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[+Astronaut's Waltz+]

Good

It has a very good tune to it but I seem to think that it takes a while to build up to a whole lot of anything right at the start. After a bit it seems to start building into a much better tune which is very good to hear and everything, though it does seem to sound a little repetertive in parts of this.

It does sound to be played very well, though I can't really hear a link to an astronaut in this, lol, so maybe some more spacy background to it. Unless it was suppost to be a little empty in that way, but otherwise it does seem to sound very good, nice calm tune to it so good job here.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks. Yeah, the astronaut was represented by the emptiness. I was originally going to try and get some sort of space transmission recording, but I scrapped that. The repetitiveness was all part of me trying to get the empty space feeling through, but a bit more variation probably would have been alright.
Thanks for your review.
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[Space Elevator (S.C.)]

Pretty Nice

Sounds like a pretty good song, the vocals in this are pretty good and clear through the whole song and fit to it very well. The whole beat in this is also very good and helps to fit in with it, though maybe it does get a little repetitive with the lyrics, but eh it still seems to sounds okay to me.

The ending is pretty intresting to, sounds very good though the ending vocals are kind of odd, sounds almost like it's suppost to screaming, not sure if that's what it's suppost to be. But otherwise yeah, very nice work on this.

5/5

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Thank you very much!

[The Street Life]

Better

This version is certainly better to the previous version, still not really my type of music but it still sounds like it all works an fits in. The vocals fit in and it's better to have more in this one. The whole back beat is pretty good to, gives something more to listen to, though I would have to say it sounds a little like it is missing something, maybe a bit more beat.

But other than the sound of something missing in this, it is deffinatly and improvment and more vocals work better with this version, so pretty good work overall.

4/5

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[The Street Life {sample}]

Alright

Well the beat itself seems pretty good and eveything, though after a bit gets a little sameish, it could do with more to it or some vocals, I do hope you can get some vocals put to this since it would sound much better. The one part in this where you have some it does seem to work and sound good with the whole beat. Seems you also have a silance at the end, you might want to put something there or remove it, lol.

It's not badm it seems like a start to something, but it could do with more to it and everything, so good luck with finishing this and adding more to it, it could sound pretty good if you did.

2/5

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[Wicked Spiral]

Intresting

This seems to be pretty intresting, though the main beat to this seems to get quite repetitive after a while, maybe it could do with a little more to it. It's not anything that sounds poor though, it does sound good and I thought the voice samples at a part of this where pretty nice too, though a few more of those in parts would have added some veriation to this I think anyway.

The sound is very good and everything is pretty decent, just a touch too repetitive and the ending seems to be a sudden end, unless it's ment to loop, in which case it does so pretty well, so pretty good work with this.

3/5

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CineGoryP responds:

Thanks for the <3 and the review :D

Adding voice samples could work, they just kind of disappear from the beginning. I was just experimenting with them to be honest since they usually just sound horrible in songs.

[Bearded Gentlemen from Texas]

Pretty Nice

Sounds like a pretty good song here, everything sounds pretty good and well played, the singing really fits with the whole music and adds something to it, though maybe the intro lasts for a while, it still seems to work pretty well as it's not too repetitive. The singing sounds to be pretty clear to me and everything, so that's very good to hear.

I can't hear any problems with the overall peice, it all seems to be put together very well which sounds very good. The ending is pretty nice too, so that's good, though maybe it could have done with a bit more singing or something, there are gaps with just instumental and a fair few amount of gaps to, but otherwise good work.

5/5

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[Speedy Bass (Dubstep)]

Okay

The main intro sounded pretty good, almost like an intro on a radio station, but after that it went into a beat which did seem to be a little slow and repetitive after a while, something earlier on would have been pretty good. The lack of any vocals here might be the problem with it. After a while it did seem to change into something more which was pretty good to hear.

Nothing stands out as not sounding good, I mean as a whole it does really sound pretty good as a beat, but it could do with more to it in parts. It just sounds too sameish most of the way through the whole thing. Though there are bits of change through which is good. Not sure how you would work vocals into this too easily, but it might need it.

But otherwise, pretty nice work on it overall, just needs a little more adding in my opinion and some more veriation in parts, the ending part seems to pick up pretty well though, but then goes back to a sort of repetitive tune. Well good luck with it.

3/5

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Jimbobsthebest responds:

Thanks very much for the review. I think the general consensus with this is that it is simply too repetitive... even for a dubstep tune. The introduction was meant to be a bit of a piss take. With 'more club classics and more kicking dance tunes' followed by 'fuck that shit!'.

I'm really going to work on this beat of this when i've got the time, and i'm going to change the bass so that it varies throughout.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I much appreciate it.

[Solus- She]

Good Tune

It sounds to be played very well, a good overall sound to this one, I must say. It's not too loud but it has moments where it changes into something of a deeper tune which is pretty good and there is quite a lot of veriation to this so it definatly doesn't sound repetitive to me, so that's nice. There's nothing that stands out as being too much for this peice.

Everything seems to come together very well and the ending is done pretty well as is the opening, though the long silence right at the end might be a little too much, everything else here seems to work out very well, so good work overall on this peice.

5/5

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SolusLunes responds:

Glad you like it- and as always, your reviews are informative and helpful- notably the pause at the end, that I somehow overlooked, and will rightfully remove :D

[dolphin rescue squad]

Alright

It's not too bad, I mean it sound pretty nice and nothing sticks out as sounding bad, but in parts is just seems a little lacking and some parts also seem to be a little repatitive. But most parts sound pretty nice, pretty well put together, not really a relaxing tune as much of the parts seem to sound a little sharp, but that's okay.

Can't see what it really has to do with dolphins, but okay. It also seems to loop pretty well to, so that's good, can't really comment on how it ends, I missed it when it looped, lol. So pretty nice work on this one.

3/5

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spamwangler responds:

thanks for taking the time to review :)
i agree that it goes on too long with no change and the second half could probably be removed and replaced by something different... i think im gonna have another crack at this one, seeing as a few people are suggesting similar things about it.

and yeah, there really isnt much relation to dolphins musically. i usually just name songs after whatever is in my head at the time:)

[Three Little Words by Id of Oz]

Very Good

This is a very good song, although the choice of lyrics is quite strange but really intreasing and seems to work, so that's very good, I guess, lol. It also sounds to be very well sung, so that's very good. Also fits in very well with the beats and the music is played very well, it seems to sound like it goes on longer than it does, but that's very good.

Overall it's very good, sounds pretty funny too most of the way through, so very good job on both writting this and singing this. Pretty down ending on this though, still well played and everything, can't suggest any improvments on this, it just seems to come together very well, good job.

5/5

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