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[Please help me!]

Good Start

Well it's a good start, I will say that but it is lacking quite a bit too, the idea and the base for everything is there, which is good, though you might want his arms to be at his side when he's not using them as oppost to being at an angle. Much of the animation is pretty okay, some parts could be better but nothing too bad in that sense and the music is easy to hear.

I would suggest having some backgrounds and even colour or just have shades of black/grey/white if you want to do it that way. Like I say, it's a start and it seems like there is a base here, but you could do so much more to make it look better. The subtitles are okay but they could be improved too, just have a grey bar along the bottom at something like 50% Opacity and put the text over that.

2/5

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flixing responds:

Ok!

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6]

Hehe

That was pretty ammusing, the style of the drawing here doesn't seem to change much, pretty low detail charators but that's okay, it does work in a way, though kind of odd how they don't have arms. Anyway, the flash itself is pretty good and everything, decent animation for most part, even if a little simple in looks, lol. The sound effects are good and the voice acting is also good too.

I did like the plot here, it's kind of simple yet unexpected, the whole thing does seem to work though and well I must say. At first it just seemed like something silly, then you have an explosion, lol. So yeah, overall, there is nothing wrong with this and on top of that, I do like this episode more so than previous ones, good work.

5/5

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Jimtopia responds:

Lol, arms are overrated! If you've got a pair of circles that float near you, who needs arms? Glad you liked this episode the most, shows I'm improving.

[Bahamut's Favourite PMs]

Private Messages

Are suppost to be private, lolol. But all the same, I lack getting stupid messages from people, I've had a few but yeah, some of those where silly, I would have picked more supid ones if I where you though. As for a gallary at the end, that would have been much better to see in my view, might be annoying to make but could have been more intresting for the viewer.

The idea is okay, as with the idea for the reviews, but I don't think this one was as good, I mean it did lack a bit of humour in comparison to the review one, more stupid PMs could have fixed that. I'd also like to say that your mouse is almost as big as the sprite, lmao. But pretty good, just needs more.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

Everyone loves that huge mouse. XD

[Wegra Adventure 3]

More Work Needed

This really needs much more work, there isn't really much animation, though you do have some here and the graphics aren't really all that great. I mean sure it could be good if you had a much funnier plot to it, but this really seemed like you where trying a little too hard to do something random, but didn't really come out too well, the voice could have been better, this was too deep, slow and hard to hear.

It was also bad how you didn't draw a whole lot in many parts of this, or you drew something that wasn't really related too well, you should make things somewhat relevent and draw all the way if you are going to do something. I mean, if you are too lazy to draw, take up something like sprites or something, lol. Overall, much work is needed.

1/5

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Wegra responds:

Personally,I think each Wegra adventure has more animation then the last.

[Movement1 - chippy]

Alright?

I don't really know what to say about this, I mean it does seem like a time consuming project you have here and the first part did seem to work but after the photos at the traffic lights, it just seemed to go wrong in a way, moved too fast and couldn't really see what was after the traffic lights too clearly, that was the worst part to this.

The idea itself is kind of diffrent and kind of good in a sense but really needs a little more work, more photos for parts maybe? Or not have it going as fast but fast enough to seem like it is moving. The audio was okay, dunno why you picked it to represent this but it did work fine, so okay. Overall a decent idea, just needs work.

2/5

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Bezman responds:

"it just seemed to go wrong in a way, moved too fast and couldn't really see what was after the traffic lights too clearly, that was the worst part to this."

Fair point and thanks for the tip.

Another great review from you! Ta!

[Wegra Adventure 2]

Worse

This was actually worse than the first one, it wasn't as long for one thing and nothing really improved here, the graphics are still pretty bad and there is very little animation, it would be good to improve on both of those. The plot here well there was no plot but I mean the whole what of a story you had didn't really work, seemed more like you rushed the idea rather than thought about it, needs more work with a story.

The fast narration is okay, I think that does make for a good fast paced story, but there isn't really anything else here that is all that good. Everything needs working on, the story, the graphics and the length of the whole thing, think about a solid or funny plot and try that, spend longer on it.

1/5

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Wegra responds:

yeah,

[Wegra Adventures]

Umm What?

Well it might have been an okay idea but kind of lacking in graphics and everything, there was little animation if any, I mean I didn't notice any, so it would have been good to have some. The graphics, okay I mean I don't mind them being bad, they did kind of work with the fast pace of the stroy and everything, but they did kind of lack in a party.

The whole narration was okay, kind of fast but that pace was good and did work with the whole thing. The only thing that let it down really was the whole story, it didn't seem to make a whole lot of sense, if any as well as much of the humour in this not really being all that funny. Good idea but didn't really come out too well in my view.

1/5

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Wegra responds:

Alright, Thats cool Thanks for the review.

[Tywo At Large Ep. #2]

Pretty Good

This seems to be a pretty good flash, though didn't really find this one too funny in many ways, though it is pretty good. The style of this is also very good and done pretty well though the narration didn't seem to be that much of something like this sort of video, so maybe that could be worked on a bit if you plan on doing something like this again.

Animation here was good and the graphics where also very good, the black and white worked well with this I think, though there was one part with colour, not sure what you where trying there but okay. Overall a pretty decent flash and it definatly had it's moments, but lacked somethings I feel.

5/5

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Pixmintro responds:

The color part was just some strange half-baked idea I had to scare the crap out of the kids watching my presentation in Chemistry class.

[Bahamut's Fav. Reviews]

Pretty Good

The whole layout to this was pretty good, I mean with the skipping and everything. But on the last skip arrow, it skips by one frame into the fade, so I'd suggest removing the arrow on the review comment. There was some pretty decent comments as well as some jokes here and there, nothing that funny but still pretty good.

One other thing I would suggest is at the end, have a list of the flash you took the reviews from so people could go and look at them. Also, the graphics here such as the mouse need to be fixed in the size, smaller mouse and some better graphics would be nice to see. Wasn't too supprised not to see one of my reviews here either, lmao :P

Anyway, pretty good work, the idea has been used before but the layout of this with the skipping was good. Though it could be better with some voice acting on the reviews, your own voice or someone else to do it, doesn't matter a whole lot.

5/5

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kinggila responds:

I see you found that minor skipping glitch I deliberately left unfixed. I guess I could have added a keyframe there where the skip scene arrow doesn't appear, but meh. XP

You're right about that. I could have said which flashes the reviews were for, but really, I didn't want to do anything else to that scene since taking screenshots of all those reviews, cutting them out and adding them onto the flash was tedious as hell.

Hey, your reviews deserved to be on this flash. :)

[Graham Loves Goatse]

Intresting

Other than him liking goatse, I can't see a whole lot in this flash, I mean you could have maybe expanded a little and played with it. Such as saying you will make a goatse flash, invite him over to watch it and it's something totally diffrent, maybe even showing him a video of Afro_Stud dancing to the song he was singing in the opening part, that could have been funnier to see, then have him rage in a fit.

As it is right now though, it is really lacking a lot of things but as suggested above, it did have some potential, maybe make a second part with more story to it? Otherwise, it seems okay, though it's mostly just diolog.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I could make a second part to this, but that won't be done until quite a long time due to other flashes I need to make first. Since a few wanted to see what happens afterwards, I should work on a second part to this. :)