Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Pico Day 2008!!]

Is That It?

You haven't really put much time into this flash from the looks of it, you have the image of Pico Day 2008 which is with the preloader just getting bigger and you've added some text. Sure it's a simple message but there isn't a whole lot more with this flash that is worth watching. The sound is good, so yeah, some points for your choice of music, lol.

Really, this is lacking everything, I was kind of expecting some real animation, not just an intro to some text. Try to add some animation to this, something that the viewer can watch and enjoy. A storyline would have been a start, note down some ideas on what you can do then try and animate it.

0/5

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UnknownFear responds:

To be honest, I'm not really good with Flash :( I have stopped using for for months. :(

[Pokemon Bahamut Version]

Intresting

I watched this a while back when you submitted it, was going to review it then but I expected that you where going to submit it to the review request club, your predicatable tactic makes you weak on the battlefield, lol.

That aside, the introduction on this was done pretty well, opened up with the whole pokemon theme and the music was good too, the menu here was also done very well, looked much like a pokemon menu, so good work with that. The whole thing kept with the pokemon game just with voice acting added, I liked the black and white style too at the start, brings back memories of the original Gameboy.

When it changed into colour, the diolog box didn't have a colour border, I would have advised to do that. The cheat screen part was done very well and then the part after that with a glitch and all. Though it might have been funny to use Missingno for that scene then a glitch, but either way that was done well.

Too bad Hitler will beat you too it in a fair manner. Also, this is probably one of your better flashes I have seen, good work on this, it had a much better plot to it than some others.

5/5

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kinggila responds:

I was gonna leave Missingno. until a possible Bahamut: CAI493+D 000 was made. Sadly, I doubt I will ever make that. :(

Thanks for another great review! :)

[Edgar N' Locke 06]

Alright Then

Didn't really see much story to this, could have done with a little more going on, the voice acting was okay though and everything, the sprites seemed to be fine too but not much in the way of animation. Diolog box and the text, very clear to read, which is good, so again, no problems with that.

The new feature might be good to some people who want to listen to it, but maybe not to others, I tried it just to see, so okay it's done pretty well, not being forced on the viewer at the credits which is good to see and some details about it, so good job with that.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

"Didn't really see much story to this"

True, but it was a rough sketch on some kid who was fooled by the music stores' bad metal labelling. :)

[VZ Series:Naruto V Sasuke]

Okay

It wasn't too bad in terms of putting the sprites together to work and the sound was mostly decent quality but it could have been better. The layout was probably not so good though, the text was most of the time hard to read, you could improve that by having a solid colour for the text to be on and a simple font, nothing fancy, fancy is often hard to read.

At times some of the images seemed to be streached, like the background, that looked streached to me. Though the use of animations from the anime, although cheating did kind of work, so thats one slightly good point. The choice of endings was a good idea and the replay going back to the choice screen.

One other thing I will mention, the flicking back and forth on the sprite faces doesn't really work because it looks very pixilated. But otherwise, not too bad.

2/5

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mortis5000 responds:

Thank but I don't understand what you mean when you say..."Though the use of animations from the anime, although cheating did kind of work, so thats one slightly good point. ", please explain...

[Under My Voodoo]

Pretty Good

This was a pretty good flash, some of the animation was done very well and so where some of the drawings, though at times it seemed a bit off but nothing major. I wasn't too keen on the introduction and some of the parts that had no real background, those kind of let it down a little. One part where it's a blue background and text on it flashing didn't look too good.

There where some bits of humour in this too, which is good to see, some odd choices to put with the music, but nothing major. The music was okay, though at times the lyrics might have been hard to hear, but all in all a good job.

5/5

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Voodoo responds:

The movie was synced a lot better at one point, but in the final stages when I was putting the movie together, I hit some problems. And after I did the flashing part I hated myself, I was just too lazy at the time to redo it. D:

[Chalk Adventure]

Alright

Well the idea was pretty good, the sounds and everything where also pretty good to hear and everything seemed to fit well, though I might question the choice of music to this. It obviously sounds and looks like it took a lot of time to do, I could never be patiant enought to do 10 frames, let alone the ammount you did.

This didn't really seem to have much direction to it, the one major thing I would suggested is planning, much of this seemed to come across as being more random than anything. Just needs direction is all, more of a story behind what's going on or events that work from the last to the next.

4/5

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Graeme responds:

Questioning the music choice is the last thing I expected to hear.
I guess it's not for everyone, but I think it's a beautiful piece of piano. I think piano will be a central theme in my chalk movies.

I honestly did plan this one. Haha. I know it seems random, but I had a plan.
butterfly flies in (past flower)
transforms into blah blah blah.
that turns into this, falls ___ direction.

It's an awkward thing to plan out a movie with no story, but I did still. Haha.
I will try to work around a more solid plot next time

[Street Fighter Series pt2]

Alright

Well a good point to this is that you had sound effects that did work with the animations, so that's pretty good to note. I didn't like how in parts you have things strech over, that didn't look too good and the diolog box could have been done a little better in my opinion. The main plot for this was hard to follow after a while, it just got kind of repetitive.

This could be good to watch for someone who is intrested in mindless fighting with a bit of diolog, but it's not really to my taste, so sorry about that. The lava below the part where they are fighting could be done better, as it is, it just looks like the platform they are on is floating.

2/5

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mortis5000 responds:

Thank You for your review...I must admit that I seen my architectural mistake at the very last minute and couldn't change it...the camera that I was using did cause distortion in some places in the flash...I'm still trying to figure that out.

[BlueHippo's Birthday :0]

Alright

Well it wasn't too bad, the scene which had the violance in did seem to kind of work with the flashing lights and everything, so that's pretty good, didn't really need to have the actually fighting. Though a diffrent voice would have been good for the one being killed, might have given the ending away but maybe would have been a little better to have.

The sound effects and voice acting where okay, though the sound effects where better, lol. No offence on the voice acting, some of it was good but some parts could have donw with work. On the whole, it wasn't too bad.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

But Wyvern, Fagamut and Bahamut all have the same voice. A different voice would have given it away. It's also why I kept that violent scene hidden.

[AnalogyOfFrozenSheep Ep 7]

Very Silly

That to me came across as being pretty random and quite silly, no real structure to it but all the drawings did seem to work well with all the music you used. I don't even mean silly in a bad way either, infact it's quite amusing much of this, though some parts did seem a little odd and not really very intresting, but much of it was good and intresting to see.

The choice of diffrent musics was also pretty good, I wasn't too keen on the last one, but that's down to taste, everything else used was good and I did like how the animation actually worked with them, I've seen other people do something like this but often they don't have much flow, you did.

5/5

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FrozenSheep responds:

Aww, the "..two colors in my head" scene was my favorite.
Sorry if the music didin't exactly fit your taste.

Anyway, thanks for the review.

[Spiderman vs. Pie]

Okay

Well the use of images there was worked pretty well and they way they where presented was also pretty clever, the audio was clear to hear and everything, so that was okay. It did also fit in with the images and such, what animation there was also seemed pretty good too, though some parts where bleh.

I wasn't too keen on the idea of this, it seemed to try too hard to be silly and random, though some parts of this where kind of funny, others where just not at all funny. But that's personal taste, not too bad overall though.

2/5

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SteamTusk responds:

To each their own, you seem to be in the minority as of so far because the tens seem to keep rollin' in. Appreciate the feedback, thanks for watching! C: