Score: 10

"Hehe"

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6

date: July 4, 2008

That was pretty ammusing, the style of the drawing here doesn't seem to change much, pretty low detail charators but that's okay, it does work in a way, though kind of odd how they don't have arms. Anyway, the flash itself is pretty good and everything, decent animation for most part, even if a little simple in looks, lol. The sound effects are good and the voice acting is also good too.

I did like the plot here, it's kind of simple yet unexpected, the whole thing does seem to work though and well I must say. At first it just seemed like something silly, then you have an explosion, lol. So yeah, overall, there is nothing wrong with this and on top of that, I do like this episode more so than previous ones, good work.

5/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 7

"Private Messages"

submission: Bahamut's Favourite PMs

date: July 4, 2008

Are suppost to be private, lolol. But all the same, I lack getting stupid messages from people, I've had a few but yeah, some of those where silly, I would have picked more supid ones if I where you though. As for a gallary at the end, that would have been much better to see in my view, might be annoying to make but could have been more intresting for the viewer.

The idea is okay, as with the idea for the reviews, but I don't think this one was as good, I mean it did lack a bit of humour in comparison to the review one, more stupid PMs could have fixed that. I'd also like to say that your mouse is almost as big as the sprite, lmao. But pretty good, just needs more.

3/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 7

"Okay"

submission: Delayed Radar

date: June 28, 2008

It's not too bad overall, but I must say it is kind of annoying, you could have an easier way of finding the orbs because it gets a little tedious in my view to hunt around the screen with a clumsy big circle to try to find them and then shoot. So you might want to work on that for a start off. The menu looked pretty nice which was okay and the sound for that was good.

The main game I noticed did lack sounds, you could have had a few sound effects in this like shooting and such. I would also suggest a diffrent concept to the game, shooting yellow balls to me just seems a little boring, maybe use the code here and expand a little, like maybe shooting ships from a sub, that could be much more intresting.

2/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 2

"More Work Needed"

submission: Wegra Adventure 3

date: June 28, 2008

This really needs much more work, there isn't really much animation, though you do have some here and the graphics aren't really all that great. I mean sure it could be good if you had a much funnier plot to it, but this really seemed like you where trying a little too hard to do something random, but didn't really come out too well, the voice could have been better, this was too deep, slow and hard to hear.

It was also bad how you didn't draw a whole lot in many parts of this, or you drew something that wasn't really related too well, you should make things somewhat relevent and draw all the way if you are going to do something. I mean, if you are too lazy to draw, take up something like sprites or something, lol. Overall, much work is needed.

1/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 10

"I Loved It"

submission: Best present ever

date: June 27, 2008

Such an amazing flash, so much more like a cartoon that anything, one of the best things I have seen in a while too, I really loved the story and everything. It was very amusing and all, good voice acting and amazing characters, reminds me of the cartoons I used to watch when I was younger, the legs with no tops are very Cow&Chicken looking, lol. The music was amazing and fit very well as with all the sound effects, good ending too.

I can't see any problems with this, other than being a little grainy at parts but yeah, I guess compression does that, lol. Great animation and drawings, worked very well, so overall I have no problems with this, none that show that's for sure. Very good work, definatly one of my favourites now :3

5/5

<3

Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: Panda ESCAPE

date: June 25, 2008

I thought this was pretty good, I mean the graphics here seemed to be good and everything was drawn pretty well, so no problems with that and much of the animation was also good, excpet for the newspaper spin, I belive that could have been a little fasted. Also with the newspaper, you should have used a simple font like Arial to give it more of a newspaper type look.

I also have a slight problem with the music changes, I mean the music was good and fit the parts it was going to but the changes for them seemed too sudden and I also belive you could have had some sound effects here too, that would have been good to hear. But otherwise, good work on the animation and the story here.

4/5

<3

Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: The 5 Hour Collab II

date: June 20, 2008

There where some pretty decent parts in this as well as some that wheren't so good but I don't think I would go as far to say any of these where terrible, I mean they where all okay. The audio was good but I don't really think it fit to well since many of the parts seemed to be more happy and the song was kind of sad in a way, so yeah, didn't think that worked too well.

The whole flow of the collab seemed to work, no problems with that I mean they where put together very well it seems and no real problems there, a nice menu and a good ending too. Though the intro seemed like it went stright into the flash but it didn't, so that was good, pretty nice work overall.

3/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 6

"Alright?"

submission: Movement1 - chippy

date: June 20, 2008

I don't really know what to say about this, I mean it does seem like a time consuming project you have here and the first part did seem to work but after the photos at the traffic lights, it just seemed to go wrong in a way, moved too fast and couldn't really see what was after the traffic lights too clearly, that was the worst part to this.

The idea itself is kind of diffrent and kind of good in a sense but really needs a little more work, more photos for parts maybe? Or not have it going as fast but fast enough to seem like it is moving. The audio was okay, dunno why you picked it to represent this but it did work fine, so okay. Overall a decent idea, just needs work.

2/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 2

"Worse"

submission: Wegra Adventure 2

date: June 19, 2008

This was actually worse than the first one, it wasn't as long for one thing and nothing really improved here, the graphics are still pretty bad and there is very little animation, it would be good to improve on both of those. The plot here well there was no plot but I mean the whole what of a story you had didn't really work, seemed more like you rushed the idea rather than thought about it, needs more work with a story.

The fast narration is okay, I think that does make for a good fast paced story, but there isn't really anything else here that is all that good. Everything needs working on, the story, the graphics and the length of the whole thing, think about a solid or funny plot and try that, spend longer on it.

1/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

Score: 3

"Umm What?"

submission: Wegra Adventures

date: June 19, 2008

Well it might have been an okay idea but kind of lacking in graphics and everything, there was little animation if any, I mean I didn't notice any, so it would have been good to have some. The graphics, okay I mean I don't mind them being bad, they did kind of work with the fast pace of the stroy and everything, but they did kind of lack in a party.

The whole narration was okay, kind of fast but that pace was good and did work with the whole thing. The only thing that let it down really was the whole story, it didn't seem to make a whole lot of sense, if any as well as much of the humour in this not really being all that funny. Good idea but didn't really come out too well in my view.

1/5

<3

= Review Request Club =