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[Carbon Baby (part 2)]

Eheh

I'm not too keen on this one on a whole, it really sounds a little too busy in most parts and kind of too loud and in a way that can't really be controled with the volume without hurting the quality of the whole track. I mean there are parts of this which do sound very good and a little softer but many other parts here just seem too loud for my liking.

I'm not too keen on the whole fuzzy kind of beats, it's more the opening half where the problem is for me though I must say. It does seem to loop pretty well which is kind of good and the ending is done very well, so good work with that, it's more just that the whole thing is too fuzzy for me :s

4/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the honesty.
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[- [This Was Meant To Be] -]

Dark

This song certainly has a very dark sound to it in a way, but it does sound very good, I really like the intro and the ending to this song, they both sound very good. As does the main part of the whole thing, it does sound to be maybe repetitive in parts but it does really work and I belive the length of this shows that you have used the time well, there is nothing bad about the length, infact I thought it was good.

The way everything comes together is also very well done and such, I can't hear anything wrong with this track, nothing I belive could be changed either, everything really comes together well, even if it does sound a little dark, which isn't all to my taste, but I still like it, good work.

5/5

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[Example I - Dream]

Intresting

Well it sounds pretty intresting for most part, though one thing I should really say is the ending, I'm not really keen on it, you have it ending on the same note and for too long in my view, it doesn't really seem to work here, simply fading it out might have been much better. The start of this is okay though and does sound pretty good.

Everything sounds to be played pretty well and there isn't anything that stands out as sounding too bad, other than the ending. But there isn't really anything here that stands out a whole lot either anyway, could have done with a little more to it.

3/5

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Adam-Beilgard responds:

Yeah, beginnings and endings - one of the first things you learn in theory and I screwed my ending up. I'll keep working on that fade, thanks for the review!

[Improvisation Number One]

Kind of Quiet

It's kind of quiet for most part which is maybe a little disappointing, like the start seems to be too much silence and there are many other parts of this which are a little too silent for my liking. But then where there is a tune, it does sound very good and the main middle part seems to sound very good to me and I like that part of the tune, in my view it is just a shame that there is so much silance in this.

The ending is okay but could have been better, if you had ended it with some slower playing as oppose to one final louder sound, it might have been good and leaving a silant for consistancy. But like I say, where you do have a tune, it is good, so nice work on that.

4/5

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Adam-Beilgard responds:

This one is sparce, to be sure. I master most of my work with headphones, so desktop speakers sometimes get the shaft :\
I'm glad you liked the tune, thanks for the listen and thanks for the review!

[Old School Battle]

Okay

Well it's not too bad, it's pretty decent to listen to so there is nothing really wrong with it, though it doesn't really sound like a whole lot on its own, it could probably be used for something. The loop here is pretty decent, though maybe just a little off right at the end, might want to try to work that out if you can notice it yourself.

It is very short and could get quite annoying to listen to over and over, so whatever it's used for should have other distractions and such so it doesn't get too annoying to the person using whatever it is used for. Otherwise, this is a pretty decent loop you have made.

3/5

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[.:Lost In Her Eyes:.]

Nice Tune

This sounds very good, I mean it;s all played very well and everything, good work on this one. I have no real problems with this, although it's not really to my taste it still sounds very good. The opening build up sounds good, starts out to be pretty soft, the pause before the main louder part of this sounds good to, it really works and fits in well with everything.

The ending is the part I liked about this, not because it was the end, lol, not trying to say it sucks just so you know. I mean, it really works, the pauses there sound good, without looking at the time of the song, it sounded like the start and that it had looped, that confused me, but the ending did sound good, nice work on that.

Please don't try to confuse me next time though :(

5/5

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GronmonSE responds:

Little-Rena need a hug? >:

Some like the ending, some dislike it. Interesting :P

Thanks for the input, glad you liked it :D

[Galaga Main Theme]

Too Short

It's really too short to really say a whole lot about it I have to say, a bit longer and it might be easier to say more. The loop for this is done pretty well and it does work well as a loop but the sound for me is just too sharp and it really gets annoying to listen to over and over, so in that sense it doesn't make a good loop. If it was a little softer, it would be much more plesent to listen to as well as longer, that would be good to.

2/5

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[Project Part 3 - Omega]

So-So

Of all three of them, this is the one I don't like as much, I mean the ending of this is done pretty well and closes everything off very well but the opening sounds nothing like the ending part of the previous. There is nothing that actually sounds bad about this but the kind of 'boom' sound in this, I can say I'm not too keen on and does kind of ruin the rest of the tune to me.

The tune itself is good but with the interuptions of something sounding compleatly diffrent, it does kind of spoil it. Everything else sounds nice, kind of calm and that's the thing I like the most about this and the ending to the whole thing. The ending part to this changes to a dark kind of sound, which is okay and it does work with the final ending.

4/5

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TheBellmaker responds:

I saw that soming from a mile away. I knew that since you didn't like how it was split up, you wouldn't like this part.

The whole song was not really meant to flow. It was meant to be split up, because of the said reason back in part one.

But thanks for listening to my 8 minute tune collection anyway :)

[Project Part 2 - Lambda]

Hmm

Well since it's split up and all, it's hard to remember the ending of the previous part but this does sound so much diffrent. I mean diffrent is okay for a long song but it's hard to hear the change without them all put together if you understand. This does still sound good though, which is okay, the intro and ending are both good.

In comparison to the previous one, I'm not as keen on this one, although everything does come together very well, it just doesn't suit my taste in many parts of this. There is the main middle part that I do like though, that's my favourite thing about this track, so good work on that. The ending does leave it open though, so I do wonder what part 3 is like.

5/5

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TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm trying to revise my composition style so that I have a main theme and variations. This song was just a bunch of possible themes bundled together.

[Project Part 1 - Alpha]

Good Work

Though the first thing I am disappointed about is actually putting this into three parts without any other reason other than to keep the attention of someone, it does kind of put me off in a way, I like to listen to one thing right the way through though it might work with some people, I think it's kind of ehh. The ending for this did work and sounded good though, so it's not like it cut off at the end.

Everything seemed to work fine with this too, which is good to hear, the intro was good though part the way through it did sound like it was at the end but then it built up again, that was pretty good. No real problems with this other than the splitting up of it, that's the only thing I don't like, the length is still decent though, so good work overall.

5/5

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TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review.

I split it up because when I first submitted it someone said is was 2 long :(

And the reason the parst are also split up is because I made a part for each of the 5 people and they were all different. So in essence, this is not really a song. rather, it is a collection of tunes.