Little-Rena's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Fight]

There is a game here, but it's very basic, and very soundless. The menu really needs some better graphical work, and there is a problem with the keyboard image shown, as there is also a delete and insert button above the arrows that work for this game, so those should be highlighted as well. The buttons, and backdrop for the menu could look better as well.

The game itself, really needs some audio, background music, and sound effects would be very good, the design of characters could also be better, and maybe even have a single player version with a computer opponent. I hope you continue to improve, and wish you the best of luck!

1/5

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[Funky Football]

It's pong, but with a UI change, the game really doesn't scream "football" to me, really reminds me of some very old games I used to play while in school. There is however, no real challenge here, I won 10 - 1 without moving, I'm all for player advantage because I'm bad at games, but this is just really easy to win.

The bonuses just make an otherwise easy game, even easier, but trying to hit them is pointless, you may as well just bat the ball back and ignore the bonuses, since they aren't really needed to win, the opposition will just get stuck at the top or bottom. Maybe if the bonuses also counted as negatives if hit by your opponant, there would be more incentive to play.

I am also running this again while writing the review, it finished 10 - 2 this time, with an interesting bug of the ball going off the screen, but you do have a way to fix that by clicking the ball at the top, so that's good! It just doesn't seem like there is any way to lose this game, without trying to lose.

1/5

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[1 Minute Personality Test]

This is a pretty fun little game, the outcomes are quite amusing, I did find myself getting a sensible chuckle out of a number of them. The art is pretty simple, does the job, and I like the way that the gun works in this game, that's quite amusing. Some of the outcomes were easy to figure out, others a bit harder, but got there in the end! I think I've seen them all, I think my favourite though is saving the hostage and going back for an ice-cream, defiantly the canon ending.

The only issue I have is the music, it can get a bit repetitive, and it's a bit harsh to listen to over and over with the ears, a button to mute the music might have been a good idea to have. But that's really my only issue with the game, everything else was fun, and amusing, great work!

4/5

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[.Loneliness.]

I'm not really sure what I just watched, or played. The text could be a lot better, even a small little box at the bottom with dialog, with a small avatar of the person talking, instead of floating text. The story, bland, it's one that has been told more times that I have been to the toilet in my lifetime, it's generic, unoriginal, and no new twist was put on it here.

Controls were simple, but pointless, you didn't even need to include the left arrow key, just have the right arrow key! I mean, there was so much you could have done here, but didn't, you could have had more controls, you could have told us more about the person who died, you could have told us more about the person we were playing as. I did not care about any of the characters, I don't know who they are, I was not invested in them.

There is a lot of room for improvement on this one, it's very barebones.

1/5

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[Vector Switch Prototype]

This is a very basic game, I mean the concept works quite well, but I have a few issues with the design choices. The background for one is very off putting, something static, or easier to look at would be much nicer, and wouldn't cause headaches! Additionally, you could do something about the thing you play as, maybe change it into a ship, or give it a little more character, as is, it's just a bland triangle.

There are other things you could do, like change the music when you switch, have some checkpoint pads, so if you die, you end up back there, and the score/time could also be easier to read. As it is, I don't think it's a bad game, just needs some work.

2/5

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[Rocket Board]

I can't say I am a big fan of this game, the art is quite interesting, the backgrounds look much better than the rest of the game. Some of the audio seems a bit clunky as well, I think there is defiantly room for improvement.

There is also the character wheel spin, for 100 coins, which you can only do once a level is over, and not at any time from the menu. It would make more sense to have this on the menu, so that you can gather as many multiples of 100 as you want, then throw it at the spin. Since this is the only use for coins.

2/5

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[Number Jesus]

It doesn't really seem to be very good at guessing at all, I kept with my number (77) and tried 5 times, the number never came up. Also, you might want to look at a way of preventing people from saying higher and lower to a point where it gets stuck, one thing I test was on 92, I said lower, 91, then higher, 92, and it was just stuck in a loop between them.

There's no audio and the text is very basic, you might get better results with a lower range as well, 1 to 1000 seems a bit wide, and unlikely to get results.

1/5

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Reiki97 responds:

Thank you for your feedback, I need it because it was an exercise for my Scripting skills so the UI is very basic. I will try to fix it, meanwhile why don't you try my new game "Patanoid"?

[Hard Ball]

It's got a very basic design and feel to it but after the play button, you should make it more obvious where to click after the customise phase, there are also some white bits showing in the background that could do with fixing. For a game, it's very functional, it needs some work, graphics could be spiced up a little, as I say, it's very basic, some jumping sound effects and damage sounds would also add a nice touch to it.

For the music, I'm personally not a fan, it's a bit too loud for my headphones and kind of hurts my ears, ruining the experience. An in game mute button would do wonders for this, as I typically listen to my own stuff while playing games. Overall, it's a decent base game, it just needs touching up in a few areas, mainly graphically and sound wise, I do like that you don't instantly die when hitting spikes or falling off the edge.

2/5

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[Find Sneaky Ski Cabin]

I might not quite be the target player for this, but looking at the game and how it was set up, I thought this would be a standard point and click game, I was disappointed. I was going around in circles trying to find something, I knew what was needed but not how to get it and the game doesn't give any helpful clues as to what needs to be done. There is a challenge and then there is just plain silly, this falls under just plain silly in my opinion.

I would love to have been able to complete it, sadly I had to give up, as far as I got was clearing the snow, after that, it just seemed like a guessing game. Most point and click games give you some indication of what to go for, even with cryptic clues, this game had none. Graphics were mediocre but not something I was bothered about, sound thankfully could be muted.

I wanted to give this a nice score, but I couldn't.

2/5

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[Dress Up Tomato Soup]

This is my favourite dress up game of all time I think, probably because it's about me and that's the best thing about it! The choice of bodies is pretty good and I like how it looks overall, design wise, it's good. It's a very simple game, dragging most of the objects, some addition of clothing could have worked, don't know how that would look though...

There was a good choice of music and well, probably the most important thing is the secrete, it really shows you did some background research on my flashes, so adding that in was very good, congrats :)

5/5

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