Umm
I'm not really sure of this a whole lot, the intro is far too long, then you have a fairly annoying bouncing sound, it might not be so annoying if it fit with the whole tune but it doesn't seem to, just stands out. There isn't a whole lot of veriation here either, it's very repetative and kind of boring to listen to after a while, so you might want to put more too it.
You could have made a short loop and that would have been better than this, it goes on too long and doesn't sound that plesent. Parts of it are okay, minus the bouncing sound and it would be much better, the sudden end isn't too good either.
2/5
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