Little-Rena's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hey There Delilah Suck My Dick]

Intresting Idea

The idea of this is alright though I think it could do with some work on the lyrics, the last line didn't really work to well in my view and some of them really didn't go too well with the tune, try to use less words at times and ones that have less syllables, it would work a lot better in my opinion. Though the chorus did work but that's stright from the song isn't it? lol.

The tune is good and sounds like it, so yeah, like I said the idea is good just working out the lyrics needs work. Your singing is fine but at parts it seemed like you got lost with what to say and stumbled a little. Maybe try this again with diffrent words or try a diffrent song, lol.

3/5

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[Intensity of the Chase]

Okay

It seems that most of this seems to sound the same though the whole thing, though you have some changes in it, which is good, but I think that the high piched sound that plays all the way though, although works, it seems to get quite annoying to listen to after a while, to me anyway. It just sounds too high pitched for my liking.

Everything else here seems to be played well, it has a pretty fast pace to it which is good if you are going for something that is suppost to sound like a chase. Though when you lose the louder background, I think it loses a bit of it's chase sound to it.

3/5

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[+The Broken God+]

Strange

First thing that srikes me about this is the way it's played, it sounds to be done very well yes but the choice of sounds is quite intresting, they work together and everything but they give a kind of strange sound, lol. It's not a bad thing, infact I like the way it sounds and how everything here comes together, it's also pretty loud, that's not a bad thing since it works loud with this.

I've no real suggestions on how to improve this, I don't really think you could make this any better, the length is good and the veriation is also very good. Everything here seems to work very well, so really good job overall on this track.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Well, thanks! I'd like to make the mix a bit better, I don't like the volumes in some parts, my headphones start popping a bit, and I think some extra clarity would be nice. I've done a bit of building on it, but it's quite different, and it'll kind of be a song in three contrasting parts... I think. Well I have to get the other 2 done first.
I understand what you mean by "strange sound". The synths were a bit of an experiment, and the effects were packed on, to really max out the sound, and get an odd sci-fi/outer space type vibe. Although in the new section I started on, it's got a very generic techno synth in there.

Cheers for the awesome review. <3

[Passionate Playing-UMSL]

Okay

It's pretty good, though there are parts where I don't think it sounds too good but most of the way this does sound very good and played very well, so good job with that. I think everything seems to fit together pretty well and the opening was good, though sometime in the middle it seems to sound a little dull as it gets quiter, to me that didn't sound to good.

You did have plenty of veriation in this from what I could hear so that's good and the length for this is also pretty good too, I can't hear any major problems with this other than some dull sounds in parts. So overall, very good work with this.

5/5

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umsldragon responds:

Ya, I noticed some dull parts as I relisten to it. I can't think of much to change it, so I'll just letting it sit on the back burner until something else comes. Which shouldn't be too long :P

[BoomChick-Demo-UMSL]

Good Work

It sounds to be pretty good to me, I seem to recogise the tune to this peice though, but that's okay, it sounds diffrent to what I've heard before like done in a diffrent way. But it does sound very intresting with the sounds that you have used with this, the opening doesn't really sound like it will be too much but it builds up and does come together prettyer well.

It would be good if you made this longer though, would be nice to hear what you could come up with for this track. But otherwise, very good work overall, keep it up.

5/5

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umsldragon responds:

thank you for your time. I'm still workin' on this one :D

[Waterfall [R1]]

Intresting

Not too sure about some parts of this, somethings don't sound too good and kind of sharp, I thought the beginning part also went on for a little too long. The length of this is pretty long, which is good if you manage to get enough into the actual track of this, which you seem to have gotten.

The track itself has a very calm tune to it, though some of the piano keys to me seem to sound a little sharp, not sure if you ment it to be that way. The ending was done pretty well, so overall a pretty good job on this peice.

4/5

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Bezman responds:

The piano's kinda old and some keys are stiff. I'd certainly have liked some of the notes at the start to be softer. During the later parts of the tune though, I'd probably still play the right-hand sections pretty much as they sound - I think it gives it energy and tops it being /too/ relaxing.

Glad you liked it & thanks for the review!

[In-Rush]

Alright

It sounds to be pretty sameish through most of the track which is kind of a shame, it could sound a little better if it had more veriation though it. Some parts of it do sound good and such, but others not so, as well as I can't really sound much of a rush sound, maybe that's just me, lol. It also starts to sound a little busy part the way it, then calms down, not to keen on the busy sounds.

It's not too bad though, it all fits together pretty well, nothing that sounds really bad, ending being slower is a nice change and kind of works, so pretty good job on this overall.

3/5

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ShortMonkey responds:

cheers, <3 boy

[Swimming]

Alright

Well much of this did sound to be very good, most parts played out pretty well too, though I have to say the vocals in this seemed to be a little weird and maybe a little random, could do with a little more order to them. But the main beat is okay, not really to my personal liking most of the way.

The opening is good but the ending seems a little odd to me, it does loop pretty well though, which is a good thing, so good job on that part. Not much else I can say about this, pretty good alround.

3/5

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[Metal (S.C.)*]

Very Good

I though this was done pretty well, I've not heard what you are covering though, I could go and look it up but I'm too lazy. The background music sounds to be done very well which is good and some of the effects are good and some of those on the background, are those background vocals or an echo effect? The singing does fit in with this very well so good work on that.

I also think the opening and the ending are both done very well, the intro does seem to go on a while but it changes so I don't really mind listerning to it. Good job alround on this, but there was the vocals near the end where you didn't have a sort of echo sound to them, not sure if you did that on purpose or not.

5/5

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BreakingFaces responds:

Gee golly, thanks!

[Thoughts*]

Alright

Can't say there was anything here that caught much of my attention, though the tune did really sound to be good in parts and everything did seem to work together. Parts of it did to me sound a little flat, but others did have some good beats to them and such, it's not repetitive which is good to hear, lol.

Nothing stands out as being bad here, I mean I like much of the tune, there are just some things I'm not too keen on, like the scraping of an instument, I don't know what that instrument is, but maybe it could work without it. Otherwise though, I think this is certainly a pretty good tune.

5/5

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