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[<==Raining Rage==>]

Decent

I think this is pretty decent although it's a shame the the rain in this is hard to hear in the background and the only times you hear it are at the end and at the start, you can hear bits in parts through the whole thing but I think it should play a more dominant part in the whole tune. The thunder sound was pretty good and fit in with the whole thing.

I'm not too keen on the whole dark sound to this though, I mean it's okay and it does kind of work but the main dominant sound doesn't change too much, it just seems to stay much the same. Needs a little more veriation in this, but otherwise this is pretty good.

4/5

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DjCompass responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm loving the depth i'm getting out of yours ^^
I'll keep all that in mind if i revisit this song, and in the future. Thanks again.

[(prev.) ChromoMiyx]

Hmm

Can't say I'm really too keen on this track, the opening was pretty decent but then you have the sort of clap sounds and the other sounds, I don't really think those sound too good, it makes everything sound very metalic, which I don't really like. The background to the whole thing sounds okay, but it's let down because the clapping and other sounds stand out more.

Not sure, I would kind of start all over removing those from this or working them more into the background, because this preview doesn't make it sound like anything too special, sorry. The background is the best thing about this, the ending you could have atleast faded out too, lol.

2/5

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loogiesquared responds:

the background? if you like it, i'll send you a .wav....

but i'll like to know WHAT you didn't like about this....

[(_RGH_) Aero(on a plane) ".(."]

Good

It sounds like a pretty good track here, you have quite a lot to this one which is good to hear, a nice amount of change through the whole thing, the opening is also good, although a little slow to build up, I really think it works. This is not too repetitive either, which is also very nice to hear, some parts of this I wouldn't link to an aeroplain though, lol.

The ending could do with a little work though, it just seems to sound like it suddenly ends, maybe fade it out in a way, that would be good to have. Other than the ending, I can't hear any problems with this overall, so yeah, pretty good work on this, just work on the ending.

5/5

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RyeGuyHead responds:

I'll make the fade out more noticeable, how about that?

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend 3]

Okay

Well this is better than the first, it sounds to be more balanced for most of it, which is okay but you still then change it so that they are coming out of diffrent ears part the way through, you really should make the vocals balance otherwise it just get annoying, especilly considering the length for this. The background is okay and that sounds very good.

The one major problem with this is that the lyrics just get far too repetitive, you should consider making a shorter song so that you are repeating yourself over and over. Like with the first one, this is hard to listen to, it starts off okay but then just goes downhill from that point.

2/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Yeah..I know.It was great when I first made it though.The drums are what made this song what it is.But yeah..It does go on for too long.

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend]

Terrible

Wow, that was really terrible, you had the vocals coming out of one side and the backing from another, that unbalance makes it very hard to listen to, considering I use headphones too. I would strongly suggest keeping the whole thing balanced out at both sides, otherwise it just ends up sounding like a mess as well as being annoying. The background is okay and works with the vocals but as mentioned before, the unbalance makes it sound bad.

The lyrics are kind of funny, sadly though because of the way this is done, it's hard to pay attention to much of the lyrics, it was hard just listerning to this all the way. I really hope you fix that for future works, you might have a decent idea here but it didn't really come out too well.

1/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

I have 5.1 Surround sound speakers..The song sounds fine.

As for the balance it sounds like shit if I change it.Unless you can help me then this song is staying the way it is.

Thanks.

[Fantasia Nocturne No.2]

Muffled

I'm not too keen on the muffled sound of this tune, it doesn't really work right and it makes it sound very quite which is kind of eh. The actually playing sounds okay and in a way it seems to have a little more to it than the first one and does in a way sound a little better but it's really hard to say that this is overall better than the orignal because of the muffled sounds.

I do think the piano is played very well here and the length is very good, but I can't really say I like it too much because of the lack of audio quality here, so that makes it lose a lot for me, sorry. But otherwise, it sounds like you have done a good job on this, I hope you can tidy up the quality in future.

4/5

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sarias responds:

yeah this was my first attempt at producing myself, xKore helped me with the first one (i wrote it all he just plugged it into fl studios) i may just see if he can help me with this one also, who knows thanks for the review im glad you liked it though i will try to get that fixed

[Fantasia Nocturne No.1]

Pretty Nice

Although I'm not a huge fan of the lack of a constant background that sticks out, much of this still sounds very good, it also seems to sound very dark and slow, which sounds pretty good the way it's played. The piano here is played very well, I can't hear anything wrong with the way it's played, so great work on that, though the louder notes do sound to have a little static on them.

There is some background here, but I would have wanted a little more, not sure how you could do that if you are just using a piano so heh. Anyway, I have no problems with anything else there, the length is good and you have both a decent opening and ending to this, good job.

5/5

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sarias responds:

thankyou so much im glad you liked it thanks for the review

[Town Theme Loop]

Good Work

Although I think it might be a little nicer if it was a bit faster than this, it would sound much happier and such, lol. This is a little pokemon like though, if I didn't read the description, that's what I would have thought you where trying to create here, which isn't bad because I think the pokemon games do have some pretty decent town music, so yeah.

Other than what it sounds like, everything here is well played and comes together very well, it does make a good loop too which is what you indended, so that's good. Though it does seem to be a bit long for most loops, but for a game that wouldn't matter I guess, anyway, overall good work with this!

5/5

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sarias responds:

personally im glad you liked it but i disagree on the part where you say its too slow its nots supposed to be happy its supposed to be calm and kinda mysterious in a sense but you know theres somthing there, but all it is, is this little town in the middle of nowhere maby a farming community my little sister sees sheep when she listens to this but other then that im glad you liked it

[Soul Summon]

Odd

That's certain diffrent I must say, there isn't much here that is that good to listen too, it's far too muffled for my taste I have to say. The voice in this is pretty easy to hear at times, then not at other parts of this, though I'm guessing the point is to get the words into someones head in an attempt to get them to do something, lmao, no I don't quite get it.

The background is played okay but it's not that easy to hear much as I say this whole thing is kind of muffled. Not really too keen on the overall sound of this I have to say, so sorry. I mean, if you want to buy my soul, you could make the track a little more intresting, not just odd.

2/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Subliminal messaging..

Yes.

You will hear it in your dreams..

[Dont Listen To This Song!]

Okay

Well it has an okay sound to it even if it is somewhat messy through the whole thing, it also does sound like it lacks a lot to it as well though. To me this whole track sounds more like the background for another song, though parts of this do have more of a beat to them than just a background music type sound.

There's not much more I can say about this though, I mean I'm not too keen on this overall as a track, the sort of hissing sounds are kind of annoying, though it does have the sound of a dark and unplesent underground room which I guess you could say is a good thing, lol.

2/5

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Thanks.