Little-Rena's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Guitar - Modified]

Poor

The quality of this is very poor, I mean really, it's harsh to listen to, though the opening is the worst part, it does get a little more bareable though the song. Most of this though is very harsh to listen to, try to not make it so distored and it could actually turn out to be something good.

1/5

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Conal responds:

Eventually I'll make it good.

[Robot Sound Effect: 2]

Better

Well it's better than the first one, but not by much. This one does sound a little more like a robot than the last, but it's really harsh to listen to as a loop. The sound is pretty sharp and kind of harsh, I'm just glad I didn't turn it up. It would be much better if you had put this to an actual song or something longer, this just doesn't really sound too good on it's own.

1/5

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Conal responds:

Aww

[Robot Sound Effect: 1]

Not Good

This doesn't really have anything much too it, doesn't really sound like a robot, maybe if it was longer and had more sounds to it, then you could maybe say it's a robot effect. It sounds more like a factory than anything, I'd suggest making it longer and trying a little harder.

0/5

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Conal responds:

I DID MY BEST!!

[My Ideo of Hell]

Uh Okay

Well this sounds very loud that's for sure, it does in a way kind of work but it's very short, maybe if you looped it then it could be a little better but at the moment it just sounds very short. The moans in parts of this sound good and are quite fitting with the whole sound of this.

It sounds very fast too, it would be good if it was either longer or maybe looped better, but otherwise it's pretty decent work.

3/5

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Conal responds:

Short song?

[Why the Night p8]

Nice

It's always nice to hear a song in the audio portal that has lyrics, I also thought the voice sounded familer here and it does after looking at your audio list, I'll reviewed one of your others. Anyway, that aside, this one is very good, the distortion kind of works in this one, much better than it did in last one, so good job on that, the singing is also very good in this, good job with that.

The instruments are played very well in this and the length is good here, nice use of that, pretty standared amount of time I'd think but good all the same. The opening and the end are also very good, so are the breaks with no singing. Very nice work on this.

5/5

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LenardNotLenny responds:

Thanks a lot. The one thing that I believe that will improve this song, is to actually preform it with a real band. I think it would make it sound a lot more complete and finished. That's a lot for the support!

[Warp away]

So-So

It's alright in a way that it does kind of loop but the ending part to this doesn't sound like the rest of everything so it kind of lets it down in many ways. Though the main bit without the ending would make a good looping background if it was maybe a little softer. Also this is very short, so the uses seem to be limited.

2/5

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Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

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[Talking To Myself]

Eheh

Well the fuzziness really hurts the sound of this to me, it just sounds pretty bad in alot of parts because of that, maybe you should redo it a little more again because the background beat is ehh. The actually singing is pretty good though, that's clear and everything, fits in well and sounds good.

The ending part is alright too, minus the poor quality unless it's actually suppost to sound a bit metalic, lol. Overall it's a decent track but I think the quality is the only thing that hurts this, sorry.

2/5

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LenardNotLenny responds:

Well, yeah... the sad thing about this is that I purposely fucked up the quality on the drums and guitar, and I think it sounds cool, but it seems others have a different opinion. Thanks for your feedback.

[Man In the Smoking Mirror]

Great

This has a very nice sound to it, though the length makes it seem like it might be repetive through the track, I don't think it was in this case, which is nice although a little too long for my liking, lol. Though the actually sound to it was good and the opening was very nice, I'm not to keen on the piano playing with the drums and everything, that sounds kind of odd.

Most parts of this are very nice but there are some parts here that I think don't work, like the drums with the piano, but it's not too much of a problem. It seemed to slow down a little towards the end in a way, the kind of prelonged whistle sound at the end wasn't something I liked too much. Though it ended well and everything, good work.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Cheers for your review.
Yeah, the piano and drums are a bit of an odd combination, but I guess that's what appealed me to it, that weird clash of sounds was something I was aiming for. Yeah, I'm not terribly fond of the high whistling at the end, I turned it down a bit from when I first out it in there, but I guess it doesn't really have any dynamic input to the piece.

Thanks for the 5. I'm glad you like it.

[Vondelpark High]

Very Nice

This has a very nice beat to it, very easy to listen too, the opening though sounds like it's pretty much part the way through the song already but it's still good and the main part of the song is also very nice too, which is great. The changes in beats is good too, gives some diffrence in it.

The ending bit is good to, it plays down well, though there is a long pause at the very end, if you got rid of that, it would probably loop pretty well too. But otherwise some very good work here, nice one!

5/5

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JCsoul responds:

Thanks for your comments man.
I always leave a bit of silence at the end of my songs, so they crossfade nicely. But I´ll keep that in mind next time.

Really glad so many people are enjoying the song, it turned out better than me and Jurian had expected, so thanks to everyone that voted and reviewed this.

[In teh Dungeon]

Not Too Good

I don't really like the sound of this, it just really sounds too sharp most of the way through it and it doesn't really end in a way that it can loop too well. So you might want to work on the ending and the start to make sure they can both work as a loop.

I'd also suggest using instaments that are maybe a little softer and work well togther, not bad for a first try but maybe work at it a little more.

1/5

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cpukilla101 responds:

I understand where you're coming from I though its was crap at first but when I listened to it again and again I began to like it!