Little-Rena's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Example I - Dream]

Intresting

Well it sounds pretty intresting for most part, though one thing I should really say is the ending, I'm not really keen on it, you have it ending on the same note and for too long in my view, it doesn't really seem to work here, simply fading it out might have been much better. The start of this is okay though and does sound pretty good.

Everything sounds to be played pretty well and there isn't anything that stands out as sounding too bad, other than the ending. But there isn't really anything here that stands out a whole lot either anyway, could have done with a little more to it.

3/5

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Adam-Beilgard responds:

Yeah, beginnings and endings - one of the first things you learn in theory and I screwed my ending up. I'll keep working on that fade, thanks for the review!

[Improvisation Number One]

Kind of Quiet

It's kind of quiet for most part which is maybe a little disappointing, like the start seems to be too much silence and there are many other parts of this which are a little too silent for my liking. But then where there is a tune, it does sound very good and the main middle part seems to sound very good to me and I like that part of the tune, in my view it is just a shame that there is so much silance in this.

The ending is okay but could have been better, if you had ended it with some slower playing as oppose to one final louder sound, it might have been good and leaving a silant for consistancy. But like I say, where you do have a tune, it is good, so nice work on that.

4/5

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Adam-Beilgard responds:

This one is sparce, to be sure. I master most of my work with headphones, so desktop speakers sometimes get the shaft :\
I'm glad you liked the tune, thanks for the listen and thanks for the review!

[.:Lost In Her Eyes:.]

Nice Tune

This sounds very good, I mean it;s all played very well and everything, good work on this one. I have no real problems with this, although it's not really to my taste it still sounds very good. The opening build up sounds good, starts out to be pretty soft, the pause before the main louder part of this sounds good to, it really works and fits in well with everything.

The ending is the part I liked about this, not because it was the end, lol, not trying to say it sucks just so you know. I mean, it really works, the pauses there sound good, without looking at the time of the song, it sounded like the start and that it had looped, that confused me, but the ending did sound good, nice work on that.

Please don't try to confuse me next time though :(

5/5

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GronmonSE responds:

Little-Rena need a hug? >:

Some like the ending, some dislike it. Interesting :P

Thanks for the input, glad you liked it :D

[Project Part 3 - Omega]

So-So

Of all three of them, this is the one I don't like as much, I mean the ending of this is done pretty well and closes everything off very well but the opening sounds nothing like the ending part of the previous. There is nothing that actually sounds bad about this but the kind of 'boom' sound in this, I can say I'm not too keen on and does kind of ruin the rest of the tune to me.

The tune itself is good but with the interuptions of something sounding compleatly diffrent, it does kind of spoil it. Everything else sounds nice, kind of calm and that's the thing I like the most about this and the ending to the whole thing. The ending part to this changes to a dark kind of sound, which is okay and it does work with the final ending.

4/5

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TheBellmaker responds:

I saw that soming from a mile away. I knew that since you didn't like how it was split up, you wouldn't like this part.

The whole song was not really meant to flow. It was meant to be split up, because of the said reason back in part one.

But thanks for listening to my 8 minute tune collection anyway :)

[Project Part 2 - Lambda]

Hmm

Well since it's split up and all, it's hard to remember the ending of the previous part but this does sound so much diffrent. I mean diffrent is okay for a long song but it's hard to hear the change without them all put together if you understand. This does still sound good though, which is okay, the intro and ending are both good.

In comparison to the previous one, I'm not as keen on this one, although everything does come together very well, it just doesn't suit my taste in many parts of this. There is the main middle part that I do like though, that's my favourite thing about this track, so good work on that. The ending does leave it open though, so I do wonder what part 3 is like.

5/5

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TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm trying to revise my composition style so that I have a main theme and variations. This song was just a bunch of possible themes bundled together.

[Project Part 1 - Alpha]

Good Work

Though the first thing I am disappointed about is actually putting this into three parts without any other reason other than to keep the attention of someone, it does kind of put me off in a way, I like to listen to one thing right the way through though it might work with some people, I think it's kind of ehh. The ending for this did work and sounded good though, so it's not like it cut off at the end.

Everything seemed to work fine with this too, which is good to hear, the intro was good though part the way through it did sound like it was at the end but then it built up again, that was pretty good. No real problems with this other than the splitting up of it, that's the only thing I don't like, the length is still decent though, so good work overall.

5/5

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TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review.

I split it up because when I first submitted it someone said is was 2 long :(

And the reason the parst are also split up is because I made a part for each of the 5 people and they were all different. So in essence, this is not really a song. rather, it is a collection of tunes.

[Smoke On The Water (Demo)]

Awsome

This sounds to be very good, though it would be nice to hear the whole thing when it's out and everything, although this being a demo, it could still maybe end a little better than the way it does, not sure how you could fix it though. The beats themselfs sound to be very good, pretty busy most of the way through expect towards the end where a little less is going on.

There't nothing I can suggest for improvement in this though, other than the ending but the final version I imagin will be a little longer and most likly better in the sense of the ending. So overall, good work with this, can't wait to hear the final version.

5/5

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ShortMonkey responds:

Cheers. Glad you realised it's a demo lol

[Whales, Whales, Whales]

Good Tune

I kind of like this tune, although it doesn't really sound like it's going very far for most part and it is quite loud as well as busy, but that's okay. A few soft parts might be nice to have, but not really needed. The intro isn't too long which is good to hear, I don't like waiting, lol. So yes, the build up to the main part is done very well, good work on that.

Much of the main part after the intro sounds a little repetitive, but not so much so, as there are some changes through the whole thing which is good to hear. The ending part also seems to be very good, ends pretty softly and the fade out for this is good too. Nice work overall.

5/5

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MusicIsBliss responds:

This song really didnt go anywhere, i made the main choir riff, then the guitar riff, then the synths just filled in space, even though they leaded everything. and about the soft parts, i was trying to make this song as annoyingly loud as possible, open it in a sound editing program and it just looks like a big rectangle of sound.

[Extradimensional]

Alright

It seems to sound kind of fuzzy though the whole thing which makes it sound poor in quality, not sure if you wanted it to sound like that or not but I don't think it's really sounding too good in that sence. Other than that tough, most of it seems to sound pretty decent, some good beats through the whole thing, even though some parts sound a little busy.

The main thing you need to fix is the noise in this, it's kind of unplesent. You have a pretty decent ending to it, though much of the ending part does build into too much of a heavy sound for me, sounds like something that would fit better in the middle of the song. But otherwise, good work on this.

3/5

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MadCow responds:

i will make a song so noisy fuzzy and loud one day that you will vomit blood from listening to it.

[Carbon Baby (part 1)]

Good Work

I like what you have hear so far, it sounds very good, it's be nice to hear what the finishing version is like though. This one has a very calm start to it which does sound good and the instuments used in the later part to this also sound good and are put together very well. I like the overall flow to this song, it's really good and works well.

It also ends very well too, I didn't think it was going to end too well at first thinking you had cut it off at the most energetic part, but you did and it ended well. I do hope that the final version to this is longer though, that would be good, but as it is right now, it is very good.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

<3 compliments. I will try to please.