Pritty Good
This was intresting, I don't see how the title went with it though, but still, very good work here, keep it up.
Pritty Good
This was intresting, I don't see how the title went with it though, but still, very good work here, keep it up.
Room for Improvment
Use the Newgrounds PreLoader, I didn't know when this was going to start. The graphics for this are okay and the effects for sound are good but you could do with some voice's in this and try to make them last longer, but for a first, it is good. Keep going.
Intresting
It is a good tune but some of the graphics are dodgy in place's, still, it is kind of funny and quite good. Nice work.
its all out of time =S its cancelled for now...until we can fix it. grr.
Nice :D
This is good, it is just a pitty it is so short, you should really add some more to this, make it longer. Still, nice work!
Only 8/10?!!
That's it! I'm calling Big_Rena to come and punish you.
The story needs thought
The story is kind of dodgy, I can see that it is a mock, clearly, but some of the things in the story are kind of, naff, the use of some of the jokes are good though. Intresting idea.
No speech but cool
There was no speech, but that is okay, I thought it works without the speech, it is nice, in the sense that there is an emotional feeling to it. Not all this action and joke's. This is somewhat of a relaxing flash, nice work :)
This water is making my head feel really funny, what did you put in it?
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