Little-Rena's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bass Loop AL]

Neat Loop

Okay so this loop is pretty good, I mean as well as being your first work this is okay and pretty decent. Although the ending part of this loop seems to mess up a little from what I can hear of it, seems to just go kind of sloppy, not sure if you can hear that yourself, lol. As for looping, it does seem to loop pretty well but there is a slight pause between the start and the end.

The main playing of the thing in this is okay and sounds pretty good from what I can hear of it, no problems with the main body of it, the only thing I'm not keen on is the ending. So other than that, good work on this loop, hope you can create things a little longer than this in the future.

3/5

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[High Octane Mk I]

Nice Work

This sounds really good, it does go stright into the whole thing which although can be good, it isn't something I am really too keen on myself, I would have liked to hear a slow and gradual intro for this but that's just personal opinion. Everything here does sound to be played very well which is really good and it all does come together very well, good work with this.

Nothing here really comes to mind as sounding bad although I'm not too keen on the sound at 1:40ish, that just sounded too fast and kind of messy to me. The rest of this though does sound really good and very good work on the ending part to this.

4/5

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[Flesh Eating Bacteria]

Alright

Well the lyrics cetainly fit in with the whole tune and playing I would say, everything seems to come together very well although just listerning to the song, it is quite hard to make out the lyrics. So it's a good job you put them in the description of your song, lol, that's really helpful. It's not a bad thing that they aren't all that clear, infact it fits in for much part.

All the music is played very well and everything, no problems with that and the ending scream is okay too even though I'm not a huge fan of this kind of stuff, lol. Eitherway you have done a really good job on this track, I can't hear anything wrong with it or anything that needs more work, good job.

5/5

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[Beach Melo Remake 2008]

Really Good

I have to say this is really good in my view, I really like the beats you have in this, the whole style of this is really good. The weird sort of effect you have for the opening bit or instrument, not sure what it is, it was something I really like the sound of, so nice use of that. Then the change into the main body of this seems to come out very well which is good.

A nice beat all the way through this, the opening is good although the ending part needs some work to it, maybe fade it out in some way because at the moment it just seems to end. I have no other problems with this song overall, you've done a really good job on this, nice mostly upbeat sounds.

5/5

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FlamingFirebolt responds:

Weird soft of effect? You mean the 303 sound with some cutoff and resonance?
Hard to know what you exactly mean lol.

About the ending. Well it kind off, is an fade out. Maybe i should add 1 second silence to it? is that what you want? Like a total fade out till no sound. Because there obviously is some. I will note that in my next song... >: (

Well, thanks you liked it. And for the 10. :)

-firebolt-

[Windstorm]

Alright

It's a little high pitched for most part which I think sounds quite annoying after a while, it's good for the first few parts but you've used it more than a few times in the intro, maybe use high pitched sounds a little less. The main part of this does have a pretty nice tune to it which is good, I kind of like the part after the intro, sounds pretty nice.

I mean, all of this is pretty good overall, I just don't like the really high pitch parts of this tune, they just seem to sound annoying more than anything, to me anyway. Everything else such as the intro and ending are both done well and there is plenty of veritiy through the whole thing.

4/5

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[+Factory+]

Alright

I would have prefered to hear something less busy as this for your 100th submission personally, but it was entirely your choice. One problem I am hearing with this submission is that it sounds to be a little too repetitive in parts, which is a shame. But it does sound pretty good which is okay and the length is decent too, the closing part is a nice change from the rest, it just a shame there isn't more change.

No really problems with this from what I can hear other than parts where I think it sounds a little too repetitive, it does come out very well and although sounding a little too loud, it doesn't really seem to sound messy which is good. The opening and ending parts to this are both done very well, so good work.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Ah, Little-Rena, I always look forward to your reviews. You made some valid points here, and as I've said about other tracks, I'm considering redoing this, actually SERIOUSLY considering redoing this, and with some comments on drums, repetitiveness, making the progress of a productive factory more apparent, I'm eager to strip this baby down and rebuild it to be ten times better than what it is now.
Thanks. <3

[Unfinished Story (original)]

Pretty Good

This is certainly a pretty good tune, although I'm not too keen on some parts of this myself, much of it does sound very good which is nice to hear. You have a decent opening and the thing ends well too, which are both good things to have, but I would have had some build up at the start, it might have worked better than going right into the song as you did with this.

I hear no real problems with this though overall, I mean it all does come together well so I can't really say much there, just some more build up on the intro part I think would be good to have but other than that, I can't hear much that needs improving.

5/5

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

thank you very much for the suggestiong, i guess ill make another version with a more built opening or a buildup since its quite forward the one we have here :P, and ill notify you when its uploaded :D thanks :D

[+Pandora's Dance+]

Not Bad

Though I'm not overly keen on this track, it just sounds a little too empty in a way if you get what I mean, that's not to say it sounds bad but in a way it does sound a little flat. It would be nice if it had a little more too it, such as a stronger background or something, just so parts stand out more, not sure what to say since I'm bad at creating music, lmao.

Anyway, on the whole it does come together well and everything does sound good which is nice to hear, it's just that there's not too much in this I don't feel, it's not something that sticks. But good work on everything with it, maybe it's just not my cup of tea, anyway, hope the 100th submission is amazing.

4/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, I agree with you. I think that I'm unable to get a rich full orchestral sound of of what I've got, and I'm not using that as an excuse, I feel that some more experience will give me more control over the tones of what I've got, but I have been tempted a few times to show a composition to maestro and see if he'd try building it up with the equipment he's got, but our styles are usually pretty different, I don't know how well something like that would work.
Cheers, man.

[-Air and Rain-]

Great Tune

I have to say I really like this tune, the sound of rain is really good in this, it is somewhat relaxing in a way even if the tune is somewhat sad in a way, it still comes out as a very calm and relaxing tune to me. Everything seems to come together very well, the piano is played very well in this and the rain gives a nice background to the whole thing.

Although there is a moment where it's more than just the piano and rain, it builds up into something more energetic which sounds good and you pulled that off pretty well too which is good to hear, so nice work with that. Everything here comes together well, the thunder in parts is also good. Great work, fav'd.

5/5

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Gloudas responds:

Thanks for the review, glad to hear you liked it so much!

[[TMM43] Por Que No]

Okay

This does sound to be done very well and the voice sample I heard at part of this fit with the whole thing well though it would have been nice to hear a few more but didn't really make too much diffrence. The whole thing sounds good as a whole, though some what repetitive for most part, there isn't a whole lot of change through the whole thing and might as well have been a loop.

But the sound quality is good and everything, which is nice to hear, no problems with the beats themselfs, they all work well and flow through the whole tune well and both the intro and ending are done very well which is good to hear, so pretty decent work here.

4/5

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