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[Riding on ALL night]

Calm for Most Part

It's pretty calm through most part of this which is interupted at the middle part of this whole tune by quite a mix of instuments, it would be nice to maybe hear the calmness keep through the whole thing, but it's mostly a nice tune which is good to hear. Through I do think it would sound much better with some vocals too it, just sounds like that kind of beat.

Everything else here sounds pretty good to me, a good intro to the whole thing as well as a decent ending. Lack of vocals let this down as well as the sudden change in tune towards the end, but other than those things, I have to say good work on this overall.

4/5

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piggy123 responds:

thanks lil-ren

[Jxl180 - Endless Night]

Messy

For the start and through many other parts of this it does sound to be a little fuzzy and kind of messy in that sense, it's a little too distorted for my liking. I mean it's good many good parts to it but I just don't really like the opening part being so distorted as well as other parts to this. It does open well and many of the beats through the tune are good.

The voice samples in this work with the whole tune and give something diffrent to listen to, but I am a little disappointed by there lack of linking to each other, you have a police voice is it then a lauch voice, I don't hear the link to that. Maybe use sample that work with each other and everything, makes sense that way, lol. But otherwise, good work with everything here, comes together pretty well and a good ending.

3/5

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jxl180 responds:

thank you for your review.

[(FMC) -=Soaring=- V2]

Pretty Good

I can't really hear what's so bad about the intro, other than being a little long, I can't hear any problems with it, infact I think it sounds pretty good, lol. The main tune itself is also very good, though after the starting few beats which may have seemed odd, the build up part was done very well and breaks into the song very well too.

The fuzz sound in random parts seems a little stange to me to say the least, I don't see how that really fits in, maybe you'd like to tell me why that's there because the idea is lost on me. Other than that, I think everything here comes together well and the ending is also done very well.

5/5

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FunkmasterCatking responds:

Those little static sounds aren't intentional. I think that's a glitch from my poizone vst, I have no idea why it's causing that but I'm gonna look it up...

Thanks for the review!

[Crank Dat Remix Youuuuuuuuuuuu]

lmao

This doesn't sound that good and there's a lot of screaming, but it's definatly amusing and much better than the original. I don't like the hissing all that much but the singing is pretty nice in a way, much more tolerable than the original, parts of this also sound like the original which is great, though near the ending sounds like Scooby, dunno what you did there.

It's a shame it's so short though, you should have redone the entire song, that could have been pretty funny too. Well anyway, overall, the quality in parts isn't all that great but it gave me a laugh :)

5/5

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trashcanman responds:

im glad you like it

[Stuck on a Name]

It's Okay

Well mainly it just sounds a little too repetitive to me, I mean it works and everything sounds okay, so there is nothing wrong with that, I just think it needs more change through the thing. You have parts where it goes much quieter and a few changes, but you should change the whole thing in bits so by the end it doesn't sound as much like the start, unless you want it to loop.

Overall though, there is nothing that stands out as sounding too bad and the ending fade does sound good, as does the opening build up. The only problem I have with it is the fact that it sounds to repetitive, sorry :(

3/5

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you, and don't be sorry for telling the truth. Otherwise there would be no way to improve.

[Ake 2]

Pretty Nice

The first thing I would like to point out about this though is that the opening just seems to be a pause and then it suddenly bursts into the song, maybe work on that part. But after that everything seems to come together very well, even if you have some instuments that seem to sound a little too high pitched for my liking, lol.

You have everything coming together very well here, but it does seem to build into something a little too late, being right at the end. It does end well which is good, you just need to do that for the start and this will be perfect then, lol. Some odd sounds in this too, but all the same, it's pretty neat overall, good job.

4/5

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svere responds:

A great review, thank you! I love odd sounds :)

[just rock on]

Messy

This doesn't really sound to have any direction to it and just doesn't really sound all that great overall. The whole thing sounds out of tune and just thrown together randomly, the large pause at the end is also a waste of time, it doesn't make it loop all that well, just sounds really bad. You could remove the pause and try to make a loop out of this, if you wanted to.

You could really improve on everything here, there isn't really much here that is worth listerning to, the whole thing just sounds like a mess, you have a change early on which doesn't go smoothly and the ending is just too sudden, as well as this being far too short.

1/5

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piggy123 responds:

great help

[+Utopia+]

Cool

Although it is a little loud and busy for much of it, it does seem to flow well and everything seems to come together well, good opening to this as well as a good ending. Although I can't help but think that parts of this do seem to sound a little repetitive, sorry if it isn't but in parts it does seem to sound that way.

The kind of 'ohhhh' sound in the background is pretty good and works with the whole thing, also the beats here are good. Not much more I can say here, it has some good parts, like the less busy part in the middle, I liked that bit better than the rest of this I have to say, lol.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Hey, thanks for the review and the comments.
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[Final Moment (Alex Sandford)]

Very Good

Everything here sound very good, the vocals here are good and everything has been sung very well from what I can hear. They fit in very well with the whole tune which helps, so good work with that, although it does sound a little too dark for my liking, it is still done very well. The whole back beat is good, though some parts do sound a little fuzzy but it's still good.

The lyrics are very clear and easy to hear, so that's good they also sound like a lot of thought went into these lyrics. Nice use of the length too, it's pretty long but it does sounds good with all that use, the lyrics make it more than the beat in my view, I also think some of the effects here are done very well, very good work overall with this.

5/5

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Naitzmic responds:

Glad you liked it.
Appreciate the feedback.

Yes, the lyrics took some work, but overall
I'm quite satisfied with them.
Maybe they are a bit "dark" for some,
but in the end it's all about hope. :)

[Carbon Baby (part 2)]

Eheh

I'm not too keen on this one on a whole, it really sounds a little too busy in most parts and kind of too loud and in a way that can't really be controled with the volume without hurting the quality of the whole track. I mean there are parts of this which do sound very good and a little softer but many other parts here just seem too loud for my liking.

I'm not too keen on the whole fuzzy kind of beats, it's more the opening half where the problem is for me though I must say. It does seem to loop pretty well which is kind of good and the ending is done very well, so good work with that, it's more just that the whole thing is too fuzzy for me :s

4/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the honesty.
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