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[Electromagnetic Goldfish]

Very Busy

The sound to this is very energetic, I will definatly give it that but it really sounds far to crowded and busy for my liking. It kind of distorts some of the sounds in parts and makes it hard to listen to in those parts, but there are some beats in this that sound good, the ending works and the start is also pretty good. But the main part with all the fast beats just builds up into somthing too distorted.

If you didn't use as many beats in parts, it might not have sounded to bad in the main parts, but from what I can hear it gets too loud and distorted. The idea of having something very energetic is good and it almost works here but let down by some parts in my view.

3/5

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MadCow responds:

balls. Thanks for the review.

[x5470]

Muffled

It sounds to be a little muffled to me in a way, although I think that kind of effect does work with this, maybe a few computerised voice clips or something could be thrown in, just to give it a little more maybe. I did hear something that sounded like talking early on in this, not sure if that's what it was but to repeat something like that in parts might have been nice.

I did like how there was no wait to break this into the main beat, that sounded very good and the ending part was also done very well. It does also sound to loop very well, which is good, didn't think it would with the quiet like ending but it did. Overall, very good work with this, I do like the kind of muffled sound.

5/5

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MadCow responds:

Thanks for the review! theres a bunch of stuff in the song but its mostly pretty subtle

[Solus- For Schala Remastered]

Very Calm

This is definatly a nice tune to listen to, you have a very calm tune to it and the length for this is very nice, it's not too loud but loud enough to hear everything that is playing and everything here comes together very well. There's nothing that stands out as being out of tune or anything, the piano sounds to be played very well so good work on that.

Though it could maybe do with some effects that give it more intresting sounds, it's okay as it is, easy to listen to and leave on to do other things. The fact that it's not dominant is a good thing, towards the end though it does sound like part of what was playing earlier in the song but the very end does come out well.

5/5

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SolusLunes responds:

What kind of effects?

And the end was intended to sound like earlier in the song. It's a very cyclical song.

[(FMC) -=Climax=-]

Alright

It certainly sounds longer than it is, I don't know what it is about it that makes it sound that way, anyway that isn't really a bad thing, I don't mind so much. One part of this I didn't like was the kind of fuzzy sound in parts at the start of this, to me those didn't really sound to work too well, you also have them in other parts though the whole thing, they sound kind of odd.

Everything else is fine though, I mean sure it does sound a little odd and kind of random through the whole thing but it does come together well and it does work. The start and the end both sound like they have been done very well which is good to hear, pretty good work overall on this.

4/5

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FunkmasterCatking responds:

I think the fuzzy thing your talking about is the same as what haggard was referring to as a chewed up tape. I'm pretty sure it was my poizone vst, but considering how awesome poizone is I considered it worth it.

[+Prologue+]

Calm

Everything here sounds to be very calm and quite quiet but not really the most upbeat track, lol. Not seen the video you say this is going to go with, so I can't really put it into that context but it still sound pretty good as it is, the piano sounds to be played very well and everything seems to come together pretty well.

There is a lack of other insruments in much of this which makes it seem a little eh in parts but it doesn't really matter too much, not really major. The opening and ending are both done very well, it is over two minutes though if you didn't notice, lolol. But yeah, good work on this, no major problems from what I can hear.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, I did notice it was over 2 minutes, but that's no biggie, really. I tried adding more instruments to the song, but in the end I went with simplicity. I'm thinking of doing more stuff recording with my keyboard in the future, so once I get the hang of that, I should have some more fuller sounding tunes on the way.

Thanks for your review. <3

[Flatline?]

Alright

Well it certainly sounds pretty good to me, all comes together very well and sounds good, it does seem to loop pretty well which is good, so might not really need to be longer, though it would be good. Also, could have had it start and end on a sharp flatline with no background, that might have been intresting to have, but even without it does seem to be pretty good.

Can't really say much else, I mean I do like this but it does sound like there is something missing from it, can't say what really. But mostly this is very good and smooth, no major problems with it and it is certainly easy to listen to which is good.

4/5

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CineGoryP responds:

A sharp flat eh? Heh, I know what you're talking about. Wish I could make those little fixes but the machine I made it on kind of... melted... so yeah.

If I do do anything to it, it'll be from scratch and I'll keep your suggestions in mind.

Thank you for the review!

[Flaming Airways]

Alright

Well it seems to be pretty bland in the whole tune but it does sound pretty good, just no sounds that really stick out, nothing bad overall sounding and some of the beats are very good which is nice to hear. I can only suggest adding a little more to this to stop it from sounding too repetitive. That aside, it's pretty nice, good work with this, though it doesn't loop too well I guess it wasn't ment to.

4/5

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S3C responds:

i'll try to work on that repetitiveness.

Thanks for the review

[_The Escape_]

Nice

There are some very good beats in this I have to say and I liked many of them but some parts of this seemed to be a little lacking, but built up into some more energetic beats which was good to hear. Where it's kind of quiet is kind of a nice pause between the enegetic beats and the change works pretty well into them which is good but not sure I like those quite parts too much.

I can't hear anything that stands out as being bad, it's just not really to my taste most of the time through this but some parts I do like. Nothing really to improve on, maybe the quieter parts, but those are still kind of okay. Good work mostly.

4/5

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Assios responds:

Thanks for a good review.

[Water Pagoda]

Pretty Nice

The opening is a little slow an repetivie but past that when it starts to build up, it's certainly very good and everything, slow and pretty relaxed in terms of the tune and keeping with the same back beat. Very good with that though it does make it seem to be repetative, so maybe in parts make it fade down just so it's there but not as noticible, might sound good, not sure.

The ending wasn't too noticible, I missed it and it started over again, which means it loops well which is good if needed to loop. It all sounds to come together very well but my only concern is the repetitivness of the background but otherwise, nice work.

4/5

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S3C responds:

thanks for the review, i'll look into those ideas

[+BsK+ Keep Going!!!]

Okay

Not too bad, though some parts do seem to sound a little repetitive but it does loop well which is good for a loop, that and it's pretty long too, so that's pretty good. There is a part some way through the middle that sounds to change a little too suddenly in my view, that could be worked on a little maybe.

Overall, it seems to come together pretty well which is good and everything, wasn't too sure on your choice of ohhs to this but they seemed to work with this fine, though I think it could be a little better with more veritiy.

4/5

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kaptainkewl responds:

That middle part was actually where for some reason I decided to loop it back again, I Have no idea why I did it originally, But I'm on dial up so I really don't want to have to download and re edit this whole song to fix that. Without the skippy part it would be about 1:30 and loop back again. The thing with Loops is for a flash creator they need to be shorter than usually 1minute otherwise the file is too big for the flash.

Thanks for the review. I'll make sure to Improve on some of these!

~~~Brad Kubota