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[The Valley]

Nice work

The opening seems to be a little slow but it starts to build up, which is good, I think songs sound better when they start to slowly build up into something more, so that's good. Also everything at the beginning seems to fit together very well, nothing sounds out of place, though the piano seems to get pushed to the background in parts, but still stays which keeps a constant beat which is good.

Everything seems to sound upbeat and have quite a clam feeling to it, though it's a shame that the piano kind of dies out towards the end, though it does seem to end well, it could have looped if it ended on the piano. But other than the choice of ending that I wasn't keen on, everything else was very nice so good work overall.

5/5

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Jurian responds:

Thanks for the tips

[RofLmaOmfGtfOrly Mix#79;Blue42]

Hehe

That was pretty silly more than anything, I have to say though to me it did kind of work very well, the whole wide range of sounds and vocals was pretty intresting as was the whole tune to this, which is very good. It also seems to fit together pretty well too, though I do wish it had gone on a little longer, I kind of liked the way it was going, which is a shame it isn't longer.

The fact that it's so diffrent makes it pretty amazing how it seems to flow pretty well, so that's good work. Also, it seems to end pretty well which is good, also to me it did seem to loop, so pretty good job all round.

4/5

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MusicIsBliss responds:

thanks, yeah, i have tried adding more, but i am simply unable to, quite tragic really

[Beyond the Coast]

Pretty Nice

It has a very calm sound to it and seems to be very calm and quiet, which does sound very nice, nothing too wrong with that, though it does seem that the opening few parts seem to be a little lacking though it's nice that it changes a little more towards the two minutes, which is good and it still has that kind of calm sound to it, though it is a shame it isn't a little longer or build up a little sooner.

This could have gone on for much longer I feel, though doesn't really need to, I just think it would be a little nicer. Nothing stands out as being out of place, infact everything fits in very well and keeps to a kind of calm tune, which is good, nice work overall.

4/5

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Suspended-3rd-Chord responds:

hey thanks! well the opening is pretty minimalstic, I just wanted to start off simple and easy with one instrument, and use some more complex chords that are effective in the background (well I atleast thought so) and then bring in more instruments. I think it built up fine, but I do agree that it could be longer, especially the more epic part around 2:00, but I personally couldnt put more in without essentially destroying the mood that I was going for. maybe i'll be able to improve this in due time :P well I appreciate that you still think this is a good tune.

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[Move On*]

Good Tune

It has a very nice beat to it and it seems to be a very nice length to, which is pretty good. Seems to fit together very well and builds up well too, which is a good thing and I really like the way the instruments are played, although you can hear a bit of a fuzzy sound in parts of this which seems to let it down a little, not sure if it's some notes playing a bit loud or what but maybe look into that.

The sound of a wind insrument towards the end part in the three minutes played, seems to be a little odd with the rest, though it does seem to kind of fit in with the quietness around that area. The whole ending part seems to slow down and not be quite as energetic which seems to work. Nothing really stikes me as sounding bad here other than the fuzzy sounds.

5/5

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[Stages of Death]

Soft

Well the ending is something that gets me, it just seems to be very sudden like it just cuts off, you might want to fade it out or something like that, just so it's not as sudden, would seem much better if you did, in my opinion anyway. But aside from that, the main tune seems to be very soft and calm, though a little too quiet in a way. Not a bad sound overall, but seems to lack a lot of veriation.

I do like calm tunes personally, so parts of this do seem to be good, though there are some parts where you have a kind of muffled sound over the beats, which seems to be kind of annoying. The main thing I would suggest improving is the ending though, but otherwise pretty nice.

3/5

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TheReno responds:

Thanks alot. Im glad you got that I was going for a soft tune. Thanks for your review

[midnight party]

Alright

It seems to be very much the same sort of beat all the way through the song, or simler, not too much change though it does sound okay and does pretty much work in a way. Also this seems to loop very well, which is a plus, so good job on the looping part, it does also sound to end well, so that transition is good.

Though a lot more to this might have been good to hear, it wasn't too bad on a whole, so pretty good job on this one. But the looping is the best thing about it.

3/5

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aldlv responds:

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nice review
I'm glad you like how it loop

[.:When I Come Back:.]

Pretty Good

The opening is very nice, seems to build up pretty slowly which is good, the main part of the tune seems to be very nice to, very calm to listen to and quite a lot happens within the main part of the song. The ending is pretty good to, though it ends past where it has been pretty busy with the main song, so that might seem a little odd.

Everything in this song seems to come together pretty well which is good to hear, I can't spot anything that really sticks out as not fitting in with this, though it is a shame it isn't a little longer, I think it could have ended a little slower, much like it started.

4/5

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[Electrified Snake]

Okay

It has some parts to this which sound very good, the opening and part the way through are pretty nice, but then there are parts in this tune that seem to be a little distorted and doen't really seem to sound too good in my opinion. Although most of it does come together very well and works too, I can't get over the distorted parts.

The ending part to this song is also done in a pretty good way too which is nice, doesn't loop but that's not really a problem. Overall it's pretty decent but it would be better without the distorted parts to it.

3/5

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Assios responds:

Thanks. Glad you liked the opening and ending, and thanks for helping. ;)

[Last Days of Summer =WB]

Very Long

Well the first thing I must say is that this is a very long track, one of the longest I have probably seen here, so it's intresting to hear everything that goes on in this track. It seems to be pretty diffrent through most part of it which is good, you have a constant sound for a long point which seems to pass through left and right speakers, of course I have headphones on, so it might be a little more noticable to me, but it sounds nice, tickles my ears, lmao.

At parts it disapears to change to something else, the way that changes is done pretty well, then there is the part where it goes on and off while spaning, which is very good. I can hear something like an audiance cheering in the background at parts too, not sure if that's what it is but that certainly fits into the whole track too.

Although I can't really say it reminds me much about summer, you could explain that to me if you want, lol. Though it is very upbeat, something summer isn't to me, I hate summer, too hot, but that aside. The whole tune is very upbeat and very easy to listen too as well as being mostly diffrent though many aspecs through the tune seem to repeat in a way but the way it changes kind of makes you forget that you've heard it earlier.

The ending to this is also very good, I wasn't expecting a loop here, so that's good, lmao. Overall it's very long, but well worth the time to listen too all the way through, this is arguably one of the best tracks I have heard in the audio portal for a long while, great work.

7/5

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WritersBlock responds:

OMG thanks for the nice review! Yeah, that's a crowd in there. The way the panning worked was a new technique I learned, and I really like the sound of the bass entirely at one end of the headphones, but quite a few people don't like it, so I'll probably tweak it around a bit, but essentially keep it there in some parts. I kind of pictured this as summer, because, being an Australian, our typical summer is going to the beach often, lots of fun and activity, and the flute/wind sound has a nostalgic sound to it, in which it's like looking back on those times as a fun, energetic experience.
Overall, thanks for the compliments.
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