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[What an awesome Dress up]

Yeah

Well as far as dress up games go, this does exactly what it says it does, you can dress someone up in diffrent clothes. It's nothing to exciting though, I mean you have a nice combernation of clothes but not too much else to do. Why is it hard to find something for a mouth too and the eyes don't have pupils, lol. Somethings could be improved on this with the face items.

Also, you are limited to one person to dress up, more would be a little better, though once you have created a look, what's after that. There is little aim to dress up games I find most of the time. But the drawing is pretty good and the sound is clear, pretty nice work.

2/5

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Mercenary81 responds:

I got excited after learning the coding for dragging stuff and couldn't think of anything else to make.

[pogger 2]

Umm, Alright

This is very lacking in terms of looks, some of the buttons like the retry one are hard to click, so you might want to work on your buttons and the menu is all over the place an inconsistant. The art work could be improved as well as text, keep with fonts that work well together and don't try to draw the text unless you are sure its going to fit in. Also the crome gradient doesn't make a good background.

The game itself can be very annoying to do, although there is a pattern to the movment, there is little room to hide for them to pass, you might want to make it a touch easier there, also the car level has no boundarys, so you can just go all the way off the screen, which seems silly. The idea might work but looks need improvments as well as gameplay.

2/5

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[NG Tutorials: B/P Pts]

Not Ammused

This sends a poor message out to people, as oppose to helping a problem with blaming and protecting or actually giving a helpful guide, it's pretty much telling people how to blind vote and still get points from it. This send the wrong message and isn't something that a tutorial should be written about, try changing the message to something that would help people, by telling them what the numbers do and explaing voteing power.

The looks to this where very basic too, the buttons where kind of hard to read and the background was a little slow. Also, while on the subject of looks, it is very badly laid out, the text is easy to read but the pictures just seem to be placed randomly. The loop fits with the theme, but gets annoying after a while, consider a mute button.

1/5

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Sispri responds:

Just turn the volume down then

[A How to of Sprites]

Eh, Okay

The preloader was pretty intresting with the comments there, though not really needed. The main menu looks a little bleh, it could look a little better, a nice background and some buttons there would have been good. The whole tutorial could have had a better layout too, it was quite bland and not too plesent to look at which makes me as a viewer not really intrested in the tutorial. The content was pretty standard with all Sprite Tutorials, nothing too new in terms of content.

It does help for those who are intrested in making sprite animations, but it doesn't really want to make you read it. The music isn't too good either, though you have a mute button, try something more calming and have some backgrounds, more than just an image of Shadow. So yeah, several improvments to be made here, good luck with future tuorials.

2/5

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knuxrouge responds:

Last time you said that my layout was too much. Its hard to gauge whats just right in terms of background and overall layout for everyone. The thing about opinion from the outside is they have little clue how hard it is to appease everyone.
You complain about the lack of a detailed layout, but in my preloader tutorial, you complained about the layour all together---I focused more on the usefulness of the flash rather than how spiffy it looked. If you don't like the music, well tough nuts. Some people liked it, some didn't. I'm not supposed to know what everyone likes nor do I care, in terms of music I get what I like since I know I can't appease to everybody who views this.

[X-HOC]

Pretty Cool

It's a pretty cool game to play, I mean I like this sort of game in a way. The graphics are pretty nice and the gameplay isn't too hard to grasp, though there is the thing that it get's a little annoying when you try to chase after the ball, so yeah. That's the one thing that's annoying, the auto switching of players, manual switching would be nice and the ones that aren't selected tackle without you having to. Constantly chasing is annoying, lol.

Otherwise everything else is very nice, the sounds are good and the looks are nice too. The fact that you can learn the basics without having the read how to is also a bonus, hehe. Pretty good game all round.

4/5

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[Short Term Memory Test]

Intresting

Can't say I've seen anything quite like this attempted before, so that's good. The game itself is easy to play and get used to, which is nice. The menu is decent, though I must say I was a little lost where the play button was for a moment, lol. One thing you could do is not have the text already in the box, deleting it would make the person lose a little concentration, lol, you could just have it as a graphic and put it above the input box and have it say "Put your answer below" or something.

The time is a little too much at the opening bit, but eh, it's helpful for later on, though wouldn't you need to have one number for level 1? Since that would be one bit of information. Oh well I guess, it's pretty well made and the audio is nice too.

3/5

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for the review! I like 7/10's, lol. Thanks for the idea with the text above the text box thing! I'll do that if my other plan doesn't work. In the next one I'm taking everyone's input into consideration.

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[Decisions of Life]

Could be Better

Well the first thing is the opening, it takes too long, a skip button would be nice to have, also the fact that you have to start all over again when you make a mistake, it makes it very repetative and dull to have to watch everything again, some more choices that lead to alternate endings would be good. Some of the graphics and animations are okay and the sound effects too. Well some, others seem out of place.

The voice could be better too, like get some people to voice act for you, it would make it much more intresting. Needs more checkpoints definatly though, it's very boring to have to start from a while back, the viewer could lose intrest in this. It's a good idea but poorly executed.

2/5

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Mad-Mardigan responds:

Yeah...
Remind me not to ask for reviews again...

[Pirate Chains]

Alright

Well it's a very nice looking game, the art is amazing and the animation where there is some is also very good. It's not a hard game to learn or anything and the menu is certainly very good, I also like the music and sounds, they really work well together. So good job on all those points, it is very nice and simple in looks.

There are somethings I don't really like here though, there is no level reset button or not one that is clear anyway. I mean sometimes there are parts where there are no chains to break. But other than that, it's a very good game, seems a little underrated in my opinion though, but good work on it.

4/5

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[Windows Errors 2007]

Not Great

The first thing I noticed was the fact that the buttons on this where kind of hard to click, you have to click on the text and can't click the space between letters. Have some pactice on making better buttons. The ease of use of this is good but the actual point is kind of eh, it's not really that much fun and although some are mildly amusing, none of them are really that funny, nothing more than smile worthy.

The lack of animation and anything much to do is a real let down, I was expecting something more of an error creation game or something. There isn't really anything that sticks out to me on this. Just seems too simple and not very entertaining. Keep trying though.

1/5

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AntoArts-Admin responds:

This is an old flash, and the 08 version will have loads of improvements

[Mouse Avoider #30]

Hmm Alright

As far as mouse avoiders go, this was pretty standard, the aim is the same and everything. Though the look of it is diffrent, it looks nice and the sound is also good, plesent to look at and the menu is nice. The gameplay is simple and everything, so no real problems with that.

The one major, major flaw with this game is the same with many mouse avoiders. There is a very easy way to cheat, you need to have some way of stoping someone from pressing the right mouse button and then being able to move to the exit. Fair enough if people want to cheat, it is their choice, but you should try to cut it down if possible. But other than that it looked good.

3/5

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