There is some background here, but I would have wanted a little more, not sure how you could do that if you are just using a piano so heh. Anyway, I have no problems with anything else there, the length is good and you have both a decent opening and ending to this, good job.

5/5

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sarias responds:

thankyou so much im glad you liked it thanks for the review