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[Edgar N' Locke 07]

Alright

Seems like a pretty decent idea to have people sharing views on something, there where some funny parts to this, I mean with the soldiers it was pretty funny, it's kind of how I imagin people who play Guitar Hero to change their view on something. I've never played that game, looks like a pointless game to me, but that aside.

The animation here with the spinning in and the text transition did work though with the soldiers it looked a little odd since they are in a group. Not sure if you noticed but on the subtitle background, you had a black space between the gradient thing and the border on the left side, might want to fix that. But otherwise, pretty good work, could work a little on the voice acting too though, some parts seemed to lack emphasis.

4/5

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kinggila responds:

I remember a time when 99% of the population hated DragonForce.

Hmm, I've not noticed that mistake. I'm guessing it was a minor one, so it's not worth myself opening the .fla just to fix it. Still, thanks for noticing that and of course, thanks for the review. :)

[Bytesize Collab 2]

Nothing Special

There where a few decent submissions in this flash, but not too many, much of them lacking humour more than anything, some of them had some okayish humour but nothing really too funny. The style seemed to represent the Bytesize on Newgrounds quite well, so that's an okay point. The art in Rays parts where the best here, the others kind of lacked.

Overall, it would have been nice to have a selector part as well though the skiping this was pretty good. The buttons on the menu didn't seem to work too well with the whole look of the menu though. Some pretty good parts here I will say, but no solid laughs and nothing too special.

2/5

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djnet responds:

aww i got a <3 thanks for the helpful review...^_^

[Casualty in New York City]

Hmm

I don't really know what to say on this flash, there didn't seem to be a whole lot that happend in this, quite short and well not much happend, lol. The tweening of the still images worked in a way but they where moving up and down a little while across the screen, might want to work on making them smoother. Everything else there wasn't really much of, the animation was okay from what you had.

The sound was easy to hear and the interuption of the New York song was timed pretty well with everything, but other than that I can't really see too much in this flash, no real plot or anything, I guess the ending is kind of funny but I'm more lost on this one than anything else, sorry.

2/5

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kinggila responds:

Oh well. :(

[Skate Something ep.1]

Well

I have to say there isn't anything here that really strikes me as being too intresting to watch, some of the animation is good and the sound effects also seem good, so does the music. The major problem is, nothing really seems to happen, it's like watching something right to the end and not really having a point to it. Add some humour, more skaters even, just have something happen.

Another thing is it seems too short, needs to be longer as well as having something happen, once you have that it will be much better. The roof or path, whatever it was could also have had more detail, the other backgrounds where pretty good though, just have something happen really.

2/5

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sistem69 responds:

Yeah many people said that and for that reason im going to make the next one longer and add some more skaters.

[Afro_Stud - The Fairytale]

Pretty Good

Okay, some of the images could still be worked on, I mean you could have had a voice for Hilter like finding some audio clips and making it sound like he is talking, that would have been good to have. Also with the poster in the background, it would have been good to just keep it a still image and not moving. The signatures on the book could have been done with a script font, might have looked better.

The story itself was okay, the first part could have presented better to make it look a little more like an advert but after that it seemed to come together pretty well, decent enough voice acting and everything, just some details to work out with the presentation of everything in the flash more than anything.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I preferred Hitler to be silent on this flash. Also, nah, I liked the way the poster is now. It's there for some extra animation. Plus, it represents how angry I am. :P

Thanks again for another review Little-Rena. :)

[A Thousand Frames]

Intresting

Well first thing I have to say is the music you picked didn't sound too loop very well, though the animation did seem to work in a way with it, I would have picked some music that looped better or something that lasted through the whole timeline. Other than that though it seems to come together pretty well, so good work there.

Some parts had some good detail and others seemed to lack, so a little inconsistant, I did like the way the scenes changed though, that was done well and most other parts in this where also done well, so good job overall here.

4/5

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blackcat2000 responds:

It didn't? Personally i thought it sounded alright, and since it's a loop, the file size would remain relatively small... or at least smaller than one that lasts the whole animation. But yes, I did that for my second piece.
The inconsistency is to do with me drawing as I imagined... I agree fully though. I'll work on that. Thanks for the review!

[A Thousand Two Frames]

Okay

That seemed to kind of work, although it lacked much direction to it, most of the animation seemed to be done very well and such, though nothing really stood out to me in this, maybe because of the lack of direction. Some of the parts seemed to not really look too good but others seemed to be done very well.

It would be good to see you take this another step further and do something that has a plot to it in someway, could keep the kind of random touch to it, just add some direction. Might not even need voices if you do it right, but otherwise, pretty good work on this.

3/5

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blackcat2000 responds:

Hmm... randomness with a plot eh... that's a new one... Sounds good, but I'd have to find a way to do it :P
Definitely considered. Thanks for the review :D

[The Beelion]

Lacking

This is certainly very lacking, there is some good work to it but the main opening part seems to go on for too long, the script for that is good but the background doesn't seem to change much, so it gets kind of boring to watch, some more background would be good, some changes to it.

The other part to it seems to be done okay though some work on the bees face would have been better, the sound was okay though I think the voices could have had more to them, they sounded kind of timid more than anything.

2/5

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blackcat2000 responds:

Yes, the looping background and beelion seems to be a major aspect which is easily fixed, yet missed out by me...
For the bee's face... I was working on the mane for quite a while, and wanted a... naive looking beelion? Innocent? As for the sound, that can always be improved. Thanks for the review :)

[News Reporter V]

Alright

One thing, you said "re-hire" in the subtitles but the voice said "hire", just thought I would point that out to start with. Other than that, you seemed to have an okay story for most part, though a little eh at times, but pretty good. The voice acting could still be improved a little, for Omega anyway, sounds like he's breathing into the mic, which doesn't sound too good.

The graphics and animation could still be improved, Omega looked almost the same as News Reporter, lol. A few more details in part and such, the sound effects where good and the ending was pretty good too.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I would have corrected the line to say "re-hire" but considering the time shortage, I had to leave it as it was. As for Omega, his mic sucks.

"Omega looked almost the same as News Reporter, lol."

That's because he's:

1. Possibly related to News Reporter.
2. He's the #1 News Reporter fan. ;)

[All Your Leet]

Not Good

To start with I have to say, the sound quality is pretty poor here, it sounds like you have recorded it from the speakers, so you might want to work on that. Another is the animations and graphics are all out of proportion, they don't stay in the screen, you might also want to work on that really. The graphics and animation could also be better, the images used at the end could be bigger too, way too small.

As for the song, you have the subtitles that don't match the song in parts, I get that you are changing it to 1337 but maybe you could have gotten someone to redo the song to be based around that, it would have sounded much better. Overall, much more work could be done to improve this.

1/5

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Sispri responds:

I should've, but i Couldn't have editted myself. I Have little resources.