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[Spiderman vs. Pie]

Okay

Well the use of images there was worked pretty well and they way they where presented was also pretty clever, the audio was clear to hear and everything, so that was okay. It did also fit in with the images and such, what animation there was also seemed pretty good too, though some parts where bleh.

I wasn't too keen on the idea of this, it seemed to try too hard to be silly and random, though some parts of this where kind of funny, others where just not at all funny. But that's personal taste, not too bad overall though.

2/5

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SteamTusk responds:

To each their own, you seem to be in the minority as of so far because the tens seem to keep rollin' in. Appreciate the feedback, thanks for watching! C:

[5 Hour Challenge #1]

Hmmm

It's not too bad in someways but in others it could be better, like the text, it would have been good if those where voices, ever computer voices would have been nice, just something to listen to. The art wasn't brillient but not all that bad, some parts could have done with some work, like the shop background.

Also there was one part in it where there was a car but the main charector walked home and didn't use a car, not sure if that was for background reasons or what. It could have done with a little more work overall though, but okay.

2/5

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[- NGChat [Dot] Com -]

Not Intresting

There's not a whole lot here to talk about, there is some animation that is pretty much just a loop, some of the art is okay but some of it like just the screenshot and edited gif is just kind of blah. The audio is clear, but that's kind of the only decent thing about it, I could find anything funny with this, sorry, it was just kind of boring.

1/5

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gumOnShoe responds:

I didn't feel like designing a swell background in the end, so I chose the most appropriate thing I could for the time. As per the gif, I didn't make that. It was posted in the forums and I updated the movie with it later.

[Office Christmas Party]

Okay

Well I don't really see too much going on except for one guy talking, it could do with a little more to it, I mean the womans face doesn't even seem to change through the whole flash which to me seems really strange, there's a guy yammering away and she doesn't change, lol.

No problems with the voice acting, that seems to be okay and very clear, so good work on that part and some of the graphics are pretty decent. Though they could do with a little work. Just really the main plot here that I think needs much improvement.

2/5

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JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

Her face does change, it's just hard to notice. Thanks!

[ShortShakespeare- Othello]

Hmm Okay

It didn't really make a whole lot of sense, I know I've read it and seen it because I had to at school, but I still don't get a whole lot of the plot, maybe it's just missing some of the more important details out. The graphics and animation aren't too bad, they could do with a bit of work in parts but mostly decent. As for the sound, it seems a little poor quality and the voice acting could do with a little more work.

On a whole, the idea might be nice but I don't really think it has come out in this too well, some more feeling in the voice acting and a few more details in the main story might actually improve this. I can get over some of the details in the animation and graphics though, lol, those aren't really as important as they are pretty much okay here.

2/5

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Timsplosion responds:

Well, not actually having read the play myself, and having decoded it from the Reduced Shakespeare Company's Othello rap, this was basically the story of it, and I thought it went pretty well, cos I've had one or two reviews saying how good the summary of the story is, so meh, you win some you lose some.

I don't really do these to let people base stuff of off, and I miss out all the subplots and characters that the story can function without, it's just a "cut-the-crap summary", for those who really can't be f#cked to read it and find out all the other stuff in it. Like me.

Well, thanks for the review. I'm still working on getting my animation better, so yeh, keep your eyes open for stuff I make in the future.

[Présentation de La France]

Not Bad

It wasn't too bad, the voice and talking was pretty easy to hear and very clear although in parts it seemed to go off a little on the accent, so maybe try to keep it more constant all the way through. The humour was pretty good in parts too, though some of it a little odd, would have been better if some bits did follow with the accent.

The graphics and animation where okay, though some of the photos had a border that should have been removed on them and fitting them in better might have helped. The quality seemed a bit poor too, but other than that it seemed pretty good on a whole.

4/5

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