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[PSE project: Stress!]

Hehe :D

That was actually quite funny, very fast paced, though that adds somewhat to the humor in my opinion. The graphics could be better in places, but whatever eh? I still liked it regardless of how it looked.
The voice recording could have been alittle better in parts, but still, it wasn't terrible, still pritty clear.

Some of the jokes may have seemed somewhat pointless but most of it was fine for me, I don't see what you where aiming for though, I didn't learn anything new about stress :P

All in all though, very funny, just try adding some backgorunds to places to give more atmosphear or somthing, background always looks nice behind people or buildings or whatever, you know?
Yeah :D

Anyway, keep it up.

5/5

<3

DAGamesOfficial responds:

thanx for gewd review! As I said in the las review, there were certain parts to the movie were there weren't actually MEANT to have backgrounds in! But ah well, eh? lol thanx for 9 and more coming soon

[HyperJerk:Ace Attourney]

HAHA! Nice Take!

That was cirtainly very diffrent, I'll give you credit for that, really nice work, the art and such was good too. I liked how you used the Dragonball reference, lol, that was worked in well.
There's not much more I can say, other than it was alittle short, but that didn't really bother me in this case, since it was still very good.

Not only did you use PW backgrounds, you used your own art too which seemed to work great for this. However the Judges voice didn't sound very clear to me :/

Anyway, still very good.
Hope to see more from you.

4/5

<3

HyperJerk responds:

Thanks for the Thoughtful Comment

[PW: Inspired Justice 2]

Could use work

Well, for one, the graphics did look alittle blured in parts, like they where distorted and some of the sprites you used just didn't fit in with the background they where used in because of the cut off marks.

The quality of sound was also another thing I came upon, it was pritty poor, some sounds where really crackly and others where muffled, try adjusting the quality of the sound when you come to export it.
And the actual sound clips you used, I didn't really find most of them funny, try to use a wider selection of sounds.

Also, the quality of the buttons, they looked very poor, although they did do there job fine, they just didn't look very good, try to improve the look of them.

The ending was probably the best part, not because it was over but because you used other sprites along with the PW sprites, that was good in a way.

Anyway, just fix up the sound and graphics problems and I'm sure you can make a better one :)

Good luck with future flash words.

2/5

<3

Sunrie responds:

I don't know how, why, or where they sprites looked blurred. Unless, of course, you're talking about some of the ending sprites which were resized to fit the backgrounds. Traced bitmap 1, 1, pixels, so they came out how they looked originally. As for the cutoff marks, you're really picking straws with it. Look at previous Phoenix Wrongs and you can see a lot worse.

If the sound seems poor, it's because of your system, not because of the animation. All audio was edited outside of Flash in Sony Vegas Professional 6.0 and optimized in Flash on the export. As for the variety of sounds, it was 7 different movie quotes and 7 different songs...how much wider variety do you want?

The buttons were poor, but did their job? Talk about nit-picking. I wasn't about to spend another 40 minutes developing uber looking buttons for a simple click task at the END of the movie. Had they been important during the rest of the animation, then of course they would recieved more attention. Talk about paper-tiger syndrome.

The ending did take the most time and is one of my favorite scenes. I was going for a "never-ending party" thing.

There are no graphic and sound problems. This is one of the higher Phoenix Wrong submissions on the Portal, lead only by three others, so I don't really think "a better one" is the correct statement to make.

I think you mean "future flash works". Good luck on future flash reviews and grammar.

2/5 for at least writing understandably

[N00bKebob #25]

Wow :D

Some parts definatly stood out more than others especilly with so many parts this time, lol, I actually liked kings the most though, even though it was lacking art, it was the funniest of them.
There was a huge mix of styles here that's for sure, you can't see it as much in the other Kebobs but in this one you can because of the large number.

I think this is by far the best Kebob produced :D

Good job to everyone who made a part :)

5/5

<3

N00bNation responds:

Its good that we got many parts of different styles yes. But people should really put some more time into their parts. Me included. As the deadlines are quite long.

[Fire Emblem: Sacred Stone]

It's okay...

It's okay but it needs alittle work, such as the graphics, they seem very rough as does the animation with those graphics. The backgrounds could also do with some work, I could see white in parts where you zoomed out, work on that maybe.

The sound is fine but I feel you could have gotten some voices insted of using text, since voices give your charectors more life and such, also means the viewer can concetrate on the animation and not the text.

The font you used didn't really work to well and having the speech bubbles there just didn't really work, I mean, you could have had the text at the bottom of the screen and a small image of the charector next to it to show who is speaking. Consider that if you do diolog in this way next time :)

Other than that, it's a pritty decent start, just need to work on a few things.

Keep trying.

3/5

<3

[[PP] Dfjdf War]

Simple yet funny

Haha! The graphics here where very simple and the actual point to this is really quite random indeed, especilly the text and such, lol P:
The ending wasn't really predictable and that's what made this funny, lol :D

Although it could have been improved alot with the graphics, it wouldn't be as funny if it looked better, but some people just like looks :/

Ahwell, I found it funny :D

Good job and keep it up my ninja friend.

5/5

<3

NinjaPanda responds:

Thanks, dear. <3 ^^