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Alright

I'm not too keen on the opening part of this because it does sound a little muffled to me though it does improve as it gets into it which is great to hear so good work on that. The sound is very calm and somewhat relaxing too you could say, I like that in a song, eventhough later it builds into something fast paced, it's no longer calm but quite hectic but still sounds great.

The fast paced part is probably my favourite part to this, it built into it very well, though it didn't come out of it too well, it just sounded very abrupt so that kind of let it down for me, then you have another fast paced part, diffrent sounding this time, still okay.

Overall though, this tune sounds very mismatch, like sticking diffrent tunes to get a result but not really going in any direction. Everything but the muffled opening sounds to be played well and the length is good, I just think you need to have more dicrection.

4/5

<3

Nice

I think this is pretty nice, the opening was good although when it changed I thought it was going to open into something faster or louder so that was quite misleading for me, lol. The whole song sound pretty calm and mysterious, sort of sounds like a jungle like song which is pretty neat I have to say, it almost reminds me of the Civilization games.

Although it did seem to end quite suddenly, no build up to the ending or build down in the same way that it opened, so that was quite disapointing, maybe work on a better ending. But other than that, I really liked this, it has a very calm background sound to it so good work.

5/5

<3

race1 responds:

Hm I see... well I'd like to work on it more but some things happened so this is the final version as of right now.... sorry.

thank you for listening though.

lol

The lyrics to this are pretty amusing that's for sure, although didn't make a whole lot of sense but that isn't the point of this is it. Anyway, it sounds pretty good, the background tune sure worked very well with the singing and that was all done pretty well, the ending was good to the way it slowed down, so good job on that part.

One part I wasn't too keen on was the repertition of the lyrics later on in the song, it just started to sound a bit plain, but I guess since it's so short, it doesn't make much of a diffrent. But more varied lyrics in the second part would have been nice, but good overall.

5/5

<3

TheBardOfBlasphemy responds:

cool, thanks... glad you liked it.

i know what you mean about the repetition... any longer and it would be shit. as it is, i get a little bored playing that second chorus-thingy if i'm strumming.... but hey, whatever! time to make a new one!

thanks again :D

Great!

I think is good, although some of the parts of this sound a little sharp, but I do like this tune, it was one of my favourite from the game, I do think if the pitch was a little lower it could have sounded a bit nicer. But otherwise it does sound like you have recreated this pretty well, it does come together very well on the whole which is nice.

I have no other problems with this other that it sounding a little harsh due to the pitch of this. Everything else here is good though, it even sounds like it loops very well, which is certainly very good to hear. So overall I have to say, good work on making this.

5/5

<3

Alright

It's not a bad tune overall, in a way I kind of like it but there's something about it I'm not too keen on. Maybe a lack of a more constant background, maybe have something soft and quiet in the background that isn't too noticible, just to keep a constant tune going there because some of the beats sound a little hard, so I think that might help in a way.

Everything else other than that sounds good to me, it does all come together well ans there is a sound in there that sounds like ships taking off, I thought that sounded pretty good, so nice work on that. Overall, no major problems other than the first mentioned, the opening and ending are both good.

4/5

<3

Intresting

I have to say, this is a pretty intresting tune to say the least, the intro to this is very good and much of the tune itself all the way through sounds pretty good to me as well, some of the effects are nice. Though it can seem to be a little repetitive after a while, it's not too bad in that sense, it still does work pretty well afterall, just could do with a little more veriation.

The ending is also done pretty well I think, though remove some of the silent part at the end and you could probably get it to loop, that is you want it to loop anyway. It does sound good as it is though, the opening part has some sounds that sound like packets being crushed in a way, I liked that sound. Good job overall all the same.

4/5

<3

Stong

The beat to this sounds very strong to me, which is good and it really does work well with this whole tune, which is great to hear. Nothing sounds bad about this, it really does sound like a kind of old militery battle like tune, I think that sound pretty intresting anyway. Everything fits in perfectly through the whole song, so that's very good.

I'm not too keen on the way it loops though, at the end it seems to end odd and since it starts with a kind of choir there, it just seems to be a bit mixed up and doesn't really flow for me, you might want to work on that. Otherwise though, I think everything else here sounds very good, nice work.

4/5

<3

DavidOrr responds:

Making something loop smoothly has always been something I strive for- I hate it when something just ENDS and then starts over. I look at it as a game, always trying to find new ways to make it work.

Personally, I think it works pretty well. I definitely hear what you're saying though- If I had put in choirs before the loop ended it would help the flow better. Thanks for the review, 4/5 is still a pretty good marking if you ask me!

Great Work

This loops very well which is obviously a good thing to have in a loop, lol as well as being very plesent to listen to makes it very good for a menu, it doesn't sound too harsh so it's not distracting. The whole thing comes together very well, the beats are very good, though the last beat is kind of eh, it loops pretty well but does seem a little off in my view.

Everything else is good, it's not repetitive on the first run through the whole tune, which is good so I have no problems with that or the overall sound of this. It is all played good and the effects are good through this, a decent volume and good quality, nice work overall, very fitting for a menu.

5/5

<3

Intresting

It's a very good tune and has some nice voice clips to it, I think those really work well with everything here, sounds good in that sense, not too keen on the overall opening of this though, it seems to build up a little slow for my liking. The main body of this is very good to hear, although somewhat sameish through parts it doesn't sound too repetitive.

The transition to other beats is really good to, some of the effects I think are really good here, they sound very good such as around three minutes in, that's one of my favourite parts about this, the way you fit the voice clips into that was good too, nice work there.

I think the slowing down part around the four minute part was pretty intresting, then starting to build up into something more, that was pretty good in my view. So much in the track, it's kind of hard to remember how it started the further you get through it. Which in a way is very good, each segment of this seems to have it's own start and ending yet all fit together very well.

Overall I have to say this is really very good, although I wasn't too fond on the very start of this, I really started to like the rest of this, so that really made up for it to me. You had a very good ending to this as well, which was nice to hear, good job overall.

5/5

<3

PERVOK responds:

Thanks for the indepth review, it's really appreciated :D I personally really liked the intro though; sorry you didn't like it :(

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