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[BlkAce: Mario Underground]

Hmm Alright

It's certainly a little diffrent but I can't say I really think it works, there are parts in this that sound reversed and they really don't sound very good reversed, some parts do, which is okay. Eventually it sounds to build into something much better to listen to but there are still parts of it that don't sound to good. Also after a while it starts to sound to crowded. Maybe don't keep as much in it, take bits out and add new bits to it.

You get to the ending part and its really pretter busy sounding, then you have the very end which fits the theme pretty well which is good. Overall it's not to bad but the more you add, the worse it seems to sound at one point and the reversing of some sounds isn't good as well as the main background slowly getting harder to hear.

2/5

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BlkAce responds:

thanks alot

i appreciate your honesty and you review!

will try harder and better next time!

[Perspiration]

Okay

It seems to loop pretty well so it works as a loop but there's something about it that doesn't quite agree with my ear, not sure what but after a while it gets a little plain. Maybe using this in something a little longer would make it sound a little better. As it is at the moment, it doesn't seem like there is a whole lot of use for it, it's very short and a little lacking in some parts, maybe some softer beats in this would be good.

It's not too bad, I just think it could be much better if it was a little longer and had a little more to it. There is part where it suddenly changes to something slow in a way and kind of obscure, didn't like that bit.

2/5

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ShortMonkey responds:

Hmmm not sure what you meant about going slow - I didn't change the tempo or anything... cheers

[Dewy Embers (Mo-Tech remix)]

Very Good

The length to this is good for a start, certainly a very long track but it really seems to make use of the time pretty well too, there are no major problems with the flow or repetertiveness that I can tell. It's pretty energetic too for most part and in a way it sounds a little slow in some parts, not a bad thing, infact I kind of like it that way, a lot of change and a good use of time.

Some of the effects are pretty nice to listen to as well, the constant background in one part that sounds like the brushing of somethign was nice, then slowing down and building into another tune was pretty good and worked very well. The way this changes from diffrent tunes is nice and works very well, changing into something that sounds like it already was.

The whole track here seems to be very good, everything fitting together pretty well and creating a very energetic peice for most part and slowing down in other parts. The ending was pretty intresting, kind of building down in a way, it did work well too. Very good work overall on this track.

5/5

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Mo-Tech responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Jxl180 - Heist]

Alright

Well there are parts to this which do sound very good but the change in tune in parts of this really seem to let it down a little, I don't think the transition of them really seems to work with this, a better way to fit them in might sound a little better and work better. Maybe not have such huge changes in songs through the whole thing, more a gradual change might sound better.

There are parts in this which do sound to be very well played which is good to hear but then there are parts that just seem to conflic with parts to. The first part sounds pretty good and everything, then the suddend change to a sound compleatly diffrent spoils it in my opinion.

3/5

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jxl180 responds:

Thanks for the review. I was kind of trying to get like a prgression you know. Where it starts slow and kind of soft. Progressively getting faster, hard, louder, etc. I think I probably came on to it too fast.

The reason why I sometimes use the same response as another review is because the reviewer pretty much had the same suggestions and stuff as a previous one, and I really like to respond to all review.

[+Astronaut's Waltz+]

Good

It has a very good tune to it but I seem to think that it takes a while to build up to a whole lot of anything right at the start. After a bit it seems to start building into a much better tune which is very good to hear and everything, though it does seem to sound a little repetertive in parts of this.

It does sound to be played very well, though I can't really hear a link to an astronaut in this, lol, so maybe some more spacy background to it. Unless it was suppost to be a little empty in that way, but otherwise it does seem to sound very good, nice calm tune to it so good job here.

5/5

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WritersBlock responds:

Thanks. Yeah, the astronaut was represented by the emptiness. I was originally going to try and get some sort of space transmission recording, but I scrapped that. The repetitiveness was all part of me trying to get the empty space feeling through, but a bit more variation probably would have been alright.
Thanks for your review.
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[Space Elevator (S.C.)]

Pretty Nice

Sounds like a pretty good song, the vocals in this are pretty good and clear through the whole song and fit to it very well. The whole beat in this is also very good and helps to fit in with it, though maybe it does get a little repetitive with the lyrics, but eh it still seems to sounds okay to me.

The ending is pretty intresting to, sounds very good though the ending vocals are kind of odd, sounds almost like it's suppost to screaming, not sure if that's what it's suppost to be. But otherwise yeah, very nice work on this.

5/5

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BreakingFaces responds:

Thank you very much!

[Wicked Spiral]

Intresting

This seems to be pretty intresting, though the main beat to this seems to get quite repetitive after a while, maybe it could do with a little more to it. It's not anything that sounds poor though, it does sound good and I thought the voice samples at a part of this where pretty nice too, though a few more of those in parts would have added some veriation to this I think anyway.

The sound is very good and everything is pretty decent, just a touch too repetitive and the ending seems to be a sudden end, unless it's ment to loop, in which case it does so pretty well, so pretty good work with this.

3/5

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CineGoryP responds:

Thanks for the <3 and the review :D

Adding voice samples could work, they just kind of disappear from the beginning. I was just experimenting with them to be honest since they usually just sound horrible in songs.

[Speedy Bass (Dubstep)]

Okay

The main intro sounded pretty good, almost like an intro on a radio station, but after that it went into a beat which did seem to be a little slow and repetitive after a while, something earlier on would have been pretty good. The lack of any vocals here might be the problem with it. After a while it did seem to change into something more which was pretty good to hear.

Nothing stands out as not sounding good, I mean as a whole it does really sound pretty good as a beat, but it could do with more to it in parts. It just sounds too sameish most of the way through the whole thing. Though there are bits of change through which is good. Not sure how you would work vocals into this too easily, but it might need it.

But otherwise, pretty nice work on it overall, just needs a little more adding in my opinion and some more veriation in parts, the ending part seems to pick up pretty well though, but then goes back to a sort of repetitive tune. Well good luck with it.

3/5

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Jimbobsthebest responds:

Thanks very much for the review. I think the general consensus with this is that it is simply too repetitive... even for a dubstep tune. The introduction was meant to be a bit of a piss take. With 'more club classics and more kicking dance tunes' followed by 'fuck that shit!'.

I'm really going to work on this beat of this when i've got the time, and i'm going to change the bass so that it varies throughout.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I much appreciate it.

[Solus- She]

Good Tune

It sounds to be played very well, a good overall sound to this one, I must say. It's not too loud but it has moments where it changes into something of a deeper tune which is pretty good and there is quite a lot of veriation to this so it definatly doesn't sound repetitive to me, so that's nice. There's nothing that stands out as being too much for this peice.

Everything seems to come together very well and the ending is done pretty well as is the opening, though the long silence right at the end might be a little too much, everything else here seems to work out very well, so good work overall on this peice.

5/5

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SolusLunes responds:

Glad you like it- and as always, your reviews are informative and helpful- notably the pause at the end, that I somehow overlooked, and will rightfully remove :D

[dolphin rescue squad]

Alright

It's not too bad, I mean it sound pretty nice and nothing sticks out as sounding bad, but in parts is just seems a little lacking and some parts also seem to be a little repatitive. But most parts sound pretty nice, pretty well put together, not really a relaxing tune as much of the parts seem to sound a little sharp, but that's okay.

Can't see what it really has to do with dolphins, but okay. It also seems to loop pretty well to, so that's good, can't really comment on how it ends, I missed it when it looped, lol. So pretty nice work on this one.

3/5

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spamwangler responds:

thanks for taking the time to review :)
i agree that it goes on too long with no change and the second half could probably be removed and replaced by something different... i think im gonna have another crack at this one, seeing as a few people are suggesting similar things about it.

and yeah, there really isnt much relation to dolphins musically. i usually just name songs after whatever is in my head at the time:)