Little-Rena's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SSBB: Pit's Wii Remote]

Hmm

I'm not really too keen on this, it seems really too short and the joke doesn't seem to be all the funny, I mean I get it but then you have two things left on the field so it doesn't make any sense. You could have expanded the joke a little or something, or maybe I would have to have played the game to really get the joke.

The graphics are okay though they look a little off in parts, like a little wonky but none the less, still pretty decent. The sound and voice acting isn't too bad on the whole, it's all pretty clear and everything, which is always good to hear. Not much more I can say about this, as it's a bit short so yeah, could be much longer but not too bad overall.

3/5

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[Star Fox: Loopy Battle]

Not Too Bad

Well the graphics whern't too bad although they did look traced, they did also look like they lacked a bit of charactor to them. The voice acting was very clear and everything which was good and you had subtitles to them which fit in with the whole flash as well as being easy to read, though parts of the voice acting could be improved like the part where he said "Whoa", that sounded to lack charactor.

The animation was okay but some parts just seemed a little off, like the looping movement of the ships, seemed to kind of jerk in a way. But most parts of the animation seemed to be okay and the mouth movment was pretty decent but it did need more work on facial expressions, they just looked expressionless.

3/5

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MCYoshi responds:

The reason my work sometimes looks as though it's traced is I always use a picture of a character as reference and basically draw that character in that exact pose. That way I have proportions correct, etc. Usually I'll then draw heads and other things at the different angles that are necessary for the animation. This takes a long time to draw in flash however. Fox's complete body took over two hours in just the one pose, so I usually try to go for the least amount of drawings as possible.
Yes, there wasn't too much going on with facial expressions mainly to save time. I was trying to get this done in a week, ended up taking a little bit longer.
I guess I can see a 3/5 score for someone who's not a fan of Star Fox or even Nintendo general, though that is the audience this movie was made for so not too much I can change there. My next project however is for a much larger audience so maybe you would enjoy that. Anyway thanks for the review.

[Businessman Blues]

Nice Job

I know this flash was pretty short but that doesn't matter, it's still funny, making it longer would probably have killed this flash. The joke at the end of this was unexpected just from viewing this from the start and it is kind of funny as is the joke at the start. Though the joke with the file was more obvious than the final one you have here.

The artwork here was also very well done and some pretty good animation too, good sound and everything was clear. I have no problems with this flash, it seems everything is done well. Really good work overall, especilly considering the length of this flash.

5/5

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boinky33 responds:

SILENCE! I don't remember requesting your opinion on this matter.

[The Dot of Excellence 2]

Pointless

I'm guessing the point of this is to get low reviews or something along those lines becuase the flash itself doesn't have a point to it. This is just some still pictures slaped onto a stage with some badly looping music, sure if it looped better it might be a little better but still, wouldn't be much of a flash.

The quality of the pictures is pretty bad, small too so kind of pointless and the audio is also pretty bad quality too, doesn't loop well and everything but you know all this I'm guessing. Do something more productive if you want to use the pictures, make a quiz with them or something, just something with some entertainment value.

0/5

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Wegra responds:

Tis okay. You're just being honest

[The Dot of Excellence]

Spam Much

There is music here and one gif that moves, the others are just still, the images are poor quality and there is pretty much no effort put into this flash. I mean, you could atleast do something, I don't mind watching spam if it is atleast funny, but this has no entertainment value, the music quality isn't even that great, it's just really bad.

Granted you have animation and such but really, there's nothing worth watching in this flash, it doesn't take long to load, so it's not a huge waste of my time. Though it probably took longer to make than it did for me to load this, lmao. Actually put some effort into well, something.

0/5

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[SF Series Episode 1]

Hmm, Okay

Noot too bad but don't have tweened text on the preloader screen, it looks a little lame and gives a bad first impression, by all means put text but present it well. The menu seems to be presented well which is good, well most of it anyway and the buttons work fine too, so that's good. As with the flash itself, I'm not a huge fan of sprites but it's okay, the opening scene is a little crowded with sprites though.

The sound effects and music are all decent quality and easy to hear, so that's definatly a good point about this. I will also say that much of the sprite animation is pretty decent too, though some parts it does seem a little odd, but for most part it's good. But at the main fight at the end, you have them starting to fight then saying 'Round 1' after a bit of fighting, I didn't quite get that.

3/5

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mortis5000 responds:

they were warming up...then when they powered up then thats when the real fight started

[The Pirate Collab]

Intresting

It was a pretty decent collab, the menu was good and the mini game at the start where both quite intresting to see and somewhat diffrent too. The actual collab itself did have many good parts and the music fit the theme, but I have to say the one thing I am most disappointed about is the lack of humours parts, much of it seems to be violance or violance related humour, not that it's a bad thing for those who like it, just I'm not keen on it.

No real problems with the parts themselfs though, I did like the ones that didn't revolve around just violance better though, lol. You might also want to hide the custom arrow from the actual flash, it gets in the way, the ending replay part was pretty diffrent to, so that was nice, good work overall.

5/5

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Bertn responds:

Thanks for the wonderful review. :3

[Please help me!]

Good Start

Well it's a good start, I will say that but it is lacking quite a bit too, the idea and the base for everything is there, which is good, though you might want his arms to be at his side when he's not using them as oppost to being at an angle. Much of the animation is pretty okay, some parts could be better but nothing too bad in that sense and the music is easy to hear.

I would suggest having some backgrounds and even colour or just have shades of black/grey/white if you want to do it that way. Like I say, it's a start and it seems like there is a base here, but you could do so much more to make it look better. The subtitles are okay but they could be improved too, just have a grey bar along the bottom at something like 50% Opacity and put the text over that.

2/5

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flixing responds:

Ok!

[The Music Video Collab]

Alright

It was a pretty decent collab, I mean there where some good parts as well as some not so good parts, though none of them where really bad. I was glad this had a menu too, though the bio thing could have been payed out a little better, each bit seemed to have diffrent colour text and wasn't too consistant, I wasn't too keen on that presentation wise.

But overall, I think this is a decent collab with it's good parts, although the idea could do with tweeking, I mean having diffrent bits of songs is okay if you can get them to work well one after the other, this just seemed like they where random and didn't really have much flow in my view. Otherwise though, prettey decent as I say.

4/5

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[Dragonball Z Episode 2]

Needs Work

This needs much work doing to it, for a start having voice actors to do the speaking would be much better than having the text for them, that and the text doesn't seem to be presented too well, have it in a speech bubble or something, it would look better that way.

Also, the use of sprites and drawn backgrounds, pick one or the other, this doesn't really work here, if you improve your drawing then it might work but right now, it doesn't. I'd suggest just drawing everything and not using sprites to be honest, it might be harder but eventually it could look much better. The audio is okay though, but everything else needs work.

2/5

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