Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LOZ: SOD II]

It was okay

As far as sprites go, this was pritty good, so some good work here.
Though, I'm not big on having to read the diolog, it's kind of hard when you can't read well, lol. Also, when ever there is text, have a stop(); command on that screen and on the keypress space, it plays, it's not really too hard to do.

Some of the effects you used where pritty decent.
And no problems with the sounds.

All you need to work on is the diolog really.

Good work.

4/5

<3

mad-dave responds:

Thanks, but that stop command interfers with the background music as well. Maybe next time I will just use voices and less text :P

Expect the next installment out by january at the latest. :)

[Unforgotten Realms: Epi6]

Nice

The menu and the preloader where nice.
The humor was pritty good :)
And the plot was really quite diffrent.

The graphics where okay, but could do with alittle work.
And the sound was alittle poor, try to work on the voices, they sound abit bad to me, and can get annoying :\

The plot was good and the animation was okay.
But work on sound and graphics :)

Keep it up.

3/5

<3

Sirschmoopy responds:

THANK YOU FOR THE FIVE.

[CC - Amish Clock Paradise]

YAY!

This was great!
The animation here was really good, I liked it alot.
And the ending was also really good, if you hadn't listed the music at the beginning, it would have been unexpected, so always list music at the end, lol.

Everything in the flash was either good or funny, well, it was all good but you know what I mean, lol.
The graphics where great and such, so they worked with the animation well and the sound was good, not a problem with that.

All in all, a good flash.

5/5

<3

iShirm responds:

yeeeeh yeah i should propably put the music listing at the end :D

[[CC] - sonyericssonclock]

Hehe

I saw this quite a while ago, sorry I didn't review it at the time, lol.
Anyway, I like this flash, it's really funny.
The ambiant sound is great and it's what helps to make this flash good in my opinion.

The graphics and the animations in this flash are also good, so no problems there, the fading and movement work well with the plot I feel.
And the backgrounds are pritty cool.

There's not much I can say is wrong with this flash.
I like it overall :)

Good job.

5/5

<3

iShirm responds:

thx for the nive review

[Final Fantasy M. ep.2]

Nice work

I liked this one much better than the last one, the last one just didn't intrest me too much.
I found this one to be funnier in a way.
The graphics where still alitte, bleh but the animation in the one made up for it, so that was good.
The one thing I really didn't like was the opening, it flashed way too much, just didn't like that part.

Other than that, a really nice storyline once again.

So good job.

5/5

<3

iShirm responds:

Yeah that flashy part just cracks me up :D

[Final Fantasy M. ep.1]

Uh? Okay...

That was, well, diffrent I'll give it that one for sure.
The voices still need some work.
And in this case, the graphics are alittle, well, bad?
The storyline is pritty good though, that's the best thing about this flash.
When the evil thing is on the reverse side, so is the text, I didn't really like that, so, try to avoid doing that P:

Other than those things, pritty decent animation.
Keep it up.

4/5

<3

iShirm responds:

yeah that reverse text pisses me off too :D

[Burger adventures ep.2]

Better

Well, some parts of this where better than the last.
The graphics cirtainly looked better and I liked the preloader better.
But mayber you should have had some soft background music to hide the hissing of the voices.
The main problem with the sound is when someone is talking.

The animation and graphics are good as is the storyline.
The only thing I can say to improve on is the voice acting.

So all in all, a good job.
Nice one.

5/5

<3

iShirm responds:

yeah thats the voices are my mayor probem

[Burger adventures[pilot]]

Nice

The graphics are pritty cool in this flash and it looks like alot of time has gone into it, well, to me anyway.
The intro did take abit of a long time, so, work on making that shorter.

The music worked well when it was used, that was good and it didn't sound off, YAY! Points for you there.
However, some of the talking in parts was alittle weird, it could have been improved to make it sound alittle better maybe? Work on voices some more.

Overall I liked this somewhat.

4/5

<3

iShirm responds:

Yeah thx for the 9, and yeah im planing to buy a more qualitative mic ;D

[[R3R] The Convict]

Lol.

Hehe, that was pritty funny, some good work there, nice job.
Some of the grpahics looked alittle odd.
But most of the hand drawn stuff was cool.
The plot was well, intresting!
HAHA!

The sound was good.
Pritty short, but still cool.

Nice job.

5/5

<3

ShrimpLock responds:

:)