Pretty Neat
I thought the story to this was pretty good and some of the humour here was also nice although you still need to work on the graphics and the animation, that would make the flash look much better if you can keep working on that. But the sound is good and the background music makes it not seem empty, so you don't get bored of this also the voices where clear.
So overall, you have a nice plot to it and good quality sound, but it's just the animation and drawings you need to work on more than anything. I did like the intro here too, although it's the same as all of your intros, it's nice. And a late happy halloween.
4/5
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