Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electric Pizza]

There is definitely room for improvement here, you have clearly shown that you have an ability to draw but for the most part it looks more like a flipbook or slideshow, than an animation, which is what you want to go for.

The sound in the background also needs a lot of improvement, it sounds like it's been recorded from a phone. Look up music from the Newgrounds Audio Portal to use for your animation, and try and find some places that do free to use sound effects, so you can have a high quality sound, and not some ear piercing screeches.

I wish you the best of look in the future, I’m sure if you can keep improving, you’ll have some much better animations to come!

1/5

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[Bird On A Fence]

This really needs some sound to it, that would make it so much better, maybe even have the guy shout at the bird or something, then a crunch noise for the end. The animation is smooth enough, but there's not really anything else too this.

1/5

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[Ed's Awesome Animate Tutorial]

This seems like something that might be helpful to a lot of people, it's not too helpful to me personally, since I know a lot of this, just too lazy to use these things, on top of using an outdated product! Anyway, this is all presented in a way that is accessible I think, but a written form might also be handy, don't know if you want to make that Patreon only, or if you just plan on sticking with video tutorials.

It would be great if you could make more of these open to everyone, but I can understand why you might not. One thing you might want to look at doing as well is maybe some general drawing tips for people, I know personally I can't really draw too well, walking is also something I find hard to animate.

Anyway, this is really good, and easy to listen to, all the sound mixes well together, your voice is very clear and easy to understand as well. Overall, great work!

5/5

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[FaceApp]

It's not bad, the length is certainly enough to get to the punchline, plenty of variance with the characters, each getting an equal level of speaking time. The sound, and voice acting was good quality, and you can hear the voices over the background music, which is always a bonus!

I do feel this type of short might be good as part of a longer collection of shorts, but it still stands up well on it's own.

3.5/5

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[MAXMOEFOE vs TOGETIC]

I loved this short animation, Maxmoefoe is one of my favourite YouTubers, I think you also got a very good bit of detail to the background as well, even down to the black slime on the bois, may they rest in peace. I think it really captures one of the Max rants very well, and I love the animation of the Pokemon at various stages as his rant progresses.

Also, a nice little ending there! I think this is all very well worked, great colours, and overall, just really fun to watch!

5/5

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[RACISTWATCH, Overwatch Fail!]

I had no idea Soldier was such a massive racist! I also felt pretty bad for Tracer when she got blown up there, but thankfully, she can just rewind and go back to being annoying, what a great inspiration! I liked the voice acting, the style and the absence of any real plot, it was fun to watch.

I don't really see anything I can offer feedback on, I like the style, the art is great, sound is good, although I think there was one blip in one line from Lucio where the quality went down a bit. But really, very solid, goofy humour and a fun experience, probably not for the whole family though.

5/5

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[Supporting Mercy]

Can't see anything I disagree with here, as someone who has played support, it always feels like no one wants to help you, it's all take, take, take! The voice acting and the plot were both really good here, although the opposing Widowmaker missing is a bit inaccurate, it's usually the Widowmaker on your own team that misses!

Anyway, all that aside, the animation is good, the art is a little rough around the edges, but I'm sure those will get much better with time! I think this is a very solid animation overall, so good work!

4/5

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[Bob Sponge]

That was really quite strange, a bit of an odd ride there! The animation was good, the backgrounds nice, and the plot, existed, I think. Did I find it amusing, yes, do I understand why, not a clue. The ending was also very good, the script and voice acting was good, I have no real problems with it, other than being a bit confused.

Anyway, I think it was a very good little animation, although I feel there is something missing, I just can't quite put my finger on it. Nothing more I can say, other than, money money money! Money money!

4/5

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[A Child's Dream]

The still art looks good, the backgrounds are quite solid, however I think there is a bit of a disconnect between those and the animations. A bit more shading might help, but also some of the walking seems slower than the legs moving, so that's an area to look at improving on.

You might benefit from having some sound effects when running through things, like the grass, or simple rabbit noises, just little things that will add to the overall feeling of the animation. Otherwise, it's a good start, and with practice, you should get better!

3/5

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TaraFlorine responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I totally understand what you mean haha, I'll work on that!