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[Tywo At Large Ep. #2]

Pretty Good

This seems to be a pretty good flash, though didn't really find this one too funny in many ways, though it is pretty good. The style of this is also very good and done pretty well though the narration didn't seem to be that much of something like this sort of video, so maybe that could be worked on a bit if you plan on doing something like this again.

Animation here was good and the graphics where also very good, the black and white worked well with this I think, though there was one part with colour, not sure what you where trying there but okay. Overall a pretty decent flash and it definatly had it's moments, but lacked somethings I feel.

5/5

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Pixmintro responds:

The color part was just some strange half-baked idea I had to scare the crap out of the kids watching my presentation in Chemistry class.

[NEW Tywo At Large Ep. #1]

Awesome!

Amazing flash you have here, seems really underated though, which is a shame. Anyway, the intro seems good though when it says the title, it is a little hard to hear it, but otherwise that intro is good. Also the graphics here are good too, smooth animation and the voice acting is amazing too, great work on this for looks and sound.

I kind of like the story and the use of one populare phrase only slightly changed, everything seems to work and fit in well as well as being amusing all the way through the whole flash. No real problems with the story though the ending was a little unexpected and well, I didn't really like it, I liked that other kid :(

5/5

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[Bahamut's Fav. Reviews]

Pretty Good

The whole layout to this was pretty good, I mean with the skipping and everything. But on the last skip arrow, it skips by one frame into the fade, so I'd suggest removing the arrow on the review comment. There was some pretty decent comments as well as some jokes here and there, nothing that funny but still pretty good.

One other thing I would suggest is at the end, have a list of the flash you took the reviews from so people could go and look at them. Also, the graphics here such as the mouse need to be fixed in the size, smaller mouse and some better graphics would be nice to see. Wasn't too supprised not to see one of my reviews here either, lmao :P

Anyway, pretty good work, the idea has been used before but the layout of this with the skipping was good. Though it could be better with some voice acting on the reviews, your own voice or someone else to do it, doesn't matter a whole lot.

5/5

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kinggila responds:

I see you found that minor skipping glitch I deliberately left unfixed. I guess I could have added a keyframe there where the skip scene arrow doesn't appear, but meh. XP

You're right about that. I could have said which flashes the reviews were for, but really, I didn't want to do anything else to that scene since taking screenshots of all those reviews, cutting them out and adding them onto the flash was tedious as hell.

Hey, your reviews deserved to be on this flash. :)

[No Surprises, please.]

Alright

The audio is decent quality in this, so that's good, though much of the animation and drawing seems to be a little lacking at parts. Somethings just don't seem to move right, like his arm to the keyboard, little things like that, as well as the propotion of objects, some of them looked a little too big. The main menu was pretty simple but did it's just fine, a play all button might have been a good thing to have.

The black and white style is done pretty well and does look good but at times it does seem the background is lacking just a little or somethings don't seem to fit in too well. The colour parts are also good, in the first one "No Suprises" it did make for a decent ending, so good work with that.

3/5

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[Graham Loves Goatse]

Intresting

Other than him liking goatse, I can't see a whole lot in this flash, I mean you could have maybe expanded a little and played with it. Such as saying you will make a goatse flash, invite him over to watch it and it's something totally diffrent, maybe even showing him a video of Afro_Stud dancing to the song he was singing in the opening part, that could have been funnier to see, then have him rage in a fit.

As it is right now though, it is really lacking a lot of things but as suggested above, it did have some potential, maybe make a second part with more story to it? Otherwise, it seems okay, though it's mostly just diolog.

3/5

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kinggila responds:

I could make a second part to this, but that won't be done until quite a long time due to other flashes I need to make first. Since a few wanted to see what happens afterwards, I should work on a second part to this. :)

[Edgar N' Locke 07]

Alright

Seems like a pretty decent idea to have people sharing views on something, there where some funny parts to this, I mean with the soldiers it was pretty funny, it's kind of how I imagin people who play Guitar Hero to change their view on something. I've never played that game, looks like a pointless game to me, but that aside.

The animation here with the spinning in and the text transition did work though with the soldiers it looked a little odd since they are in a group. Not sure if you noticed but on the subtitle background, you had a black space between the gradient thing and the border on the left side, might want to fix that. But otherwise, pretty good work, could work a little on the voice acting too though, some parts seemed to lack emphasis.

4/5

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kinggila responds:

I remember a time when 99% of the population hated DragonForce.

Hmm, I've not noticed that mistake. I'm guessing it was a minor one, so it's not worth myself opening the .fla just to fix it. Still, thanks for noticing that and of course, thanks for the review. :)

[Bytesize Collab 2]

Nothing Special

There where a few decent submissions in this flash, but not too many, much of them lacking humour more than anything, some of them had some okayish humour but nothing really too funny. The style seemed to represent the Bytesize on Newgrounds quite well, so that's an okay point. The art in Rays parts where the best here, the others kind of lacked.

Overall, it would have been nice to have a selector part as well though the skiping this was pretty good. The buttons on the menu didn't seem to work too well with the whole look of the menu though. Some pretty good parts here I will say, but no solid laughs and nothing too special.

2/5

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djnet responds:

aww i got a <3 thanks for the helpful review...^_^

[Casualty in New York City]

Hmm

I don't really know what to say on this flash, there didn't seem to be a whole lot that happend in this, quite short and well not much happend, lol. The tweening of the still images worked in a way but they where moving up and down a little while across the screen, might want to work on making them smoother. Everything else there wasn't really much of, the animation was okay from what you had.

The sound was easy to hear and the interuption of the New York song was timed pretty well with everything, but other than that I can't really see too much in this flash, no real plot or anything, I guess the ending is kind of funny but I'm more lost on this one than anything else, sorry.

2/5

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kinggila responds:

Oh well. :(

["Pass The Axe" Collab]

Not Too Bad

There where some pretty decent parts in this collab but then also others that just didn't look very good. I mean I can see why you would use them just to be fair to those artists but it seemed like there where a few too many poorer animations in this, I mean some of them where good yeah and those where nice to watch but seemed like there wasn't enough of the more decent parts to me.

The music wasn't really to my taste but it certainly did sound to fit in with the whole theme that you have here. I am a little curious as to why you had arrows to skip though, didn't try them but I can only imagin they are to change parts in the flash. Might be a good idea if the parts where longer, but eh. Not too bad overall.

3/5

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[Skate Something ep.1]

Well

I have to say there isn't anything here that really strikes me as being too intresting to watch, some of the animation is good and the sound effects also seem good, so does the music. The major problem is, nothing really seems to happen, it's like watching something right to the end and not really having a point to it. Add some humour, more skaters even, just have something happen.

Another thing is it seems too short, needs to be longer as well as having something happen, once you have that it will be much better. The roof or path, whatever it was could also have had more detail, the other backgrounds where pretty good though, just have something happen really.

2/5

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sistem69 responds:

Yeah many people said that and for that reason im going to make the next one longer and add some more skaters.