Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Love This Movie]

Very Intresting

Well to start with, I thought this was just going to be simler to all the other flashes that are about making the best flash ever and such, though I kept watching anyway, which turned out to be longer than I first expected. It had it's moments of good points and bad points though and what was with the colour of Toms skin, lol.

Some of the jokes made me laugh a little and the animations fit quite well as with the graphics of flash by other people that you had in this flash, it was pretty good with those although some parts they had a weird outline around them, lol. Still, most of it worked and the voice acting was pretty good.

Keep flashing and everything, look forward to seeing more of your flash in future, just maybe some not so long ones, lol.

5/5

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RSQViper responds:

Tom's skin was dusty brown because he's tan and sexy. I dare you disagree!!! lmao.

And, yeah, this baby was LONG. We didn't mean it to be and you should see all the script and death we left OUT to make it shorter.

And we WILL keep flashing because we actually LIKE bearing our private parts in public. We don't care how many times we get fined and thrown in jail!!!

That is what you meant, right?

Thanks for the review, Little-Rena!

[Ears: Die Hard]

Yeah

It wasn't too bad, some of the graphics where nice as well as the sounds, though some of the backgrounds and such looked a little weird, so many imporve on some, the animation was pretty good though, not really a problem with that. Though the idea is nice using ears, it was pretty hard to tell who was talking at time, might want to do something with that.

I also thought that the flighting might have gone on a little too long, although it might be because it isn't really my type of flash, still pretty decent work though, which is nice to see. Good luck with future flashes and such :)

2/5

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thornebush5 responds:

Interesting, I thought that I could have put in more fighting. Well glad you liked it.

[Satan's Complaint]

Hmm

The story seemed a little diffrent to some of your other flashs in a way, though still okay I thought it lacked a little humour this time around, more because it was a little hard to understand the whole purpose, though the ending was the funniest part about this flash.

Graphics still need some work, the door is fine but outside the door, try to make it look less flash by drawing the floor part a little lower down and maybe some lighing and the cup on the desk made the desk look a little flash, give the top a little more room maybe? Some of the other things looked alright though, maybe some background animation in the window such as a bird flying by, just to give a little more to look at.

Keep working at it though and I look forward to seeing your next flash :)

3/5

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kinggila responds:

The whole purpose was to make a flash about Satan, because I neglected him for a few months. :P

Yeah, I'm aware about that bad background outside the door. :( And a bird flying across the window, yeah, I should have done that. :D

Thanks for the review!

[Jim: The Movie (Trailer)]

Okay

Well graphics wheren't too stong here, some of the backgrounds and effects used did look pretty nice, though you are keeping with the same basic shape which is okay. There was some animation in this which was pretty good too, though some of it look simple, it worked and what works is best to use. The preloader was a little poor though, could have been a little tider for presentation.

Voice acting was pretty good, although the voice of the narrator wasn't on some words, didn't sound too smooth though still good enough and clear, which is good. Also the music and sounds here where good too, very clear and easy to hear, so no problems with sound.

Quite an intresting idea here in someways, though maybe done before, still pretty good and well played out.

3/5

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Jimtopia responds:

I made the preloader at 1 AM in order to meet my deadline, and had been working for 4 hours before then to finish the cartoon, I didn't put 100% into making it. Anyway, thanks for the review, glad you liked it.

[News Reporter II]

Alright

Well there was some humour in this which is good though some of it was a little eh in someways, but still good. The voices where okay and clear, though at times the sounded a little similer, maybe find a way around that maybe take a little more time in some parts though other parts where okay.

Graphics are still a slight problem here, the desk doesn't look much like a desk also the walking, there is an easy way to do walking if you can make the desk right. If you make the desk hide the legs, then you can bob a person up and down to give the impression of walking, no need to animate legs then. Also the arms, if you could make it look like they picked the paper up it would be good too.

Keep working at it, you have the ideas for flash but you just need to work on the drawings and presentation of them.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

Yes, myself and News Reporter sound too similar, but hey, I do voice acting for both of them, so it should be reasonable for them to sound similar to each other. :)

Now that's an interesting tip on how to make them look like they're walking. It's lazy, but it could work well. :D Thanks for that great tip and thanks for reviewing Little-Rena.

[Bbq-ish Cop 3]

Amazing

This flash had pretty much everything going for it, you had a great intro and some really nice art and then an amazing plot twist right at the end. I was expecting something really bad to happen to him, but nothing did which is really nice. Though this did not have as much going on as the previous ones, it was still pretty funny to see, really unexpected to say the least.

You have good use of colour and some intresting humour going on in this, I can't really suggest anything to improve on, this is just pretty good alround, diffrent yet funny, words alone can not explain this flash.

5/5

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Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thanks pumpkin

[Bahamut's Bonfire Night]

Alright

Well this was a pretty short flash, that's to be said, a little longer and a bit more to it would have been a little more intresting to watch. As well as the graphics could have been a little better, such as making the flame a movie clip with more than one frame just to make it look a little more realistic. Though the animation of the rocket actually launching and then exploding was pretty good.

Other than the lack of much going on, this was pretty decent, though you should take some time to work on better lip movement and some shadeing, that would improve some of the looks, but keep flashing and a happy late bonfire night.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I would've made the flash longer if I had more time and thought up the idea sooner. Maybe next year. :)

[Tornado Alley]

Hmm Okay

Well it was alright in terms of animation though I didn't really get much about the flash itself, I liked some of the angles that you had animated with, that made it look pretty good and the background was flashing a lot, I could see how that fit in but after a while it got a little too much, maybe if it was a little slower or three colours just to make it a little easier on the eyes.

The drawings however where pretty good here and all, the music and sounds also fit in and easy to hear though sometimes it cracked a little. The end sound was a little harsh on the ears, lol, but I wouldn't sit and watch that for very long anyway since it was just the ending loop. Overall not too bad but maybe needs a little more direction.

3/5

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Imacow responds:

Thanks, I noticed that if the flashing takes yp more than half of the screen it gets annying to me.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 4]

Haha

Well to start that actually just looked like it was going to be another flash about pong, which it was in a way but took a diffrent approce to what I have seen before which is good. Although the outline of the players in this could be a little better and some shading on them would have helped, that didn't effect the actual flash for me.

Although it was short, it was still quite entertaining, so that's really good, the ending was somewhat unexpected and pretty funny, though the funniest part was the score change, no idea why, lol. So pretty good with this, could improve on graphics in some ways, but otherwise, nice.

4/5

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Jimtopia responds:

I'm glad you thought it was funny; and thanks for reviewing!

[The Burgaler's Warning]

Okay

The story and humour here is probably the best part about this though it does seem a little odd and maybe draged on in parts, still not too bad to listen to, the voice acting is pretty good and clear also the sounds and music fit in to, so good choice with that.

The graphics and animation here could be improved a lot, the grey lines although do show an outline do kind of make the image look worse and viewing the person from the back when talking all the time looks a little lazy, some basic lip movements would add diversity in parts, not saying you can't view from the back but maybe not for all the time. Also, the notes came from above but there is no window, inconsistant, lol.

Keep working at it though, the story isn't too bad, just the graphics, but practice is all you really need :)

2/5

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demoninabottle responds:

thanks bro