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[Song of Storms (Windmill Song)]

Pretty Nice

The overall tune to this is very nice, kind upbeat in a way though for some other parts in this it sounds like it changes the mood of it, either that or it's cause by listerning to it over and over. But the tune itself is done pretty well and such, which is good to hear, no real problems with this since it all does sound like it comes together well.

Although there isn't too much veriation through this so it does sound a little repetitive after a while, a bit more noticiable change through the whole thing in parts would sound good if you could do that. I haven't heard the original so I can't really compare, but good job all the same.

4/5

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Expectrum responds:

Well, the original song consists only of the first part, so what I did after that was make some variations of instruments and ornamentation, then a synthesis of everything that ends with a whole new intonation.

Thanks :)

[Tell Your Mother]

Owch

That was pretty bad to say the least, I mean it's okay the first time but the looping this isn't a good idea but just on its own, it is very short so yeah. The voice is okay and the background also sounds pretty good, if there was more to this then I would say it was a little better but there isn't much here so I can't really.

Can't make out the background speaking much but it makes a nice background like that, if you had more after the opening sentance like tell her what or something, then it would be better, hmm.

1/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Its funny.

[(TGF) Vulpus Overture Redux]

Nice Work

This tune sounds very good and seems to come together very well, I can't hear any problems with this other than at the very start it seems to have a few seconds of silance, which I wasn't too keen on. The rest of this is good though, it's not repetitive and it has plenty of change through the whole thing so there is something diffrent for the listener to hear with this.

Though it's quite like a marching song to start with, it sounds to be kind of dark in a way, it does all sound good and everything fits together well. Much of the sound here is good, some very heavy beats in this, they work too and everything is played out very well in this, but I just prefer more upbeat tunes, lol.

5/5

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BudGPStudios responds:

Just like in Ex Nihilum Remix, there is no moments of silence, it's just the volume is very low. I work with earphones in a quiet place, so I don't usually pick up on the fact that some people can't hear the part. Thanks for the good review.

[Beach Melo Remake 2008]

Really Good

I have to say this is really good in my view, I really like the beats you have in this, the whole style of this is really good. The weird sort of effect you have for the opening bit or instrument, not sure what it is, it was something I really like the sound of, so nice use of that. Then the change into the main body of this seems to come out very well which is good.

A nice beat all the way through this, the opening is good although the ending part needs some work to it, maybe fade it out in some way because at the moment it just seems to end. I have no other problems with this song overall, you've done a really good job on this, nice mostly upbeat sounds.

5/5

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FlamingFirebolt responds:

Weird soft of effect? You mean the 303 sound with some cutoff and resonance?
Hard to know what you exactly mean lol.

About the ending. Well it kind off, is an fade out. Maybe i should add 1 second silence to it? is that what you want? Like a total fade out till no sound. Because there obviously is some. I will note that in my next song... >: (

Well, thanks you liked it. And for the 10. :)

-firebolt-

[+Factory+]

Alright

I would have prefered to hear something less busy as this for your 100th submission personally, but it was entirely your choice. One problem I am hearing with this submission is that it sounds to be a little too repetitive in parts, which is a shame. But it does sound pretty good which is okay and the length is decent too, the closing part is a nice change from the rest, it just a shame there isn't more change.

No really problems with this from what I can hear other than parts where I think it sounds a little too repetitive, it does come out very well and although sounding a little too loud, it doesn't really seem to sound messy which is good. The opening and ending parts to this are both done very well, so good work.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Ah, Little-Rena, I always look forward to your reviews. You made some valid points here, and as I've said about other tracks, I'm considering redoing this, actually SERIOUSLY considering redoing this, and with some comments on drums, repetitiveness, making the progress of a productive factory more apparent, I'm eager to strip this baby down and rebuild it to be ten times better than what it is now.
Thanks. <3

[Unfinished Story (original)]

Pretty Good

This is certainly a pretty good tune, although I'm not too keen on some parts of this myself, much of it does sound very good which is nice to hear. You have a decent opening and the thing ends well too, which are both good things to have, but I would have had some build up at the start, it might have worked better than going right into the song as you did with this.

I hear no real problems with this though overall, I mean it all does come together well so I can't really say much there, just some more build up on the intro part I think would be good to have but other than that, I can't hear much that needs improving.

5/5

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

thank you very much for the suggestiong, i guess ill make another version with a more built opening or a buildup since its quite forward the one we have here :P, and ill notify you when its uploaded :D thanks :D

[+Pandora's Dance+]

Not Bad

Though I'm not overly keen on this track, it just sounds a little too empty in a way if you get what I mean, that's not to say it sounds bad but in a way it does sound a little flat. It would be nice if it had a little more too it, such as a stronger background or something, just so parts stand out more, not sure what to say since I'm bad at creating music, lmao.

Anyway, on the whole it does come together well and everything does sound good which is nice to hear, it's just that there's not too much in this I don't feel, it's not something that sticks. But good work on everything with it, maybe it's just not my cup of tea, anyway, hope the 100th submission is amazing.

4/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, I agree with you. I think that I'm unable to get a rich full orchestral sound of of what I've got, and I'm not using that as an excuse, I feel that some more experience will give me more control over the tones of what I've got, but I have been tempted a few times to show a composition to maestro and see if he'd try building it up with the equipment he's got, but our styles are usually pretty different, I don't know how well something like that would work.
Cheers, man.

[-Air and Rain-]

Great Tune

I have to say I really like this tune, the sound of rain is really good in this, it is somewhat relaxing in a way even if the tune is somewhat sad in a way, it still comes out as a very calm and relaxing tune to me. Everything seems to come together very well, the piano is played very well in this and the rain gives a nice background to the whole thing.

Although there is a moment where it's more than just the piano and rain, it builds up into something more energetic which sounds good and you pulled that off pretty well too which is good to hear, so nice work with that. Everything here comes together well, the thunder in parts is also good. Great work, fav'd.

5/5

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Gloudas responds:

Thanks for the review, glad to hear you liked it so much!

[Lost In Her Eyes-eugenio.mRMX]

Pretty Neat

It had a good start to it I have to say that as well as some pretty good beats through the whole tune although some parts did sound to be a little too high pitched for my liking, not sure what was with the high pitched parts. All the same, much of it is pretty good and flows well, then ending is also done very well, which is good.

Though for the length of time this had, it did seem to get a littl repetitive in parts of this, it would have been good to mix it up a little more in the middle few parts. But other than that, a decent length and done very well for the most part of this so good work.

4/5

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

hello im quite puzzled with the high pitched parts, as i dont like high pitched sounds myself so i pased a equalizer on it before the final render. my defaul system is equalization is on Flat to have all fixed inside the DAW. there might be something weird around. ill check it out ill work on the repetiveness to see what i can do to make it more dynamic. thanks for your comment :D

[Fanatic Public Enemy (DjD)]

Lacking

It sounds to be lacking quit a lot in terms of beat, I think it could do with a little more, especilly in terms of the backing here, it doesn't really sound like you have a whole lot in this. What is here though does sound good, which is nice to hear and it all seems to come together pretty well, although on a whole, it is certainly quiet, so make it a little louder maybe.

Anyway, other than adding more backing and making it a bit louder, it is pretty good, the length is decent and the ending is also pretty good, though I would consider working on the opening, it doesn't quite sound all that good, but keep working at it.

3/5

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Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks for a great review!