Little-Rena's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Billie Jean Techno Remix]

Alright

Sounds to be done pretty well I have to say that, the vocals are pretty good with this too, so that's nice to hear and the ending also seems to work very well with this, good work on that. There are parts with this that I'm not too keen on though, I don't like the sound of some parts, but most of the parts sound to be done pretty good.

No real problems with this, I've heard the original to this and this one sounds very diffrent and in many ways I have to say it sounds a little better too. Just not keen on some parts of it, can't say which for sure though, just some of the early parts, the ending parts are good.

5/5

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[what can u hear]

Hmm

Not too keen on this, the intro isn't all that good and goes on for too long, the woo sound isn't good. I recognise the sounds from a program I have used, but I can't say this has come together all that well from what you can do with it, it seems far too random and no real sound coming out of this, so it's not very good.

There are some parts that don't sound too bad but on the whole, they don't really make up for it. Plan what you are making ahead and make sure to listen to it first, then record it. At the moment, it sounds like you where testing sounds from it and just putting them together.

1/5

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[Galloping Through the Night]

Length

If this was longer, it would be better that and looping a little better too, at the moment it loops okay but it could be better maybe. Though it does loop and sounds pretty nice, being longer would give you the ability to put more into it and have more veriation, as it is, it's pretty decent but nothing more.

2/5

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S3C responds:

i'd love to make it longer, thanks for the review :)

[Gates]

Very Short

It's certainly short and sounds much more shorter because parts of it seem to sound pretty fast, but that doesn't really mean it doesn't sound very nice because it does sound good for most part, a good intro and it also ends very well too. Also, it sounds to me like it loops, which is good to hear, so nice work on that.

Maybe something like this but a little longer would have been good, but as it is right now, it does sound very good and comes together very well, so great work overall on this peice.

4/5

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[People Die - Knights of 21 Oak]

Decent

This is very well done, the vocals are very good, clear and fit in very well with the tune, though I have to say the intro here seemed to go on a bit too long, for a while I thought this wasn't going to have any lyrics and going to suggest it to you. But it seems you have them, anyway.

So aside from the long intro here, it is all very good, it's played very well and sounds very fast paced, I kind of like it too. It has plenty of veriation in it and a nice length, great singing here too, great work overall.

5/5

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[The Magician - Purple]

Okay

Well I'm not too keen on the intro to this, it doesn't really sound all that great so yeah, that could be improved on. The main part to this does sound good, it has a pretty intresting beat to it and everything, though maybe a constant background tune for it would be good to hear, but it's still pretty nice.

The ending to it seems to be okay and everything, the only thing I wasn't keen on was the intro for this but everything else sounds pretty good, so nice work on this.

4/5

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[FFX2 - Eternity Extended]

Good Work

This was played very well, seems to have a very calm sound to it and such, which is good and it does flow very well, though at times it lacks veriation but it isn't really a problem with this. Everything is played very well and the sound is good, I've not heard the original so I can't really compare it to anything.

I don't really have any suggestions to improve this, there isn't anything that really stands out that isn't very good here, overall everything is good and the length to it is good too, so good work. Note the over use of the word good, one day I'll use a better adjective.

5/5

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S3C responds:

haha, well its all "good" :P goodness, thanks for being good and leaving a good review!

[Windows of Time]

Nice

It has a nice sound to it and it's very relaxing though it is a little sameish through the whole track, it does seems to work very well, it's not a very upbeat and happy tune though, so it's not something I am too keen on in that sence though that isn't to say it's bad, I mean we all have diffrent tastes so yeah.

The tune itself comes together very well and it is quite a relaxing tune which is one of the main things I liked about it, it's not too busy or too loud. So overall, very good work on this, just could do with maybe more veriation.

5/5

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[{ANT} - Gray Gallop]

Very Good

I thought this sounded very good and well put together, the sound is very energetic and everything, pretty loud too. Nothing sounds bad here, though part way near the end it does seem to get a bit lounder, that sounds a little odd for this. The ending to this is also very good, so good work on that.

Although it could be a little longer and the sound issue sorted out near the end, it was very good overall, had a nice tune to it and everything, good work on this.

5/5

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Anth0n responds:

Thanks, I made the volume a little softer.

[Hey There Delilah Suck My Dick]

Intresting Idea

The idea of this is alright though I think it could do with some work on the lyrics, the last line didn't really work to well in my view and some of them really didn't go too well with the tune, try to use less words at times and ones that have less syllables, it would work a lot better in my opinion. Though the chorus did work but that's stright from the song isn't it? lol.

The tune is good and sounds like it, so yeah, like I said the idea is good just working out the lyrics needs work. Your singing is fine but at parts it seemed like you got lost with what to say and stumbled a little. Maybe try this again with diffrent words or try a diffrent song, lol.

3/5

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