Messy
This doesn't really sound to have any direction to it and just doesn't really sound all that great overall. The whole thing sounds out of tune and just thrown together randomly, the large pause at the end is also a waste of time, it doesn't make it loop all that well, just sounds really bad. You could remove the pause and try to make a loop out of this, if you wanted to.
You could really improve on everything here, there isn't really much here that is worth listerning to, the whole thing just sounds like a mess, you have a change early on which doesn't go smoothly and the ending is just too sudden, as well as this being far too short.
1/5
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