Alright
I'm not too keen on the opening part of this because it does sound a little muffled to me though it does improve as it gets into it which is great to hear so good work on that. The sound is very calm and somewhat relaxing too you could say, I like that in a song, eventhough later it builds into something fast paced, it's no longer calm but quite hectic but still sounds great.
The fast paced part is probably my favourite part to this, it built into it very well, though it didn't come out of it too well, it just sounded very abrupt so that kind of let it down for me, then you have another fast paced part, diffrent sounding this time, still okay.
Overall though, this tune sounds very mismatch, like sticking diffrent tunes to get a result but not really going in any direction. Everything but the muffled opening sounds to be played well and the length is good, I just think you need to have more dicrection.
4/5
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