Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HyperJerk:Ace Attourney]

HAHA! Nice Take!

That was cirtainly very diffrent, I'll give you credit for that, really nice work, the art and such was good too. I liked how you used the Dragonball reference, lol, that was worked in well.
There's not much more I can say, other than it was alittle short, but that didn't really bother me in this case, since it was still very good.

Not only did you use PW backgrounds, you used your own art too which seemed to work great for this. However the Judges voice didn't sound very clear to me :/

Anyway, still very good.
Hope to see more from you.

4/5

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HyperJerk responds:

Thanks for the Thoughtful Comment

[PW: Inspired Justice 2]

Could use work

Well, for one, the graphics did look alittle blured in parts, like they where distorted and some of the sprites you used just didn't fit in with the background they where used in because of the cut off marks.

The quality of sound was also another thing I came upon, it was pritty poor, some sounds where really crackly and others where muffled, try adjusting the quality of the sound when you come to export it.
And the actual sound clips you used, I didn't really find most of them funny, try to use a wider selection of sounds.

Also, the quality of the buttons, they looked very poor, although they did do there job fine, they just didn't look very good, try to improve the look of them.

The ending was probably the best part, not because it was over but because you used other sprites along with the PW sprites, that was good in a way.

Anyway, just fix up the sound and graphics problems and I'm sure you can make a better one :)

Good luck with future flash words.

2/5

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Sunrie responds:

I don't know how, why, or where they sprites looked blurred. Unless, of course, you're talking about some of the ending sprites which were resized to fit the backgrounds. Traced bitmap 1, 1, pixels, so they came out how they looked originally. As for the cutoff marks, you're really picking straws with it. Look at previous Phoenix Wrongs and you can see a lot worse.

If the sound seems poor, it's because of your system, not because of the animation. All audio was edited outside of Flash in Sony Vegas Professional 6.0 and optimized in Flash on the export. As for the variety of sounds, it was 7 different movie quotes and 7 different songs...how much wider variety do you want?

The buttons were poor, but did their job? Talk about nit-picking. I wasn't about to spend another 40 minutes developing uber looking buttons for a simple click task at the END of the movie. Had they been important during the rest of the animation, then of course they would recieved more attention. Talk about paper-tiger syndrome.

The ending did take the most time and is one of my favorite scenes. I was going for a "never-ending party" thing.

There are no graphic and sound problems. This is one of the higher Phoenix Wrong submissions on the Portal, lead only by three others, so I don't really think "a better one" is the correct statement to make.

I think you mean "future flash works". Good luck on future flash reviews and grammar.

2/5 for at least writing understandably

[N00bKebob #25]

Wow :D

Some parts definatly stood out more than others especilly with so many parts this time, lol, I actually liked kings the most though, even though it was lacking art, it was the funniest of them.
There was a huge mix of styles here that's for sure, you can't see it as much in the other Kebobs but in this one you can because of the large number.

I think this is by far the best Kebob produced :D

Good job to everyone who made a part :)

5/5

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N00bNation responds:

Its good that we got many parts of different styles yes. But people should really put some more time into their parts. Me included. As the deadlines are quite long.

[[PP] Dfjdf War]

Simple yet funny

Haha! The graphics here where very simple and the actual point to this is really quite random indeed, especilly the text and such, lol P:
The ending wasn't really predictable and that's what made this funny, lol :D

Although it could have been improved alot with the graphics, it wouldn't be as funny if it looked better, but some people just like looks :/

Ahwell, I found it funny :D

Good job and keep it up my ninja friend.

5/5

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NinjaPanda responds:

Thanks, dear. <3 ^^

[Rabbit and Birdy]

Cute ;D

That's really cute, I like it.
The sound and animation really fit in together.
And I like rabbits and birds P:

Lol, good job with thist.
It's really very good :D

Keep it up.

5/5

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TommyVF responds:

Thank you for the review! :D Worked in two weeks with it! Thx.. And merry X-mas! ;)