Score: 10

"Very Intresting"

submission: The Apex Neurotic Society

date: May 16, 2008

That was really wite intresting, the preloader was very good and much of the artwork was very good, the backwads messages also seemed to be quite clever and a lot of the other messages in this flash, which is very good. Though some of the text seemed to fade too quick, I didn't have chance to read them, so maybe fade in a next button as oppose to fading the text out.

I didn't like parts where it just faded to white though, on the artsy parts, that kind of let it down to me, but I think that only happend once. Other than that though, everything seemed to work well and much of the animation was pretty clever in its own right.

5/5

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Score: 6

"So-So"

submission: Brawl Taunts

date: May 11, 2008

The voice acting here was really good and so where some of the sound effects, good work on those. But I think that the preloader was very messy, didn't give a good first impression then onto the main part of the flash with the graphics, some of them are good but others look a little sloppy and the lack of backgrounds also put me off in this, white is not the best colour to keep looking at.

The jokes where kind of eh too, no laughs from this, maybe a few smiles but nothing really too funny. So some of those could be improved, it would be nice to add some backgrounds and have a decent preloader for this, also a decent intro and credit screen, very minimalistic. Didn't enjoy this, sorry.

3/5

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Score: 7

"Alright"

submission: NSG015: Apples & Bananas

date: May 9, 2008

It's kind of a silly game but it seems to have been done pretty well, though some of them are kind of hard to work out but often the texture gives it away, I can tell them appart but time limits cause silly mistakes. Randomising the images would be a pretty good idea too, that would mean that you could memorise what they are, lol. The message at the end is also pretty funny and the verious other messages.

The music was okay, though after a while it did become a little eh, it was good for a bit though, maybe a mute button or something, not to say it's bad but when you want to play over and over to see how you can do, it does get boring to listen to. But overall, a pretty decent game.

4/5

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Score: 4

"Uhh Okay"

submission: LoZ:A Link to the Future

date: May 9, 2008

Well there are som obvious improvments that could be made with this, such as the sprite moving into a run animation sprite when you move it, also there is far too much empty space, use less area or more items around. The people you talk to need the crash actionscript too so you can't just walk through them, that and you need to hide the right click menu.

The idea is okay and some of the things you have it are also good, you just have a lot of things that need fixing, the yellow gate looks kind of silly too, you might want an actual gate sprite or something for that, it would make it look a little better. Keep working at it though.

2/5

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Score: 3

"Boring"

submission: CRSHR 2: Sunset Racer

date: May 9, 2008

This game isn't all that exciting to play, the drawing of the car isn't very good and nither are the things you crash into either. The movement of the car side to side is also pretty slow so it's kind of tedious to play, I would increase the speed of that a little. The things you crash into aren't random so all you have to do is remember where they where and you can pretty much win easily.

You also have writting on parts which is poorly written and not set out all that well either, spell words properly and find a nice way to lay them out also improve on the graphics, a stick with triangles of blue around doesn't remind me of a crash.

1/5

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Score: 9

"Pretty Good"

submission: Forklift Kid

date: May 9, 2008

Pretty good game here, though I would maybe change the look of the timer, it seems to look a little ugly to me just being a number at the top of the screen, maybe put a nice box around it or something, just to improve it a little. It's kind of easy to get stuck infront of the forklift too, maybe you could allow to enter from the front as well as the back.

The graphics are good and the animation here seems to have been done well, so good work on both of those points. The game is also quite fun to play, so yeah, I like the rank for the time it took at the end to, that was good. So overall, very nice work here.

5/5

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Score: 5

"Needs Work"

submission: Windows XYZ

date: May 7, 2008

There's nothing really too new about this that seperates it from other Windows flash like this, that and this one has a few problems with it. Such as the paint program you put into this, it allows you to draw on the desktop, which might need fixing. Also, while allowing the users to move windows around, it can cause the window to get stuck to the cursor so you have to close the game.

The icons have a weird white pixilated area around them, that might need fixing, maybe draw your own icons. The start menu seems to be badly layed out too, which isn't good, look wise this needs work, some of the jokes are fine but it would be nice to see some more activity.

2/5

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Score: 8

"Intresting"

submission: A Thousand Frames

date: May 7, 2008

Well first thing I have to say is the music you picked didn't sound too loop very well, though the animation did seem to work in a way with it, I would have picked some music that looped better or something that lasted through the whole timeline. Other than that though it seems to come together pretty well, so good work there.

Some parts had some good detail and others seemed to lack, so a little inconsistant, I did like the way the scenes changed though, that was done well and most other parts in this where also done well, so good job overall here.

4/5

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Score: 8

"Okay"

submission: A Thousand Two Frames

date: May 7, 2008

That seemed to kind of work, although it lacked much direction to it, most of the animation seemed to be done very well and such, though nothing really stood out to me in this, maybe because of the lack of direction. Some of the parts seemed to not really look too good but others seemed to be done very well.

It would be good to see you take this another step further and do something that has a plot to it in someway, could keep the kind of random touch to it, just add some direction. Might not even need voices if you do it right, but otherwise, pretty good work on this.

3/5

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Score: 2

"What?"

submission: Pico VS Anonymous

date: May 7, 2008

That was really short and didn't really have any humour to it, the drawing I could get over if it was longer and funnier but this short is nothing more than well, a short. The sound is okay, so I'll give you some credit for that, but there isn't anything else here that's really great.

You could have made a funnier short or something, more than just a one liner followed by some shooting, that doesn't quite make it funny. Use your imagination. Not much else I can really say about this.

1/5

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