Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inward Singing]

Love it :3

I think this is really well done and everything, though I've not heard much Tenacious D stuff, I've heard a little which was good. But onto the flash, the sound is good and easy to hear which good. And the song on the credits is good though it didn't show any names for me, lol, something go wrong there?

Anyway, the artwork here is also good as is most of the animation, though there are some parts in this where it seems to be a little odd and the change in art. Though most of the time it seemed to work well and it did fit in with the song and the talking, so good job on that. Infact, nice work alround :)

5/5

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MichaFrario responds:

Thanks alot! ^_^But...What do you mean by the names?
Also the only big change is the chibi thing, which was a returning joke from "Dio"

oh, and Haruhi kicks ass. can't wait for season 2! You rock!

[BlueHippo's a BBS mod! :0]

Alright

Alright well the story here is decent though it seems a little short, that might be because a lot of it seemed like talking out the ban message, it would have been better just to mumble the first bit then read the ban message and maybe zoom in on BlueHippos name in a shocked sense, that's if you would be shocked about it, lol.

The graphics are still so so, the computer I would suggest using grey and shades of to give it some dimension to it and Wade looks a little, strange, dunno just something about him there. The voice acting was clear though, so that's good.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I know, Wade's hair looks like an afro. XD

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Umm Okay

Well it was certainly very random, though I can't say it's really a good thing I mean the flash itself didn't really sound too much like it has a plot and nothing much really happens. Try working with a story that will keep the viewers intrested in what is going to happen and try to either make it longer or have something more happen other than what happend here.

The graphics where so-so, I mean some of the objects looked pretty good but others not so and some of the animation was kind of eh, the animated bong seemed to be kind of pointless and not really needed. Keep working at it though.

2/5

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks

[News Reporter III]

Okay

Well the graphics for this could still be improved, also it's intresting how you have also used some of your past charactors in the background through the window. The story is a little diffrent to what I expected but still pretty good, the last part about dying and coming back didn't really seem to be needed in my opinion.

The sound was decent and the voice acting was also pretty good too, although I think you went a bit off on the first line of News Reporters, but the rest sounded like him, so that's all good. Also, first time I've been mentioned in anyones credits, thanks ;P

3/5

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kinggila responds:

You're welcome. :)

[CandyHolics]

Alright

The first thing I must say is the cursor is annoying for the main flash part, a smaller one would have been better and the menu could do with a little work, though it does do it's job. As for the main flash itself, some of the animation is okay and other bits a little jerky, some pretty decent graphics and story.

The voice acting is pretty good too, although some of it is a little crackly, so that could be worked on and the parts where text shows is too fast, fade it out at times maybe. Overall though, a pretty decent flash, it's the story that counts more than anything.

3/5

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Bahamut's Newgrounds]

Alright

Well to be honest I'm not really into the whole "My Newgrounds" flash, though this is diffrent from the others in the way that it has voices and isn't a video, so I guess that's a good thing. There's not too much I can comment on since it's pretty much about what you do, although it is in a simler style to the others, I think it would have helped to draw the desk with a little more detail, looks too flat.

Most other things are okay, some decent animations and graphics though some not so, but I guess this was more about the talking which was clear and pretty good although some pauses. Eh, but really the desk needs a touch more work.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

Funny, because recently, I have been thinking about an improved desk and I should make a better design of one. :)

[Edgar N' Locke 05]

Alright

Music isn't really something I pay a great deal of attention to, so I can't really get too much about this though some of the jokes you have used are still pretty funny although there could be some more voice work on them, I mean it's clear and easy to hear but sometimes I think you don't quite say it in the way that it is suppost to be ment, so maybe work on that.

The graphics where sprites mostly and verious backgrounds, okay so it worked but wasn't anything too special, the mouth movement also did it's job fine. Although I was a little worried that there wasn't much character movement, it kind of made the flash lack in a way. But otherwise, a pretty decent job ;)

3/5

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kinggila responds:

Ah yes, the lack of character movement was my main concern here, but others enjoyed the flash anyway, so I can't complain. Thanks for the review Little-Rena.

[MZ's G&W Collab Parts]

Needs Work

The music to start with didn't sound the best of quality, it kind of sounded like you recorded it from a player to your PC, try to have the music file on your PC and import it to flash as oppose to recording it, also the music cut short of the end of the flash, which wasn't too good, should have lasted the whole length.

The animation, well parts of it where okay but other parts seem to be rough or badly drawn, you need to put a little more time into them. The idea was pretty random to, it didn't really seem to have any direction. The length I can understand the kind of shortness to it because it was part of a collab originally, still you could have edited this version a little.

1/5

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McZero responds:

Sorry, Yeah I know I SUCK ;_;

[Yotsubato!]

Ah Yotsuba&!

I haven't read the manga in quite sometime now but I do remember reading the one this is based on, though only slightly so I can't remember how accurate this is, maybe you could say, it would save me looking it up, lol.

It's pretty short and fast paced, not really a problem though if it was a little longer it would be nice, it is also pretty funny though maybe if the last part was done a touch slower it would be more so. The graphics are pretty poor but at the same time pretty nice looking, they could be improved a touch though.

But overall, not to bad, the audio was clear and everything else looked good, I would like to see a longer Yotsuba&! animation though, I think that would be good :3

5/5

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Skaijo responds:

Thanks for the kind words. The animation is pretty accurate to the manga--panel for panel up until the very last line. <3 I figured it would just be a silly way to end it.

Yeah, the graphical quality was turned way down as I never really expected to turn this into Newgrounds but just show it to a very few friends who'd get the joke. I got up the nerve to share some of my shorts here on this site though, Yotsubato! including.

I do need to work on making better links though.

There actually is an extended Yotsuba animation on Newgrounds, if you haven't already stumbled across it. It's called Metal Gear Yotsuba--and there's plenty of source material references thrown into that mix too.

[Socialist World Republic]

Alright

It's not too bad, the song is pretty good and the quality is nice too, I also like the fact that you have two sets of subtitles so it isn't compleatly lost on people who can't speak the language it is spoken in, I know I can't, lol. But a pretty intresting idea here, although maybe a little stange to many people.

The animation itself is pretty good in some places but a little off in others, like the moving mouths of the creatures, it would look better if they moved with the music. The drawings where pretty good too but some of them lacked detail, like the clothes of the workers, they just looked plain red, some added detail would look nice.

But otherwise, a pretty good peice of flash here, good job on this one and good luck with works in the future :)

4/5

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Kenzu responds:

Thank you!

Good review!
Thank you for the hints on improvement!