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[Machina Humana]

Intresting

It's certainly quite an intresting flash, I have to say that. Though it doesn't really seem to make too much sense when just watching it alone, a solid plot with the main animation might help the viewer to work out what's going on. But that aside, the animation to this was done pretty well, though there are parts where it seems like it's a little odd or needless animation.

The music was fine, though some sound effects in parts would have been good too, the music did fit with this but I have to say, sound effects would have been good, they would kind of add a little more to it in my opinion. But other than that, this seems to have been done pretty well.

4/5

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MrGUS responds:

Thanks for the pragmatic review, I did realize how it could seem a bit too wierd.. specially since at first I didn't even translate the spanish part... but well I wrote quite a long description for anyone who was really curious.. I'll try to make the animations a bit more selfexplanatory though.

Thank you for your review,

Gustavo M.

[TheMostBeautifulDrawings]

ROFL

The menu was decent to start with and then the selections too, so that was good and the text introducing to each part was well drawn too. The comments on the art where all pretty funny. Although it actually took a few before it started to become funny, though it was funny, at first it wasn't though. Eitherway, I get that the drawings are bad, but it's the comments that make this funny, not the drawings.

The audio is good, works quite well with everything, though some sound effects would have been good, animal noises or something related. Maybe even some poor voice acting for fun, lol. Eitherway, it was certainly better and funnier than I thought it would be, been a while since I've seen a silly flash that's made me laugh.

5/5

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Graeme responds:

I actually has a few sound effects. Like when the cow came up it mooed. And when the chicken came up it clucked (or w/e you would call a chicken noise)
But, my problem with that was that something like a rabbit doesn't really have a sound effect. I had trouble trying to find something for eveything.

I would have voiced over my comments, but believe me, my voice isn't exciting enough to have to listen to for all the comments made. I feel it would have taken away from the movie.

Thanks for the review, glad I could make you smile :D

[Tangerine Madness!]

Hmm

It was pretty good, some of the animation was decent although the graphics could be improved a little, maybe some shading of grey if you want to keep it with little colour, just to add some depth to it. The music I didn't think really went with the theme of this, so that could have been picked a little better, although you have an option to turn it off, it would be best to have some background sound kept.

Some other background objects like a bin and tree might have been good too. The idea is good yes, but kind of let down by the music and the slow opening. Could have been a little faster for the waiting part, that kind of made me lose intrest. But otherwise, good.

3/5

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for your review! I have to remember to complement my stuff from now on with background objects, thanks!

[LOVEBLIMP]

Okay

It didn't really have too much going on and the animation wasn't all that adventurous to start with. The menu was okay, simple and easy to use, the graphics where pretty decent too although there could have been more maybe clouds or something. Some explosion effects too, the movement of the blimps was pretty good though.

The music was good, and the sound, but I just couldn't really see the text fitting in all that well. It did work as showing what it was about but maybe it could have been done a little diffrent, not sure how. The movement of the blimps was slow but I would expect that, so that's okay. On a whole, it was kind of short and didn't have too much happening, expanding would have been nice.

3/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, this animation is far from a masterpiece, and if I did make it again, I'd probably change so many things. Your comments were very helpful, I appreciate it a lot. ^_^

[The Narrator's Love Story]

Okay

Well it was pretty decent, the story mostly, I mean the graphics could do with some adjustments, such as the breasts on the girls, they seemed a little too far up, lol. Also the walking could be a little better at the end. Some of the animation was good, but other parts where a little so-so.

The voice acting was eh, I mean it was clear in most parts but some of it just didn't seem to work with the situation, so those could be worked on. The subtitles where a decent addition to this, also the menu and such looked pretty smooth. But it would have been a good idea for the cursor to have been hidden in the main flash. Otherwise pretty nice though.

4/5

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Ok, and for the girls....Eh first time with animating with female characters trying to look somewhat attractive, but thanks for the feedback I'll work on those areas.

[Cow in Submarine]

Hehe

That was kind of silly for the ending part, didn't really see it coming at first though after a while you could guess something like that would happen. The art here was pretty good, the sound was good too, worked very well with what you did so you pulled it off pretty well. The animation of the Submarine could have been a little better though, I mean I thought it was moving a little too fast, lol.

But otherwise, everything was pretty nice, didn't go on for too long and it wasn't too short either, so good job with that. The ending was also pretty funny too. Good job :)

4/5

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Imacow responds:

Thanks

[Fat, bald soccer player]

Lol, Good

That was a pretty decent flash, some of the animation looked a little slow though so it would be good to see a little faster movement maybe. But it's certainly well animated and the colours are good too. I like the idea to this, at first you wouldn't really expect the ending, so that's really good to see. The sound is good and very fitting with the theme in my opinion.

Can't really see much to improve on other than some of the animation speed, everything just seems to work really well with this and it's got some very good humour to it. Very nice work on this one.

5/5

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Pepeto responds:

Hehe, thank you <3

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

Intresting

This is a pretty intresting flash, I like most of the animation here, the style looks pretty good and it kind of works. Though it's kind of confusing in some parts, other parts it makes some sense, the ending is kind of odd too. The music is kind of poor quality, so you might want to make that a little better, export at a higher setting maybe?

The easter egg is kind of hard to get, since it doesn't show for that long, which means you have to pause it, maybe make that scene a little longer. The easter egg itself was okay, not really any animation but it was kind of funny to listen to and read. Pretty good work alround, keep it up.

3/5

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Ying-yong responds:

thankss.

the mic is old, i'll get a new one.

[Happy Censorship Day!]

Intresting

It's an intresting idea to have the words change to something else but there is a part of it that seems a little odd, I mean going through the words was kind of eh, might have been worth the time to try and work as many into the script as possible. Also it was only ever at the same place, some change in background would have been decent and that would allow the story to go off to allow a wide range of words.

Some of the graphics could improve too, like shading and such, but otherwise some decent voice acting and a decent idea for a story, I just think it could have been better expanded.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I could have added them to a sentence, but meh.

[Droids Vs Aliens]

Hmm, Okay

Well the animation to this seemed to be pretty good, mostly smooth although some parts of it where it little jerky and some lines on the side at parts. The preloader was kind of eh, it could have looked better but it work as does the replay button. The sound quality seems a little bad, you should try exporting at higher quality next time.

The flash itself seemed to be very short and had a random story line, it didn't make too much sense and seeing what was going on was quite hard. Should try to work on making it easy to tell why things are happening and maybe making it longer.

2/5

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Graeme responds:

It does some to just jump into things doesn't it.
There never was supposed to be a plot. Just aliens fighting droids. I suppose I could have done a better job laying out what was going on. Haha
My preloader was a little boring, and a little sloppy too. That was one thing I never though about, and I think your the first to point it out. Maybe some kind of stop motion loop would have been a nice background