Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: Resident Merchant

date: May 7, 2008

Alright well this was pretty good, decent graphics and kind of funny, though the door sound effect sounded a bit poor in terms of quality, might want a better effect or something, not sure what you want to do about that. Eitherway, the main graphics where good and the animation also seemed good, expect some parts where it just seemed to go weird, lol.

The joke at the end was done pretty well, but eh I don't know, it seemed to take too long to get to it. Voice acting was good and the quality of that sound was also good, just the door effect I didn't like, but otherwise, good work.

4/5

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Score: 4

"Not Good"

submission: Windows Viesta 3

date: May 7, 2008

There are a lot of Windows games out there, you really should come up with some ideas that are unique to this, that would make it much more enjoyable. Use a bigger stage size and smaller icons, you can get more in that way, also try to add games to it and more to do, I found most of the jokes to be pretty dull and not really even smile worthy.

The content is lacking, the replay value is lacking even more, there's no point updating this one flash, you should just start from scratch with better ideas. You have some decent images, I can't see anything wrong with the looks other than being too big, just seems a tad boring is all.

2/5

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Score: 6

"Lacking"

submission: The Beelion

date: May 7, 2008

This is certainly very lacking, there is some good work to it but the main opening part seems to go on for too long, the script for that is good but the background doesn't seem to change much, so it gets kind of boring to watch, some more background would be good, some changes to it.

The other part to it seems to be done okay though some work on the bees face would have been better, the sound was okay though I think the voices could have had more to them, they sounded kind of timid more than anything.

2/5

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Score: 6

"Intresting"

submission: NSG014: ASFree

date: May 1, 2008

Thought I wouldn't say this is without actionsctipt because you use actionscript in the buttons don't you? So yeah, it doesn't seem to be totally without it, though trying to follow a long line that's narrow seems to be pretty hard to do, maybe something a little easier to start and harder as it goes in.

The game itself is pretty intresting, though not really the most exciting game to play, more than just holding and draging to get to somewhere would have been nice, clues to where it is too, like riddles and such. Maybe a little more actionscript would be needed than just buttons but yeah. Also maybe show a timer for it, would help, lol.

3/5

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Score: 7

"Alright"

submission: News Reporter V

date: May 1, 2008

One thing, you said "re-hire" in the subtitles but the voice said "hire", just thought I would point that out to start with. Other than that, you seemed to have an okay story for most part, though a little eh at times, but pretty good. The voice acting could still be improved a little, for Omega anyway, sounds like he's breathing into the mic, which doesn't sound too good.

The graphics and animation could still be improved, Omega looked almost the same as News Reporter, lol. A few more details in part and such, the sound effects where good and the ending was pretty good too.

3/5

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Score: 3

"Not Good"

submission: All Your Leet

date: May 1, 2008

To start with I have to say, the sound quality is pretty poor here, it sounds like you have recorded it from the speakers, so you might want to work on that. Another is the animations and graphics are all out of proportion, they don't stay in the screen, you might also want to work on that really. The graphics and animation could also be better, the images used at the end could be bigger too, way too small.

As for the song, you have the subtitles that don't match the song in parts, I get that you are changing it to 1337 but maybe you could have gotten someone to redo the song to be based around that, it would have sounded much better. Overall, much more work could be done to improve this.

1/5

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Score: 2

"Is That It?"

submission: Happy Pico Day 2008!!

date: April 30, 2008

You haven't really put much time into this flash from the looks of it, you have the image of Pico Day 2008 which is with the preloader just getting bigger and you've added some text. Sure it's a simple message but there isn't a whole lot more with this flash that is worth watching. The sound is good, so yeah, some points for your choice of music, lol.

Really, this is lacking everything, I was kind of expecting some real animation, not just an intro to some text. Try to add some animation to this, something that the viewer can watch and enjoy. A storyline would have been a start, note down some ideas on what you can do then try and animate it.

0/5

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Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: TANKMEN: day of lead

date: April 30, 2008

I thought this was a pretty good entry, although at times it seemed to be a bit of a what moment and text on walls might have looked better in a messy font with some effects over it, just too look more the part. The lack of voices was okay, you seemed to do it well without them, so that was good.

Much of the animation was okay and it wasn't just random fighting through the whole thing, good. Also, quite a bit of humour to this, some of it was funny, others maybe just a smile, but still good work in that area too. The scene where they are drinking tea was probably one of the better parts I thought, lol.

4/5

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Score: 9

"Intresting"

submission: Pokemon Bahamut Version

date: April 26, 2008

I watched this a while back when you submitted it, was going to review it then but I expected that you where going to submit it to the review request club, your predicatable tactic makes you weak on the battlefield, lol.

That aside, the introduction on this was done pretty well, opened up with the whole pokemon theme and the music was good too, the menu here was also done very well, looked much like a pokemon menu, so good work with that. The whole thing kept with the pokemon game just with voice acting added, I liked the black and white style too at the start, brings back memories of the original Gameboy.

When it changed into colour, the diolog box didn't have a colour border, I would have advised to do that. The cheat screen part was done very well and then the part after that with a glitch and all. Though it might have been funny to use Missingno for that scene then a glitch, but either way that was done well.

Too bad Hitler will beat you too it in a fair manner. Also, this is probably one of your better flashes I have seen, good work on this, it had a much better plot to it than some others.

5/5

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Score: 7

"Alright Then"

submission: Edgar N' Locke 06

date: April 26, 2008

Didn't really see much story to this, could have done with a little more going on, the voice acting was okay though and everything, the sprites seemed to be fine too but not much in the way of animation. Diolog box and the text, very clear to read, which is good, so again, no problems with that.

The new feature might be good to some people who want to listen to it, but maybe not to others, I tried it just to see, so okay it's done pretty well, not being forced on the viewer at the credits which is good to see and some details about it, so good job with that.

3/5

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